Raya cute moments*A COMEDY OF ERRORS*Pg.45 (01.01) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
Chupi rustam lol wel said divya! Next part asap dear hope u enjoy it too!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ashima!!!! Loved it!!! Awww so beautiful...Priya looking round for Ram...so cute!! Can't wait for the next part!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi shamma so glad that u started reading this thread too hope it lives upto ur expectations dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow such a nice wrting m jus loving it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi madiha glad u lykd the update next part asap hope u keep reading it dear
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Ram is busy greeting all the guests..and as priya's eyes followed him all through the hall she had begun to feel angry at ram ignoring her presence itself!..BUT THE NEXT INSTANT SHE REALISES THAT she didnt have a right on him yet..and even after marriage she knew there would be no demands..no expectations on her behalf..shrugging away all sorts of thoughts..priya stares at the mehendi on her hands as the naach gaana begins to happen at full volume..RAM WHO was finding it hard to keep intact that same smile on his face and accept all the congratulations..manages to reach where priya was and since almost everyone had hit the dancefloor including nuts with her mehendi..ram was alone with priya..he takes a seat next to her..and looking at her ram flashes a tired smile..priya gives a faint smile and asks-meeting kaisi rahi?..RAM REPLIES-Theek thi..(balh track plays in bg as his eyes fall on priya's mehendi and ram says pointing to it)..its nice.. Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 12 years ago
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Priya looks at ram taken aback and as he looks at her with an innocent smile..priya could see the honesty in his eyes and her lips too break into a smile and amidst the loud music and partying in the hall..two hearts were finding pleasure in the silence in each other's company..A LITTLE LATER ITS DINNER TIME..and ram is busy making sure that everythng was arranged properly with vikram..and among all the rush..ram notices nuts and karthik sitting in a corner..and karthik making her eat the food..ram smiles and satisfied that his choti was happy..he looks away and finds priya's dad making shipra eat too..its when vikram says to ram hurriedly-ram main abhi aaya..neha ko bahot zoro se bhook lagi hai and thanks to the mehendi..mujhe jana hoga ussey khana khilaney..(and he leaves) That RAM REALISES.. He too had a responsibility to fulfill and for the first time in the evening..ram forgets everything and his eyes wander all around the hall..LOOKING FOR PRIYA!..and when he doesnt find her anywhere..ram looks for her more frantically..and reaching vikram he asks neha-priya kahan hai..NEHA REPLIES-woh upar room mein gayi hai..usey bheed mein achcha nahin lagg raha tha..WITHOUT WAITING FOR NEHA TO COMPLETE..ram makes his way to the rest room where priya was..and reaching there he knocks at the door..he was more than relieved to hear priya say a Come in and stepping inside he finds her standing by the window..and as she turned to look at him..the cool breeze blew her hair across her face and ram notices how elegant yet beautiful priya looked in the green outfit..THE SONG PLAYS IN BG ~JAB KISI KI TARAf dil jhukne lagey..baat aakar zuban tak rukney lagey..(ram reaches to the place where priya was and as he sees her try to set her hair right..ram steps close to priya and with his hand he removes the hair from her face and tucks it behind her ear..while a startled priya just gazes at him..and the lines play)AAkhon aakhon mein ikrar honney lagey..bol do gar tumhe pyar honney lagey..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ram closes the window and turning to priya who was completely offguard by then..he asks-khana khaya?..PRIYA Calms herself and replies trying her best to sound normal-nahin..woh..mehendi..RAM SMILES SAYING- i knew it!..thats why mainey pehle se hii tumharey liye khana order kar diya tha!..THERE'S ANOTHER knock at the door and the waiter enters with a tray carrying a plate with food in it and keeping it on the table he leaves while a completely surprised priya stares at ram as he says-chalo..khana kha lo..PRIYA IS COMPLETELY SURPRISED and replies-par kaise Mr. Kapoor?..RAM FLASHES A VICTORIOUS smile and says-waise hii jaise neechey nuts aur tumhari mom kha rahi thi..karthik aur tumhare dad ke hathon se..BALH MUSIC plays in bg as ram brings the plate and filling a spoon full of rice he offers it to priya as she takes it wondering would she ever be able to know the Real Ram kapoor!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ammmaazzzinggg
OMG, that was so cute!!

Please continue soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh...it is really awesome...waiting for your next part

RAYA rocks together...love them too much