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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing...
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

😊ollele my cutepies hw r all of u jaanoos

ok truly im happy wid d responce frm u lovely ppl n so heres d update nly on maaneet n yaa cheer up cause im posting 2 updates 2day😉

chek the next update in d next post ...😃

part 16-

Dadi and dad directly joined maan ,dev ,adi and geet along with her family in the central park

Dadi-geet bete kaisi hai aap

Geet-jii dadima im gr888 what about you………………..i must say you are looking cute ,thankgod you gave your saaree a break and and wore this kurta-jeans(immagine dadi in kurta-jeans cho chweet na)

Rano-geet tu

Dadi-rahne dijiye iski yeh chulbuli baaten,hame  bahut bhati hai lagta hai jaise koi pyari si bachi baat kar rahi hai

Adi-pari hai isi liye to baba maan singh ji ki tapasya ko bhang kar payi hai

Dev-haan blueberry muffin khilakar,n haan adi tumne mughe kya kaha tha haan hot n cold hai naa

Adi-haan where maan was dancing as if there was no tommorow

Geet-awww now stop teasing my maanu

Adi+dev-maanuuu

Both of them pull maans cheek and say-ollee ollee my maanu baby no rona see mummas here baby bunch

Geet giggled and maan was fuming

Geet-bas karo tum dono pata chala ye volcano ke tarah bhadak uthe n ham sab jal jaye

Adi-geet ab to sirf pyar hi niklega ye phuega to

Maan-enough nonsence you both tum log yaha mughe help karne aye ho ya mughe nervous karne

Rano-maan why are you nervous beta???

Maan-I mean talking to her parents about marriage and marriage something which I thought was never in my fate……………………I mean yup I really like her…………..i mean its that I met her half a month ago………………….i mean ……..oh god ………………..im just…………………I really

Geet placed her hand on maans shoulders

Geet-Maan we all understand ,you are sweating with nervousness

Dadi-well lets sit on that bench and talk

After everyone sat down

Geet-dadi,dad,maa and papa I know that you all love us bacha of yours so much and must had have many dreams about our marriage……………………..but

Maan-geet what happened you ………………..

Dev held his shoulders knowing well what geet wanted to say

Geet- maan I want to have court marriage maybe a reception can follow…………

Rano-geet par

Dadi-why beta why not a proper wedding

Geet looked helplessly at maan and dev

Maan- geet jaisi tumhari marzi mughe to bas tum chahie no matter how

Dev-haan bhai courtmarriage will be best(he knew well that her identity could be well revealed)

Dad-ok we have no problem

Papa-even we are fine with it its actually enough for us that she has finally agreed to marry atleast

Dadi-hame bhi yahi laga tha that maan will never marry………………

Maan pulled geet in a side hug and said-well before meeting her even I thought so………………

precap-well chek d next post

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Posted: 12 years ago

heres d next part sweeties

part-17

Later while the elders drove off maan ,geet,raaj and dev preffered to stay back

Maan-geet wo……………… I mean I want to do something with you😲

Geet widened her eyes while rest two watched maan jawdropped at maan

Dev-bro what do you intend to do with geet,I did not know you are that desperate😳

Maan realised that his words implied something  wrong😕

Maan-oh no no I did not mean that😡

Geet- what is it maan

Maan sat down on his knees

Maan-geet will you marry me darling please say yes because I have spent reading all the 101 ways of proposingand watched romantic movies but still I just could not do anything as such

Geet-hahaha oh my maan you are ohhh god

You are something else maan………………………..first you talk about my marriage to my parents and then you think of proposing me after fixing our marriage with our parents……………………..what should I do with you

Maan- just stay yes please cause my feet is hurting

Geet-yes maan…………….ohh damn yes

Finally maan stood up and pulled geet i😳nto a hug

Dev +raaj-aww how sweet

Raaj-you guys enjoy I have a meeting planned so need to go

As raaj went and geet ,maan and dev were there

Maan immidiately pulled geet towards himself and in a split of second kissed herfully on the mouth but did not enter her mouth and left her

