NEW FF ON MAANEET:NAINA TORE - Page 23

well i liked the update bcoz she didnt hide anything from him abt her relationship with neil...

Originally posted by: preethia

well i liked the update bcoz she didnt hide anything from him abt her relationship with neil...

well as u say relations r complicated...

maan is one hell of a man a gal wud want in her life bcoz of his understanding...

may b the way v r cultured from childhood abt physical intimacy which has to b only with ur spouse it might b difficult to understand the relationship bw neil-geet...

acc to me i think physical intimacy is not the only thing to b loyal abt..she told him the truth and yes i wud prefer if she stayed away from neil after her relationship with maan bcoz if in that case she has it close with neil then she is cheating maan and neil is cheating geet by taking advantage of her thoughts...

Maan-aha see who says girls only know how to blush even we boys know how to blush and blush well

Geet- that's WHAT EXACTLY LIKE YOU BLUSH MAAANUUU

All of them laughed at maans plight

Maan- geet shayad tum bhul rahi ho ki pati ka naam lena is not allowed acc.to some rivaaz(and smiles)

Geet –maan aap to rivaaz ki baat hi na karo aise hai to shaadi se pahle milna n most of all kiss karna bhi allowed nahi hai(n smirks)

 

Rohan- good fight geet agar koi maan ke badde badde ankho pe dekh ke use karara jawab de sakta hai to vo tum hi ho

Then muski nudged rohan

Rohan cleared his throat………………

Rohan-umm vo actually mai matlab

Dadi-rohan beta baat kya hai aap khul ke baat kar sakte hai

Rohan-dadi hum maan ,geet ,adi aur pinky ko bahar le jaana chahte hai

Dev-couples night out

Pinky-chalo na adi bada maza ayega…………………and then maan sir ko tease karsakte hai

Adi laughed and caressed her head

Maan came and hugged pinky sideways

Maan-adi kitni innocent and cute hai na meri saali

Adi-oye teri saali pahle meri gf hai

For almost 45 minutes rohan was driving……………………

Adi-aaj kya tum dono ne nightout plan kiya hai

Maan-seriously I thought we are going for dinner or anything as such

Pinky-haan rohan aur waise bhi ye ham kaha aye hai jungle aur rasta bas yehi

Geet-relax dekho na baahar ka veiw kitna acha hai

They were travelling in an innova car,where rohan was driving and muski was sleeping on the passengers seat

Adi and pinky were almost on the verge of falling asleep on each other in the middle seat

And maaneet were at the back seat ejoying the warmth of each others arm

Then rohan parked the car at a place ………………..

Rohan looked at the side seat to see his beautifull wife muskaan enjoying a sound sleep ,the soft breeze touching her cheeks and her lips parted a bit…………………….his dream sleeping with their dream growing inside her bumpy belly…………………….he chuckeled seeying such a cute sight and slowly kissed her bump

Adi and pinky who were peeping from the back

Adi-she is looking soo sweet

Pinky-she must be tired na due to the pregnancy

Maan and geet by that time came out of the car

Geet- a pregnant wife with beauty and simplicity oozing out of her is a beautifull sight isnt it maan

Maan side hugged geet and kept another hand on muskis cheek

Maan-yes truly a breathtaking sight…………………………and this baby will be so lucky to have such caring parents and looked at rohan

Rohan smiled back at maan and took a picture of muski sleeping and saved it as his wallpaper,its then that a sleeping muski felt a change in the sorrounding and woke up

As the sleeping beauty opened her eyes she saw five people smiling and gaping at her with geet and maan full of emotions,adi and pinky excited and full of anxeity and her darling rohan with a drop of tear at the corner of her eyes(I remmember the face of my mother sleeping as she used get tired soon at the time of birth of my brother………………awww!!!!)

She immidiately cupped rohans face

Muski-rohan whats wrong

Rohan- I love you muski ………………I love you a lot………………you will never know what you are to me

Muskaan hugged him and heived a sigh of releif……………………

Suddenly rohans word of "YOU WILL NEVER KNOW WHAT  YOU ARE TO ME "struck her mind …………….will her maan ever know what he is to her……………….she had tried her best to resist him ,she thought that its best to stay away from him cause if someday anything ever happens to her he will blame her,blame her for leaving him alone in life,will she snatch away his dreams of living and dying together  from him,will he ever understand her point

