Originally posted by: paponecon
read this ff in one go...mervelous...in one word...daruunnn...loved the whole ff...concepet situation love passion sorrow aim suspence violence everything...i was thinking from the beginning that how geet will able to become a nun...she is not virgin...last 4years she is living with a guy although he is in a vegetable state...and above all geet didnt want to become a nun...and i heard that willingness is the most important factor to become a nun...before falling in love with geet maan situations and his monologue was just awsome.really enjoyed those...and how is it possible that maan would not fell in love with her after so much happening..his body was dead but not his mind...that last night when maan enabled to move his body...that part was superb...maan always loved geet and used to do which he wished in his imaginary state that he didnt realized that he was enabling to move his body...he really did make love with geet...kissed geet...and all those days the cutest thing was that maan always thought geet is really his wife...but in the morning when geet came back his sense whay she didnt see any marks in her body??????????maan also kissed her passionately and madelove with her??????????the violent part was the sajjan kameena...one moment i was starting to believe that u really potraid the rep scenece...but thank god geet eneabled to get her sense and strength...and that situation the restlessness of maan that was really nice...true love...and maans reaction after hearing the accident and his dialogue to his mom and nanaji hats off...really really wish geet will get all the happiness which she deserves...thanx for creating such real scenario...the child marriage dowry dirty politics money power greediness and the last but not the least the LOVE...still waiting the realization of love from geet to maan...how could she forget maan after taking decision that that she would not choose to the path of nun...
wow another long comment ..aaj mera ..birthday hi kya ..khushis one after another ...hmmm
he was very soft when making love , i know all of you might ahve that doubt ..thats why i said ..in one update first ..he give in , he wanted her to enjoy him..even when he realized he can move then she was not able and cried then he made ..love with her ...blushing winking ... when making love with all passion its not necessary u will always get marks on your body ...lol
Part 27.A Substantial Coalescence
she cant move , she was tired of agony and repentance yet she tried , her inner self seeking pleasure tried but ,,she collapsed on his chest crying 'unable to do anything ..and moved side cried loudly like somebody died , may be she was mourning of her own souls death , Maan can't see her in pain anymore he rose and carefully took her lips in to his..
may be she may have 1 or 2 ..like ...
Yes ..yes ''' Geet .i love you ..He was not getting any words ..his eyes flowed non stop .. Trying to control his emotions he bit his lips ,which were busy in Geet's necks making Geet scream in pain'..and pleasure ''he cried '.]
but ..she was in a state ... i cant explain ...she thought she did it again .. when she cant forgive herself for what she did for first time and all those rona dhona ..and what she saw felt next day ..she did it gain !!!!!! she seems she was so composed and left in taxi , like actually a dead person . dead means emotionless ...expressionless ..she became taht after that incident ...blank ..dirty blank with no hope...
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