It took a minute for geet to realise what happened and then she whacked maan

Geet-you are such a despo maan and in the central park you are kissing me full on mouth

Dev-you are kissing her in front of me

Geet-well that does not matter dev you have seen us kiss before too

Dev-huh wah wah superb pair mere bha😵i bhabhi dono besharam hai

Maan- huh dev what do you expect…………………….i have controlled myself a lot but not anymore

Dev-yaya bas bas ab ghar chale its 8:30 at night already………………….and all of them drove off in their respective cars…………

Neil was sitting at  his flat and enjoying green tea when he heard the door click open

It was only her…………………only she was allowed to come unannounced infact she had a spare key too

She came and sat on his lap

It was the month of august  and so it was raining outside heavily

He was sitting on his balcony

Neil-lets go inside you will catch cold……………..

He piks her up………….she puts her legs on the either side of him and holds him by his neck

He places her on the couch and she again sits on his lap drinking his tea

Chutki-neil im hungry

Neil-I have made your favourite pasta today……………………………lets have the dinner

Both of them went and enjoyed their dinner feeding each other

Chutki went to the bathroom to take a bath and neil waited for her in the bedroom

She came out of the bathroom in his bathrobe sans anything else

She went and climbed on his lap

Chutki-what is this

Neil pointing towards the papers-this is the history of the freshbatchers from ambala cantonment

Chutki-we have to select the new army generals na

Neil-hmmm…………..

Then neil dimmed off the light and placed the papers on the side table

He hugged her

Chutki-me in a bathrobe and in such a compromising position with you…………hmmm not bad

Neil smirked-you torture me jaan

He bit her earlobe and kissed her collarbone

She allowed him to taste her

That's when neil pinned her to the bed and lowered himself on her

He hugged her and cried…………..firstly sobbed then started crying hysterically

Chutki- mughe itna lachar mehsoos mat karvao neil

Neil-im helpless my love for you is helpless………………………its  not physical jaan I can never want you physically ,but emotionally…………………………I know you don't love me but my heart cant accept this every time I see you I feel a part of me just want to hold you love you but another part darns reality on me

Chutki-why do you do this, why do you do this to me neil…………………………..i feel guilty of not loving you back

But im just not able to love you back

Neil-tell me onething am I lacking in anything???

Chutki-how can you even say that you know that you are a part of my each breath ,a part of my each heartbeat,you are just not my saviour,my modesty's saviour but you are also its protector………………….i do love you neil but not as a brother,not as a friend ,not as a lover…………………..our love is deep and without any description or limit……………we live evryday to die for each other

He slowly walked to the window and while facing his back

Neil-but from now you will go away from me…………………..stay away build a gap ,maintain distance…………………you will have to honour him

Chutki-yes I will have to and that is the most painfull part of my life

Neil-ill always be with you like your shadow but a shadow can never merge with the being

Chutki-I promise to protect my shadow from the sun and ill take all the heat on me

Chutki walked up to him and hugged him

The whole night she slept on him and he kept on showering her with kisses on her face

The next morning she went back leaving neil behind

(friends sometimes we are just not able to love back a person how much ever we want to………………………it's a very painfull experience)

precap-past of neil n chutki n alsomaaneet go 4 trecking


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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the updates...
so court marriage but i dont get the relationship bw geet and neil...
seems their past might put some light on their relationship...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updates
continue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part yaar
i loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the updates...

so court marriage but i dont get the relationship bw geet and neil...
seems their past might put some light on their relationship...
pl cont soon

dear its neil n chutki n nt geet n neil did i evr say tht its geet d grl
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting nice updates
cont soon
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ... loved part 16 n 17 ...

thnx 4  d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG simply awesome. Pls reveal the Neil-chutki/Geet suspense soon.its killing me. Thanx for the pm.