Love bites Abhiya O.S. to parts pg 1, and 2 - Page 5

Originally posted by: ---Pari---

res! Oyeee!! Tu mujhe kya samajhti hai?!! I read all my friends' OS's ok? lolz! Aur maine buhot pehle OS padh liya tha, but mom was restricting me from IF... iss liye comment nhi kar paa rahi thi... :( now wait for my extra long comment!! :)

 

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OMGG Jaanu! Ye kya kar diya? *faints* Hayyyeee... kya romantic tha! AbhIya in the rain... n then AbhIya bedroom scene...😳 Ohhh gawwwddd!!!! When I read the first part, I was seriously getting goosebumps! What a romantic shomantic scene!!! hee hee!!! Arre yaar, y don't u become the CV of pkyek? You would do a much much much better job!!!😳 N omgg!! Abhay n Piya WET! How cuteee would that have looked?!! I want to really see this in the show yaar! It would simply make my life! n Piya's see through dress!! I was blushing while I read it it yaar!! N m sooo happy that u have portrayed Abhay as a real, normal guy in this OS! Was getting quite frustrated of his selflessness!😆 He was actually feeling POSSESIVE!! Like with the stay away from Jai and all na?! Loveddd it to the core! In fact, I cannot tell u how much I loved it!! No measure big enough!!😳 N then part two! Lollzzz! It was totally HILARIOUS yaar!! Piya pretends she broke a nail! lolll!! N omgg! Abhay coming into her bedroom!! Gossshhh! really wanna see this scene in future episodes!!!😳😳😳 How romanticcc! N was sooo happy when he finally gave her her memory bck!!!! Pheww...

 

Waise y did u end it there? aur bhi 10-15 parts likh sakti thi na?😭😭 Now sanju is sad... really wanted to read more... show me tho almost kiss ke siwai aur koi romance nhi milta... don't take your OS away from us tooo!!!!😭😭 Write more na? plzz plz plz plz plz plz plzzz? Apni pyaaarrriii si pari ke liye tho likh hi sakhti hai na? 😭😭😭 Will be waiting for ur continuation!!😉

Originally posted by: minahil1997

sorries fr late comment SY 😳 , it was owesum , i just loved it... abhiya scenes were wow ... both two chappy were fantastic , lovely , owesum , great , fantastic ... now i m waiting fr 22 july... ok , and continue soon🤗

Originally posted by: syria2014

too lazy to read ur comment, itna lamba. siberia is tried, and need some rest😆