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Posted: 12 years ago
๐Ÿ˜Honeymoon trip continution

Next day morning/Khoobsurat shyam ke baad..ek nayi subha๐Ÿ˜...
Dakshna room

Dakshna still on bed.Naina gets up,streches her arms lazily and looks at her loving hubby still deep in sleep.gives a cute smile.๐Ÿ˜›Plants  a kiss on his fore head.๐Ÿ˜ณ.dakshu ab bhi so raha hain( thak gaya hoga bechara ha ha๐Ÿ˜†...).She gets herself wrapped up in blanket and gets down looks out for her clothes which are scattered on the floor along with dakshu's.๐Ÿ˜†.๐Ÿ˜ณ.She picks up her dress goes into the wash room..

After sometime she comes out and finds dakshu missing from his bed.๐Ÿ˜ฒ.She goes searching for him..in balcony...waha bhi nahi hey..๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Naina; kaha chala gaya ye daksh and turn sback...dakshu uske saamne hain with 1/4 kp look๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜›

Naina comes near him ;hugs him and says ; gudmorning..mr vakeel saab..looks at his face aaj subha subha aap KP kyu bangaye?๐Ÿ˜›

Daksh; Kyunki tumne mujhe dhoka diya..iss liye

Naina confused; kya? dhoka..kaunsa dhoka?

Daksh; yahi ki tumne mujhe utaya nahi akele nahane chali gayi mujhe chodkar๐Ÿ˜†...not fair naina..goes inside

Naina; oh..tho ye baat hain..kaan pakad ke sry sry..aaj maaf kardo..kalse pakka..pls..gussa mat karona..๐Ÿ˜‰
Daksh cools down.; teek hain..javo humne tumhe maaf kiya.๐Ÿ˜›.naina gives asmile and is about to go..daksh stops her

Naina; ab kya hua? hato daksh, mujhe tayar hona hain

Daksh;  puts his hands around naina's neck aur ek bechara look dekar๐Ÿ˜ณ;subha subha apna pati ko bhook se maarne ka irada hain kya..mere goodmorning kiss kaha hain?aur penalty bhi dena padega galati ke liye..๐Ÿ˜†.๐Ÿ˜

Naina; daksh..tumna kabhi nahi badlogi/number one badmaash bangaye ho tum..saying this woh jaldi jaldi daksh ko kiss(es) karleti hein( ur choice guys..jaha chaho waha dilvavo)๐Ÿ˜†..ab psl jaldi javo aur reday ho javo.Maine tumhare kapade nikal diye...pushes him away.

Daksh; goes and picks up his towel; kahi bahar jaa rahe hain kya?
Naina; haan surprise hain
Daksh ; acha..teek hain..comes near naina and with naughty look.; mere tumhari tarah.ye nahi poochoonga ki hum kaha jaa rahe hain...
Naina; waise main batanewali bhi nahi..ab jaldi karo.

Daksh;acha baba ..jaa raha hoo..tum chahti ho tho..mere saath chal sakte ho๐Ÿ˜ณ..saath mein..๐Ÿ˜‰
Naina cuts sentence in between; very romantic.๐Ÿ˜ณ.abhi nahi..chalo..she pushes daksh into wash room..

Daksh; kya jamana aagaya hain? pati ki bato ka koi value nahi..saying this he closes the door ..

By the time he comes out naina is ready..daksh uski taraf romantic looks ke ssath dekh raha hein..โค๏ธ.naina notices this nad says; daksh..pls aaj koi badmaashi nahi.., tum mere kapde aur make up kaharab nahi koroge๐Ÿ˜†

Daksh; mujhe aur koi kaam nahi hey kya?  he gets ready...
Naina; chale
DAKSH; Haan chalo...

Both leave from there room..kaha gaye? abhi nahi batavungi...๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
Contd...

Daksh and naina both reach railway station( pata hein tum log kya soch rahe ho? 16 A..Haan wahi)..dakshu ko bhi samaj mein aagaya..๐Ÿ˜‰

Daksh with surprised happy smile' train pe aur 16 A??hmmm..tho ye hain meri surprise๐Ÿ˜›
Naina; nahi
Daksh; kya? ๐Ÿ˜ฒtho phir..hum train pe nahi jayenge kya?

Naina;maine aisa tho nahi kaha. HUm train pe jayenge aur 16 A par hi betenge..lekin tumhara surprise ye hain ki mein tumhe bina ticket ke le javungi๐Ÿ˜†

Daksh; kya? paagal hogayi ho. Tumhe pata hain bina ticket ke journry karna galat hain aur iss ki sazza hain...

