Mystery Girl updated Note on 148 - Page 95

hiii magicia..
so much happened...and thanks for incorporating this part...as u said this was very much needed and no complaints about no maneet moments./...a ff can sustain only on maneet moments...as we need to take the story further...well i like ur obsession with the italian names and mafia..and u did an awesome job, the way u incorporated it in ur story without making it look misplaced or a misfit...
i love the flow of the story...
maan's mom is indeed a drama queen..with her cliched dialogues😆...but then all maas are like this only
loved the update to core
keep writing
love u
reva

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

hiii magicia..
so much happened...and thanks for incorporating this part...as u said this was very much needed and no complaints about no maneet moments./...a ff can sustain only on maneet moments...as we need to take the story further...well i like ur obsession with the italian names and mafia..and u did an awesome job, the way u incorporated it in ur story without making it look misplaced or a misfit...
i love the flow of the story...
maan's mom is indeed a drama queen..with her cliched dialogues😆...but then all maas are like this only
loved the update to core
keep writing
love u
reva

Edited by magicia - 12 years ago

shilpa shetty as amrutha.kya imagination hai.thoda weight kam nehi hogaya mom ko?

Thank you for the update...

Originally posted by: nazsij

shilpa shetty as amrutha.kya imagination hai.thoda weight kam nehi hogaya mom ko?

Awesome updates dear. Do continue and dont forget to pm me whenever u will update. I'll comment later whenever i'll back. Plz dont forget me in 10 days. Plz plz pm me of ur all ff updates. Thanks in advance. Bye sweety.

hey  am  not  at  all   satisfied  abt  this  update...coz  no  maaneet  scenes  na...but   u   build  up  the  story   of  maan👏  very  well  yaar...that's  nice...
looking   fwd...

I am shocked after seeing Maan's mom😉 woh toh badi beautiful aur sexy hai ji😆😆