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harshitideewani

@harshitideewani

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#101

awesomee updates shreyaa really loved it soo much,👏

Part 8:awesomee part really loved the way Prem and Heer engagement part Prem asking❤️ Heer to marry him woww that cool andd Prem understandinggg Heer' pain and supporting her in her critica😳l period of month andd taking caringg of her soo cute

Part 9: Premm helpingg Heer in her cases 🤗and supoorting and giving her the full confidence andd inspiration needed to her andd after winningg standingg beside her in all thick and thin and after that Prem inviting Heer for ceremony and going for shopping and both selecting matching colors was cute 😎, love to see them in those attire and after winning the award, giving credit for each oother for winning and balncing their carrier and also thee cute rommantic❤️ sceness between Prem and Heer weere awesomee

waitingg next partt eagerlyyy update soon.

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sreyap92

@sreyap92

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: harshitideewani
awesomee updates shreyaa really loved it soo much,👏
Part 8:awesomee part really loved the way Prem and Heer engagement part Prem asking❤️ Heer to marry him woww that cool andd Prem understandinggg Heer' pain and supporting her in her critica😳l period of month andd taking caringg of her soo cute
Part 9: Premm helpingg Heer in her cases 🤗and supoorting and giving her the full confidence andd inspiration needed to her andd after winningg standingg beside her in all thick and thin and after that Prem inviting Heer for ceremony and going for shopping and both selecting matching colors was cute 😎, love to see them in those attire and after winning the award, giving credit for each oother for winning and balncing their carrier and also thee cute rommantic❤️ sceness between Prem and Heer weere awesomee
waitingg next partt eagerlyyy update soon.

thank you sooo much i love reading these detailed updates thank you sooo much!!!!!😃

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swati

@sweta2005

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

awesomeee too good very nice part waitinggg for next asap.

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

Loved the part ' read both the parts together'

I loved the way u have portrayed the characters of prem and heer '

Love both prem and heer in these parts ' they so understand each other , the way both of them are there for each other in every step'and the relationship that they have between them is just superb and awesome and sweet and cute '

Just loved the way prem proposed heer in front of every one it was just so cute and romantic ' and finally they are engaged ' time for more celebrations

Poor prem heer shouted at her' but it was heer bad day'.but our prem is so understanding and the credit goes to gayatri here'Hehehe

Loved the way prem supported heer' and she won her first case'

Premeer first kiss'.

The way the story is proceeding is awesome' and their little romance before the marriage is just prefect' I want u to go with the story just the way u wanted'.

Thanks for the pm'

DO CONTINUE SUPER DUPER SOON!!!!

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Edited by zigzagway_sadi - 14 years ago

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sreyap92

@sreyap92

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

sorry will update monday have another wedding to go to sorry!!! but promise ill make it a cute one where they go on a family trip

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: sreyap92

you never fail to comment and love you for that

love u too

but this time i replied late...

sry

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

hey sreya!!!!

actually modem was nt working so really sry...

sry sry sry..

this time i m the last one to comment:(

but kan pakadke mafi...

it was nt my fault na???

modem ws nt working ????

any ways

it was a cute update..

that was really nice dear...

i to loved it full on

prem is really undestanding...

he really made heer feel comfortable..

taht was really sweet of him

very cute yaar...

heer is so lucky to get a husband like her

so as said present fiance...

lucky 1!!!!!

their life has really changed

both care fr each othere so much...

taht ws nice...

they complement each other very well...

really she found her husband in her best frnd...

she is really lucky

sometimes i get jealous lolz.

and even i knw he wld b always there to support her...

kash mere paas bhi koi hota...

heer's case..

prem took her 2 mandir..

that was a gr8 idea..

" if u get nervous look at me...""""

wow yaar heer had also supported him

nw he his shwng his love concern towards her...

heer won her case bcoz of him

he gave her confidence

really boost is the secret of my energy bt prem is the secret of heer's energy

lolz

and omg hugged infront of every 1???

that's gr8

also told the media...

gr8 job heer

wow prem beleives her more them himself.. cool han?

and omg omg omg

first kiss?????

this ws the best part...

kiss hun???

heer that's nice

and prem is really supportin cares fr her a lot...

hey listen dnt change your story line

its gr8 hw its wrkng..

i to love it

so at end

firstly sry fr late comment

lovely update

tahnks fr it

thanks fr the pm..

loved it

waiting fr monday...

do update

i m waiting...

love

vrushika

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sreyap92

@sreyap92

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Chapter 10
family trip

sorry!!!!!!!!!😭 i had an unexpected illness and got sick at the wedding so i dind't have time to update but i tried to write this one i know its short but im not feeling well so sorry

prem comes home after dropping off heer he walks inside and sits in the living room with his family and they are all having a nice chat then they all tell prem about how they were planning on taking a family trip to their farmhouse

prem- oh no dad i don't want to go

lalit- no prem you have to come it will be fun

prem- no dad i don't like going out on these trips

lalit- fine prem i guess i' ll have to tell balraj to tell heer that prem doesn't want to go

prem-- heer!! wait heer is coming

preet- yes pb but its okay we will all go while you stay here

prem- no !! its okay i think i will come anyways i'll get bored here what will i do by myself

lalit and the family all laugh okay well get ready we are going tom early

prem goies to his room and falls on his bed he is imagining the trip with heer and how it could bring them more closer then he decides to call heer

heer- hello

prem- hello heer how are you?