Naina; bas bas vakeel saab, apni vakalat yaha mat shuru kardena..tumhe yaad nahi jab hum pehli baar milete...

Daksh;put a hand on naina's shoulder; Maine uss pal ko kabhi nhai bhool sakta..uss waqt mijhe pata nhai tha..ki ye wahi ladki hain jo ek din meri zindagi ban jayegi..

Naina; tab hum pati patni bhi nahi the..lekin ab tho hain,,tho aur bhi aasani se manage karsakte hain...

Daksh; acha..kya karoge?

Naina whsipers into dakhs' ears about her plan..๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Daksh; r u sure tumhe ye karna hain? kusch risky nahi lag raha?

Naina; aisa kuch bhi nahi.surprise mera hain aur risk bhi mera...lekin tumhe yaad haina ki tumhe kya karna hai..koi gadbid nahi hona chahiye๐Ÿ˜†

Daksh nods his head (like kid listening to teacher)..jee mem saab..aap jaise chahthi hi waisa hi hoga

Naina; hmm good...chalo

Train aata hain , both get into train..go searching for 16 A
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wow Lucky surprise seems to be very interesting... ๐Ÿ˜‰ and bechara dakshu ko jhoot bolna hai kya?... ๐Ÿ˜‰ Kaise kar payega?... ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago

wow! lucky! so much romance in ur FFs !!๐Ÿ˜ as usual brilliant!! when dakshna get married in real SSBN i want u to be the wirter director and everything..we should all get together and throw the currnt CVs out!...then we'll get to see a really hot and sexy dakshna honeymoon!!๐Ÿ˜†

well done lucky!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMystique

wow! lucky! so much romance in ur FFs !!๐Ÿ˜ as usual brilliant!! when dakshna get married in real SSBN i want u to be the wirter director and everything..we should all get together and throw the currnt CVs out!...then we'll get to see a really hot and sexy dakshna honeymoon!!๐Ÿ˜†

well done lucky!!



Thanks dear...Thats a huge compliment and๐Ÿ˜› I agree with u on fact that  our forum FF's writers can make a better SSBN than current CV's,if given a chance...๐Ÿ˜Š

Honeymoon part hain tho iss liye itna romance tho jyada  dalna padta hain๐Ÿ˜.I really hope when dakshna get married..we get see something romantic and hot...not just cute..lets see๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
hii friends..reading all ur ffs..i got real inspiration to write a small part
     MR. POSSESSIVE DAKSH PATWARDHAN
       Part 1
Dakshna were married the last night very lavishly..so its the day after their marriage...
Naina got up early and as usual went to the kitchen to help her aayi kum mil...
Aayi..beta tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..aur daksh uth gaya..
Naina:(smiles little bit)nahi aayi abhi tak unke subah nahi huye
Aayi main yeh chai bana doo...
Aayi:chai to ho gaye...
Naina:aayi main yeh chai sab ko deke aati hu...
Aayi:nahi naina...tumhe kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi hain...aj to bilkul bhi nahi...waise beta akruti tumhe pooch rahi thi...
Naina:(getting tensed)kyon aayi..woh thik toh hain na...?
Aayi:haan beta..pata nahi..sayed kuch baat karni thi..
Naina went to akus room...all were dere in her room..rohini..aku..kaki..daksh's 2-3 cousins who came for his marriage..lekha...i want to say ki rohini kuch sudhri hain
Akruti:dekho naina aa gayi...i mean meri naina vahini
All were gossiping n smiling...
Naina sits on the bed beside akruti..
Rohini:waise akruti..tumhe nahi lagta aj kisike chehre pe kuch zaada hi glow aa gayi hain...
Naina was blushing...
Akruti:haan vahini...kisike bohat saare pyaar ka assar hain...
Naina:(blushing)woh akruti tumne mujhe bulaya tha...
Akruti:haan vahini...actually hume poochna tha ki kal aap ko kisine bohat tang kiya hoga na?
Aayi comes in...
Aayi:yeh kiya ho raha hain..meri beti ko paresan mat karo...
Lekha:aayi...hum kaha paresan kar rahe hain...paresan to koi aur karta hoga...
Naina really felt embarrased as all are pulling her legs
Naina:main chalti hoon..thoda kam hain mujhe...ans as she turns to go,mr. Patwardhan gave his sweet darshan with a cute smile
Rohini:lo naina...ab to tumhe jane ki koi jaroorat nahi hain na...
Daksk looks at naina who was wearing a beautiful red saree with her wet hair n got little lost n all noticed it
Akruti:ahem ahem...dada..
Daksh...comes back to senses n blushes a bit as he got caught admiring his wifey...
Daksh:achcha mujhe thoda kam hain..
Saying this he did eye ishara to his wife n told her to come wid him...
Lekha:ha ha..abhi to dono ka hi kam hoga
All starts to laugh...
Daksh goes out..
Naina starts to leave...
Akruti...dada se fursat mile to yaha aa jana vahini
Naina goes to her room...n searches for daksh...who went inside be4 her..den he came from behind...and caught her from back...removed her hair slowly n kisses her on her shoulder...
Naina:daksh...chodo mujhe...
Daksh:naina...tum abhi bhi yeh kaise bol sakti ho...aur abhi se na yeh dialogue bhul jao..samjhi...
N again went to kiss her...
Den suddenly rohini and sanket entered with something...
And both the couple were really embarrassed...but rohini to mazak ke mood main hi hain...
Rohini:sanket..main tumhe bol rahi thi na ki abhi yaha aana thik nahi hoga...tum kya aapne chintu ko tumhari tarah buddhu samajte ho...jo ki apne biwi haath lagane keliye 3 din wait karega...tum hi kehte ho na ki tumhara chintu kitna shararti tha...abhi samaj main aaya...
Sanket:rohini ab bas bhi karo...in dono pe taras khao..dekho inke shakalo ko...
Rohini:sanket tum bhi na...abhi mazak nahi karenge toh kya inke bachche hone ke baad kahenge...
Okk...guys..now let me stop here...let me continue it tomorrow..if and only if u assure me dat i can go on wid this ff.
Precap...gift from rohini and sanket...naina meets her college mate dat made daksh super jealous ...
Take care n gn

