New FFAbhiya "Always U" update pg23 23/10 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: abhiora

awesome dr..plz pm me nxt tym'..n thanx 4 da pm..^_^


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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: pari_smart

Awesome ff... please continue soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Chapter 3

"sister mary, please take care of pia , she doesn't have any friend accept me "

"sure son " sister mary handover Abhay to Raichands

Pia watching everything from Balcony , she thought how Abhay is leaving her so easily , he had said her that he will be with her always and breaking his promise so easily , on other side she wanted to go and hug abhay may be for the last time. Her ego and friendship was on fight , then she thought may be if she goes and asks him to stay he would . on that thought she ran away down in a hurry.

Abhay was set to go  , tracing his eyes all over  the orphanage for the last time where he lived for  8 years ! he smiled to himself and thought life is fair and not fair at the same time. He looked upto his foster parents  .

Pia ran after the car screaming for Abhay but car didn't stop , Abhay didn't stop . her legs were loosing , Abhay had gone far from her. A car passed by there two men sitting inside stopped their car aside , one came down to see what little girl is doing in night on the lonely street , before reaching to her , the security guard of orphanage grabbed piya's arm and started to take her back to orphanage. The man inside the car kept his eyes fixed on piya. As another man sat back in the car .

"little girl trying to run from orphanage "

"who is she?  I want to know everything about her , I have my eyes fixed on her " said none other than Jeh khurrana who watched Piya walking on the road .

 

As abhay reached to his new home , he was surprised to see everything so classy , he knew they are rich but not super rich! Hassena smiled at his astonishment

"Abhay you like your home?" Hassena asked lovingly

'yeah , yes! Its big and… I don't know what to say" Abhay said gazing around him

"its all your Abhay"

"Really ?"

"Yes"

Both Son and mother were having interacting with each other pleasantly that chand came and took Abhay to show his room.

 

As piya reached to room , she was lost in her self , what would she do now ? she went to her balcony looking upwards talking to her mother

"Mom Abhay thek toh hoga na?"

"Who log uska khayal toh rakh rahein ho ge na ?"

On the word "khayal" she thought , who will take care of her now , abhay used to take care of her now?

On the other hand Abhay was staring the moon

"Thank you God for giving me such people in my life but piya?"

"will she be fine na?"

"I am so worried for her"

"worried? Why beta? U don't like here?" hassena said in astonishment when she heard ahbay worrying about something , she made him set down in his bed and handed a glass of milk . Abhay was slient didn't knew whether he should tell or not? Noticing bulks above his eyebrows , she asked again.

"Abhay ? what happened son?" a concerned mother asked.

"Nothing , thank you for milk. Can I go to sleep?"

"Sure, do you want me stay with you ?"

"Um no , I am big boy"

Hassena smiled on his words , she kissed on his forehead saying goodnight left his room.

"Piya , I will sure write to you " Abhay promised himself before slipping down in blankets.

 

Precap : Piya receives letter from Abhay she opens with excitement …

"Abhay , I would never reply to you , we should be apart , our worlds are apart" Said piya's hearting forming tears in those brown chocolately eyes! 




P.S thank you the support ! after these updates you would find Hassena and Abhay bonding alot , i just the duo very much !

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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Sorry dears for the late update and i couldnt reply to you all 
i am having fracture due to that i m lil late!

would be replying soon to you guys!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: missglam


Superb update!
A very emotional one!
Poor abhay n pia. .i'm feeling so bad for them. .
Can't wait for them to grow up & meet. .thank u so much for the pm. .
Continue soon. .tc !


Awww dont feel sad , Abhiya wil be back with a bang
Thanks alot dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
nice update dear, quite emotional
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: ifrah.

cute update...:)but poor abhiya...btw its awesome continue soon..:)



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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Vivilaciouss_me

Awesum update! Hey pm me plz plz!


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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: ilove99

awesome plz pm me from next time and i am adding ur ff in ff corner.




Thank u so much dear 
u r doing gr8 job hats off!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you dear