Mystery Girl updated Note on 148 - Page 2

Originally posted by: princess163

she is a doc...maan is a patient, maybe in vegetative state since pretty long...she takes care of him and unknowingly has fallen in love with him as he is her only friend...she, to take care of him was living away from her church and hence lived a freee life...

thats what i could gather

Originally posted by: savie_

hey...

luved it alot...

sweety and dont take tension ...

dont be scared send pm's

Originally posted by: shona2010

wow awesome...great start ...little cofusing...  

...lets see how the story unfold

update soon...

pm me when u update

Originally posted by: blueopal

hey  nice   concept  yaar...
geet  past  was  sooo  sad  n  wanna  know  one  think...
maaneet  r  married????????????????????
looking   fwd...

Originally posted by: magicia

10 more mins shona... i like ..calling someone shonaaa

Chapter 3 :  Grotesque (beautifully Ugly)

31 July 2011

10:30

 Geet , soon to be a Nun,which she don't like at all , she is not forced but because of her obligation towards church and  Maasi who save d her (details in ff )  , presently she is Maan's home nurse from 18.30 to 8.. maan is in a "coma  vigil " state .she works to find means for her study MBBS .Her course is over waiting for convocation and soon she is going to return back her orphanage to undertake "novitiate" ( i dont know much details about the process of making nuns .pardon me for errors and help if you know it so that  i can correct ). One night , she do a beautiful sin for which maan was dying for . Is it enough guys ..please please press like button that gives me a count how many like it and motivates me to write further ..