heer- im doing good prem just packing

prem- oh you are umm heer don't forget to pack your swimsuit cuz we have a pool and a hotub

heer- oh yea prem i forgot you guys have a hotub i love those

prem in a naughty tone oh you do so do i i gues we will just have to engjoy together

heer- preeem!! she said blushing

prem- what heer its no fun if we go byourselves now is it

heer- whatever prem now i have to go pack okay goodnight

prem- goodnight but im outside your room

heer- what how

she turened around and opened to the door prem what ar you doing here

prem- i thought i could help you pack he said innocently

heer- prem i don't need hehlp you didn't have to come all this way

prem- its okay now that im here let me help you pack

prem went and sat on her bed and went throough her bag and reminded her about the swimsut

heer- oh yeah now that your here prem why don't you tell me which one you like

prem- why does it matter you can wear whatever you one you want to

heer- i know but i want to wear what you want to see me in what you like she said shyly

prem- well in that case i like this red on and iknow its your fav but pack this black one as well i like it

heer- okay

prem was going through her clothes that she already packed and found some sexy dresses

prem- umm heer what are these for??

heer embarresed prem these are for you when were alone she said nervously i thought you would like them

prem- i do heer i just wanted to make sure that you wearing them on your own and not feeling pressurize

heer- well prem i just wanted to wear these for you when we go out alone and i like them as well

prem- well then im fine with it but heer pack a sari as well i like to see you in thoses to and i'll pick it ummm how about this white one

heer- okay prem now we are done so i will see you tomorrow okay

prem - bye heer and gave her a peck on the cheek

next day

the bus arrives and heer is the first one to sit in and she sits in the front followed by preet and meher who sat in the back and the rest of the family then prem came in

preet - pb i saved you a seat in the back he looked and saw heer in the front

prem- no its okay preet im gonna sit in the front so i can have a better view and he sits next to heer she blushes and he starts to look here and there and heer is staring out the window

prem puts his hand around her waist and pull her to him and tells her when im sitting here what is the need for you to look outside

heer teases him and tell him the view is better outside

prem- oh really fine then i won't look at you either ill go sit in the back prem got up to leave but heer grabbed his arm and stopped him

heer- no prem i was just joking prem smiled

prem- well i sat next to you so we could spend this 5 hour bus ride together

heer- i love that idea

prem put his hand around her and was looking out the window pointing things out to heer they spent the first hour talking and enjoying eacothers company

prem- heer i brought my camera is it okay if i take pictures

heer- ofcourse prem you don't have to ask

prem- tahnks heer

heer teased him so prem you like to see me in a sari

prem- ummm yea why

heer- i was just wondering why you like me in a sari

prem- i just think that its elegant and sensual and plus i can see your waist he said and winked at her

heer- prem

prem- what heer its not my fault you have a really nice waist it just draws me in

heer- ill take that as a compliment

prem- so heer can i get a kiss

heer- what ??

prem- what heer i asked you for a kiss

heer- right here i can't prem the whole family is herer

prem- no heer its okay no body will see

heer- no we can't somone will see

prme- fine upset and turned away

heer felt bad she got an idea and scunched down in her seat and turned prem around and pulled him with his shirt prem was shocked and he fell towards her she then pressed her lips on his and kissed him with all her passion while leaning against the window withprem on top of her prem was in heaven and then he thought of heer and how she would be uncomfortable leaning against the window and he put his hands around her waist to give her support and they just sat there and made out their first make out session and then they borke off naturally prem was all smiles and heer was blushing and she coundnt believe that she just did that

prem-well if thats the way you will make up with everytime i get mad then

heer cut him off this wont' happen all the

prem laughed then they both got tired and wanted to go to sleep prem got a blanket and then he aske heer if she would swith seats with him so that he could lean on the window and she could lean on him and be more comfotabel so prem leaned against the window and heer leaned on him and they both fell asleep cuddling with eacother

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#109

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Awesome update... loved it...

Awww premeer romance and their first makeout session... superb and hawt..

I just love the prem heer in ur ff... they are just so superb...

Now lalit also started teasing prem... poor prem where was he stuck..hehe..first he said he didn't wanted to go then again changed it learning thet heer will be there..hehehe.. his reaction were worth watching..

Is prem a magician??? he was infront of heers door..that also too fast... but loved this part.. so much romantic..

And this shy prem has become more naughty and romantic.. thanks to heer.. love them both..

The way story is proceeding it getting interesting day by day.. so the only thing i wanna say is

Thanks for the pm..

Do continue soon!!

FOR Updating..