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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Waiting for the nxt part



i am writing at the same time responding to the comments dear...i need some time, i will update tomorrow buddy i think i have to create a new thread for my next update...moreover still there are around 10 to 15 regular readers who didn't complete reading 15 th part yet

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Deeps part XV was so very hilarious. i loved the "sexy Bar dancer" title. And the last bit where Maan takes Cutie with him was so very sweet. Can just imagine a naughty Maan and an even naughtier Geet. Love ur FF. Its too good. Keep it up dear. Thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sldeeps

yar i didn't mean that i am updating yesterday itself, i have started writing the update when i logged out


hi hi .. u dont know me still ... thukka mar raha tha ... shayad ..meim wait kar raha hoom sochkar tharas aakar ..bedard dil ..update kiya tho..hi hi...




u r really such a brat 😆

hey if u want me to call u nito then y did u give me two choices ...hmmm ok ...i will call u nito from now on wards



nito did u read 15 th part...complete the reading part and give me feed back...we can fight later

Edited by sldeeps - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 15
oh i just loved this part...
fantastic...
Maan still disturbed but liked the way he glared at Rohan...
oh the last part was so funny...
awesome...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sldeeps



nito did u read 15 th part...complete the reading part and give me feed back...we can fight later



Read ... already ..my heart is so weak..excited hokey hokey ... ye thak gaya .. ab update dedo..
long story for two pet names ..u will be bored .. .most of my buddies call me nito ..  aani ..abhee alien lag rahey hi..ohh so much to explain..leave it ..nito hee teek hi,,

thread bananey meim ithna time lagenga... grrr ..stop giving excuses ..grr kal mumma thee aaj thread ..bolo  bolo .. kal kya naya bahana doondegee..

phaltoo theory pe hold kar sab ka shrap (cursing ) lelo

"ek din meim ek update "

fir se sanju ke baby ka naam lo tho baby mere barey meim kya sochey gee...

ariyooo forum friends is there anybody else pregnant ..with craving of ..ff...

i am here for u ..hi hi..

waise mujey sirf brat math bolo...
spoiled bhee add karo ..
ok  ..

by the bye ...hmm Fight Acha Tha ...i never thought Maan will ever be able to say her or mention what he saw ..thought he may be enjoying the whole so called "bar dance" in his man hee man for his life time ... This Maan even showing some style sam eas Geet ..no wonder they will make a great pair ..

Edited by an.anit - 12 years ago
sldeeps thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read ... already ..my heart is so weak..excited hokey hokey ... ye thak gaya .. ab update dedo..
long story for two pet names ..u will be bored .. .most of my buddies call me nito ..  aani ..abhee alien lag rahey hi..ohh so much to explain..leave it ..nito hee teek hi,,

thread bananey meim ithna time lagenga... grrr ..stop giving excuses ..grr kal mumma thee aaj thread ..bolo  bolo .. kal kya naya bahana doondegee..

phaltoo theory pe hold kar sab ka shrap (cursing ) lelo

"ek din meim ek update "

fir se sanju ke baby ka naam lo tho baby mere barey meim kya sochey gee...

ariyooo forum friends is there anybody else pregnant ..with craving of ..ff...

i am here for u ..hi hi..

waise mujey sirf brat math bolo...
spoiled bhee add karo ..
ok  ..

by the bye ...hmm Fight Acha Tha ...i never thought Maan will ever be able to say her or mention what he saw ..thought he may be enjoying the whole so called "bar dance" in his man hee man for his life time ... This Maan even showing some style sam eas Geet ..no wonder they will make a great pair ..


ok then story mat batao ... i am 5n with nito

vaise WORK is under progress,  i am still writing


This Maan even showing some style sam eas Geet - Geet ki saatgi ka kuch to asar hogi na😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sldeeps



ok then story mat batao ... i am 5n with nito

vaise WORK is under progress,  i am still writing


This Maan even showing some style sam eas Geet - Geet ki saatgi ka kuch to asar hogi na😆



no ..what i mean is not because of her company he was actually like that only from the begining from inside .. like we may hide what we are ..but when we be with people like us that hidden part will come out ...
now dont doubt who writes the story
..LOL ...
my perception of character power is really good ..hatts off
to me ..LOL ..

if it is effect of geet, pari will also change ,,
maan too from indside naive truthful ..  but the  the parvarish ( bringing up) ,city life effect .. we are seeing different Maan ..ok..i think now u got my point ..LOL ..no ROFL...

Now U will Be thinking ..Uff ..Iska Kuch Nahee Ho Saktha ...
..

 Waise ..Bilkul Sahee Socha ...





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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: an.anit



no ..what i mean is not because of her company he was actually like that only from the begining from inside .. like we may hide what we are ..but when we be with people like us that hidden part will come out ...
now dont doubt who writes the story
..LOL ...
my perception of character power is really good ..hatts off
to me ..LOL ..

if it is effect of geet, pari will also change ,,
maan too from indside naive truthful ..  but the  the parvarish ( bringing up) ,city life effect .. we are seeing different Maan ..ok..i think now u got my point ..LOL ..no ROFL...

Now U will Be thinking ..Uff ..Iska Kuch Nahee Ho Saktha ...
..

 Waise ..Bilkul Sahee Socha ...







now dont doubt who writes the story - i exactly thought in the same way when i read ur explanation😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sldeeps



now dont doubt who writes the story - i exactly thought in the same way when i read ur explanation😆

See i Told u ..I have a better perception of characters ..LOL

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Posted: 12 years ago
now dont doubt who writes the story - i exactly thought in the same way when i read ur explanation😆

See i Told u ..I have a better perception of characters ..LOL

😆now i salute u

nito press the like button of part-15 my likes will increase