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sreyap92

@sreyap92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi
Now
Awesome update... loved it...
Awww premeer romance and their first makeout session... superb and hawt..
I just love the prem heer in ur ff... they are just so superb...
Now lalit also started teasing prem... yea i know i thought it was cutepoor prem where was he stuck..hehe..first he said he didn't wanted to go then again changed it learning thet heer will be there..hehehe.. his reaction were worth watching..
Is prem a magician??? he was infront of heers door..that also too fast. hahah it was a last minute change i just wanted him to help with the packing and the clothes lol.. but loved this part.. so much romantic..
And this shy prem has become more naughty and romantic.. thanks to heer.. love them both..
The way story is proceeding it getting interesting day by day.. so the only thing i wanna say is
Thanks for the pm..
Do continue soon!!
FOR Updating..

thank you sooo much!!!!

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#112

hey sreya!!!!!

that was an awsum part

who said it was small...

and if it was then it was really

very cute...

so premeer spending time

that's gr8

and this prem...

he is becoming very

naughty day by day

he is touching heights of

naughtiness lolz///

but its cute yaar..

i loved it

hope this farm house trip gets them more closer...

and prem and heer sleeping leaning on

each other

that was really very cute...

tell me frm whr do u

get ideas????

secret kya hai?????

any ways thank u fr such a wonderful update...

i loved it..

thank u fr the pm...

thanks fr taking time and writing...

and yeah get well soon...

take care of ur health..

come back so that v can get lot many updates...

love

vrushika

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swati

@sweta2005

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#113

awesomeee too good very nice part waitinggg for next asap.

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repunzell

@repunzell

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#114

yaayyy an update😊!!!

it was an amazing update...loved premeer scenesss😳!!!

their make out was nyce...loved heer's idea😉!!!

hope u're feelin better!!!

do update soon!!!

thnx fo the PM!

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harshitideewani

@harshitideewani

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

thanks for the amazing and lovelly updatee👏

wohh Premm first sayys know to theetrip and then agrees when he comes too know thatt Heer is comingg andd preeth and

whole familyy laughing🤣

whh Prem comess and helpp Heer in her packingg soo cutee and asks heer carry her swim suitsss anddd alsoo Heer packed some glamourers drsssees wohhh😉 andd Prem alsoo saidd Heer to packk sareee sooo cute

andd the tripp started andd prem and Heerwere sittting togetherr woohh Premm took soome picturess and Heer asked why he want her to wear sareee☺️ , and Prem sayss I would like see yourr waistt 😉oohh andd hass complimenttt Prem wantt kiss ohh godd when Prem gets angryy andd then Heer pulls anddd gives himm wowww soo❤️ romanticcc andd bothh gott tired andd cuddled togetherrr wohhh cutee,, lovelyyy

waitinggg forr nextt parttt justt cant waittt

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Ayesha103

@Ayesha103

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Awesome Ff plz add m to pm list thanks x

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sreyap92

@sreyap92

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#117

chapter 11
adventures

prem and heer woke up they blushed because of the way they were sleeping and their family was in the bus prem got shy and told heer i'll go get fresh be right back and he left heer sat there waiting for him to get back and then she went and got fresh they were just an hour away from their destination

prem- sleep well heer

heer- yes prem just forgot about our famiy sorry if i was holding on a little tight

prem- i know me too but what to do i slept well.. but this is not fair heer

heer confused what do you mean prem

prem- your spoiling me im getting a habit

heer- of what

prem- im getting used to you sleeping with me holding on to me im getting used to having you in my arms

heer- i know and im getting used to sleeping in your arms

prem- i guess well im lucky though

heer- and why is that

prem- because after a few weeks you will always be sleeping in my arms

heer- blushed prem!!!!

prem- what its true im not going to let you sleep by yourself you will always be by my side

heer- i know actually i want to be in your arms

prem- well we have an hour we can start by cuddling

heer- of course but prem im not feeling to well

prem worreid what happened heer

heer- i think my stomach is upset

prem- heer lie down

heer- what how can i do that

prem- don't worry heer just put your head in my lap

heer- okay

prem stoked her hair for a '10 minutes. heer just concentrate on something else and don't think about it

heer- how do i do that when its hurting

prem pulled heer in to his lap and came close to her heer was founding it difficult to to breathe prem came close to her and kissed her eyes as she sut them one by one he kissed her eyes thenm moved to her nose and then started at her shivering lips and captured them heer responeded immediately prem was nibbling on her lips and demanded entry to heer mouth she gladly opened while prem explored her mouth she explored his she felt immense joy as this was her real first makeout session they naturally broke apart and prem pulled heer close to him and went to her ear and whispered is it still hurting in a husky voice

heer- naughtily is what hurting

prem- grinned and he realized with him around that he needs to be the medicine to her pain and he was happily accepting that role

heer- thanks prem you cured me

prem- now if only i could do that everytime your stomach hurts

heer-whose stopping you

prem- oh you are really in the mood today aren't you

heer- what to do its your kiss im hypnotized but prem were almost there and i probably should get off your lap

prem- oh yea right sorry

they reached the farm house and heer was so happy she loved the house lalit showed them there rooms and told prem to show heer her room

prem- hjeer this is your room right next to mine and we share a balcony

heer- wow prem its beautiful

prem - heer hurry and get ready preet merher and i are going swimming so you get ready and come down okay

heer- wait prem

prem- yes heer

heer- um which bikini should i wear

prem smiled the red one...because the black one is only for me to see he winked at her and left