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Posted: 12 years ago
@niksidfan
 
sudhri hui rohini...kya idea he yar๐Ÿ˜†...
luvd d whol thing, the tang-kheechings nd dakshna ka romo ๐Ÿ˜›...maza aya๐Ÿ˜Šthnx yar...
 
ps : precap? matlab baki ane ko he๐Ÿ˜›jealous dakshu๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†put t up asap na pls..
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Posted: 12 years ago
@  niksidfan

Very Nice yaar๐Ÿ‘... please do continue... ๐Ÿ˜›
In actual SSBN we hardly got to see jealous  Dakshu... really want to know what's gonna happen next...๐Ÿ˜
Sudhri hui Rohini making fun and tang-kheechings and all... good scene totally...๐Ÿ˜›
If u included Lekha where was Sushant then?... Let him also do some masak masti with Daksh...๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
@niksidfan

Super perfect scene..lved it๐Ÿ‘..Cnt think of better scene nad dialogues after first night...Really curious to see jealous daksh.๐Ÿ˜‰.post it soon yaar, badli rohini ,hmmm liked it

Pls do continue...its superb๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dakshna ne lagaya TC ko maska๐Ÿ˜†

Finally they reach 16 A.They find a cute couple sitting there..

Naina; daksh.. unse baat karona..mujhe waha betna hain
Daksh; jee mam..smiles and goes near them excuse me..couple looks at him
Daksh; If u dnt mind kya aap waha bet jayenge pls..woh kya hena..she points at naina..ye mere patni hain hamari hamari nayi nayi shaadi huyi hain..hum apne honey moon par hain aur...

Just then naina comes besides daksh and says; ye sab kuch tum kya keh reh ho daksh..Iss infn ke saath inka kya lena dena?

Daksh; tum pls chup rhao
Couple;  aap ye sab kuch hame kyu bata rahe hain?
Naina starts smiling.๐Ÿ˜†..daksh looks at her and continues with his..

Daksh; woh hamri love marriage huyi thi aur humpehli baar iss seat par mile the..tho meri patni chahti hain hum yaha bete waise hum agale sation mein utar jayenge..tho aap kya ye seat hume denge?..looks at naina with an expression..dekhs kaise manage kar liya
Naina smiles and shows up thumbs up๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Couple agrees and gives them the seat..daksh and naina sit down.

Daksh; dekha..milgayana seat
Naina; haan haan..vry smart...she holds daksh's hand, puts her head on his shoulder..and remembers their first meeting..ditto with daksh..
Daksh; kay tum bhi wahi yaad kar rahe ho?๐Ÿ˜
Naina; haan..

Aaaraha hain TC..lekin dondo khayalon mein khoye huye.THe other couple smiles looking at them.Dakshna dnt notice TC coming..

TC comes near dakshna; excuse me aap ka ticket
Daksh lil shocked๐Ÿ˜ฒ( suddenly  TC jo aake kadha hogaya)..calls naina..
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