WILL YOU BE MY HERO

WOULD YOU DANCE IF I ASK YOU TO DANCE

WILL YOU RUN AND NEVER LOOK BACK

WILL YOU CRY IF YOU SAW ME CRY

WILL YOU SAVE MY SOUL TONIGHT

WOULD YOU TREMBLE IF I EVER TOUCH YOUR LIPS

WOULD YOU LAUGH OH PLEASE DO THIS

WOULD YOU DIE FOR THE ONE YOU LOVE

OR GIVE ME YOUR LOVE TONIGHT

 

 

Yes she knew that she was a fighter by her own choice…………………….but will he ever acknowledge her choice……………………does she have a choice………..did life ever give her a choice(mystry no.2 frnds=>will be starting now with a bit of revelation frm furder prts n wil be revealed in d first climax )did life ever give her a choice especially in his case

I CAN BE YOUR HERO

I CAN KISS AWAY THE PAIN

I WILL STAND BY YOU FOREVER

YOU CAN TAKE MY BREATH AWAY

WOULD YOU SWEAR THAT YOUR LOVE IS MINE

WOULD YOU LIE  WITH ME

WITH YOU SAY I HAVE LOST MY MIND

BUT IN YOUR LOVE……………..

Will it be wrong to say that her life is full of missions and cases and her marriage a mission with definit benefit for him  but what about her………………….will he ever understand the depth of the situation…………….will he be the one to protect after she has lost all in gaining him……………..will he ever hold her back or push into darkness form which no one can ever revive her back not even him

I JUST WANNA HOLD YOU

I WANT TO HEAL YOU

I DON'T CARE BUT JUST HOLD YOU TONIGHT

I CAN BE YOUR HERO…………………….BUT MAAN WILL YOU BE MY HERO???

 

After it all ends one day will he still believe her ,love her,know her

Will he ever know…………………that she was his even before they met at muskaans wedding

Will he ever know that it was her ……………………".his annoying follower"…………………….a truth known only by dev

WILL YOU BE MY HERO?????she faced him WILL YOU BE MY HERO MAAN???

As maan held her by waist she  broke out of her chain of thoughts;----

Muski –geet now you will get the surprise

Geet what is it mus…………………………..oh wow muski drreeeaaammmyyy

In front of her was a beautifull sight………………a stream flowing and a wooden bridge on top of it,sorrounded by jungle and the serene moonlight making a perfect dream sequence for a romanting evening………………………..just what muski and herself used to read and dream about from the mills and boons series(oh god I luv d mills n boons series)

Muski-sama hai suhana suhana……………….nashe me hai saara zamana……………….abhi to aise hi karle hum apni puri tammanna

Geet blushed hard and rohan smirked

A blemused maan finally asked

Maan-wow the senery is beautifull………………..but what is the matter with both of you tammanna,blushing and all

Rohan-maan my wife and your to be wife had this common dream of kissing the love of their life in an exactly same place with standing on one feet and the other up air

Muski looked down and geet blushing and embarressed hid herself in maans chest

Maan hugged her back

Maan-oh my god geet ………………my innocent darling………………don't worry ill devour you with such a passionate kiss that you will be swept of both your feet and take an hour to come back from the spinning world

Soon the moon showing its serene light witnessed the love of three couples full of passion and commitment each kissing and loving their better half with no clue about the sorrounding

Followed by was a dinner and lot of talks and knowing each other

Yes slowly and steadily both maan and geet were falling into the trap of love from which it will be immpossible to entangle themselves……………………….will she drown in his love……………………….kya unki pyar,unki bekhudi itni mazboot hogi jo na use jeene de aur na hi uski aakhri saans ginne de………………….

PRECAP-MAANEET SHAADI!!!

I need ur opinion…………DO U WANT MAANEET SUHAAG RAAT TO BE DESCRIBED IN DETAIL WITH HOTNESS AND PASSION WELL PERSONOFIED OR SHOULD I KEEP IT SIMPLE?????

😭Frnds the ammount of comments are 😭decreasing…………………..plss I send 60 pms and😭 😭receive only 10-11 cmmnts and 15-18 likes…………😭……..im very upset…………🤢…..plsss motivate me……😭……😭……….deres a lot in dis story mystry,revelation,following will be three climaxes………😲………😲……plsss hepl me out by cmmnting n lyking😭

 

Edited by chandreyeeroy - 12 years ago

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awsome add me in ur pm list continue soon

awesome, beautiful part
loved it

continue soon

awesome post

great part..
plz continue soon...
thanks for the pm..

Very nice update dear. Loved it. Thanx for the pm. Waiting for the next part.

Wow mystery cuming ahead.
I'm waitng.

Ya wanna read hot n passionate SR of maaneet but only aftr they accept that they love each other totally