heer put on her bikini and went down to the pool she just stayed in the 5 ft area as she was too scared to go deper

prem- come here heer

heer- no prem im scared

preet was teaching meher how to swim and in between yelling and cussing at eacother

prem - just come here slowly

heer no prem

prem- fine then im gonna come get you

heer no prem pls don't and she was whooshed away by prem and she held on to him with all her life prem smiled feeling heer so closly to him and having her body pressed against his he could feel her assets on him and he was losing it

heer- prem why are your brining me here im scared

prem0 don't worry heer just hold on to me ill take you over here i know you want to feel the water fall thats inthe 12 ft side

heer- yea i did but i was just scared to come over here

prem- not with me holding you

heer- i guess but still she said literally squshing him

prem took heer to the water fall and walked through it with her heer was splashing and playing with it while prem was holding on to her she played for a while

heer- k prem take me back

prem- why heer your like it don't you aren't you having fun playing in it

heer- i am but i don't want you getting tired carrying me

prem- im not tired and your not heavy

heer - whatever you sa but pls just take me back

prem- okay but im going to stay with you in the 5 ft

heer- okay for a little while they both played and splashed eaother then they both got out and decided to spend some time with the family they all joke around and had a ball then everyone got tired and decided to hit the bed early heer just switched to her pjs and got in her bed she heard a knock on her window and she jumped she walked to her balcony scared she moved the curtain and was shocked to see prem there she opened the door

heer- what are you doing here

prem didn't answer he was just staring at her in her red silky nighty
heer nudged him

prem- woh sorry i was just admiring my fiance

heer- oh omg turn around

prem why

heer because let me get my robe

prem- i already saw you

heer-still she got her robe and put it on okay turn around

prem- well anyways i was here to ask you if you wanted to go in the hottube with me

heer- now?/

prem- yea why not everyone is sleeping its the only time we can by ourselves with out getting interupted

heer- okay i need to change though

prem you go change ill wait out here heer tured to leave but prem stopped her

prem- oh heer and wear the black one heer blushed okay

heer came out wearing her black bikini looking abousolutly gorgeous prem didn't say anything her had no words they both walked dwn and got in to the hot tube prem sitting in one corner and heer in another they both were talking and then after a while prem grabbed heer hand and pulled her to him lookin in to her eyes making sure it was okay she blinked giving him permission he pulled her a brought her in between his legs and made her sit in his lap they cuddled with eacother and prem slowly rubbing his chin on her shoulder and had his hands on her stomach she was shiverin by his touch he moved his face closer to hers and and rubbed his cheek with hers she had her eyes closed and shiverd prem turned her face to him

prem- heer you look beautiful hot and sexy all in one outfit

heer- thanks she was still nervous being so close to him prem saw her trmebling lips and captured them heer hand automatically went in to his hair all of her nervouseness was gone just with this kiss it was sooo passionate and they both expolred eachother for a few minutes until they couldn't breathe then they broked prem kissed her bare shoulder and heer got stiffl

prem sensed it and grabbed her face and put his figer under her chin to make her look up at her heer pls don't take me the wrong way i know my limits and i know what not to cross i will never hurt you and even after were married i will never do anything you don't want to or aren't ready for... and even then if i did anything wrong today im soo

and heer put her hand on his mouth...no prem im sorry i know you won't do anything wrong but i just got scared just in the moment you never know but i trust you i just don't want to do anything major till were married i hope you understand

prem - of course heer neither do i... and i completly understand but i don't kow if i can stop myself from kissing you

heer- i nver told you you can't kiss me

prme- so your okay with it

heer- ofcourse i am i just got nervous righ tnow i mean making out in a hot tub half naked i guess i was scared if it went farther but i don't mind this

prem- okay well in that case can we get back to what we were and he coudln't finish his sentence as heer captured his lips and turned towards him kissing him putting rest to all of her apprehensions...

k that all pls leav comments i love reading the long ones

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repunzell

@repunzell

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

thiz was FAAANNNTASTICCC!!!!!!

loved it till the end❤️!!!

premeer awl the wayyy👏!!!

heer in black n red bikini would be lookin smashing HOTTT😳!!! how can prem resist her?? ahhahaha

loved their romance...above the world😳😳😳!!!!

prem n heer won't cross their limits untill marriage tht was sweet😊!!!!

loved the update...thank u🤗!!!!

loved their make out😳👏!!!

do update soon please!!!!!

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Scribbler M

@Scribbler184

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#119

WOW!!!! This part was sooo adorable n hilarious when Prem said he doesn't want to go but then on hearing that Heer is coming too...his reaction was just awesum...then again in the bus...well, i went *sharam se pani pani*...😉

A loud applaud for u...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏...

Thanx n plz do update soon...waiting...😊

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sreyap92

@sreyap92

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: repunzell
thiz was FAAANNNTASTICCC!!!!!!

loved it till the end❤️!!!

premeer awl the wayyy👏!!!

heer in black n red bikini would be lookin smashing HOTTT😳!!! how can prem resist her?? ahhahaha
i know right imagine seeing her amazing waist!!! lol
loved their romance...above the world😳😳😳!!!!

prem n heer won't cross their limits untill marriage tht was sweet😊!!!!
they will not cross the limit till they are married they can;t forget their values

loved the update...thank u🤗!!!!

loved their make out😳👏!!!

thank you

do update soon please!!!!!

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