"love N deception"- abhay-piya FF updated pg-143

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Posted: 12 years ago
guys here is ma first piece of writing in this forum...let me knw should i continue it or not???

luv and deception

i don't know whether i should b happy or sad...i don't knw whether this is d perfect moment of ma life or nt...d thing i knw dat i loved him frm d bottom of ma heart  n i still love him bt nw it hurts.." i hate u"...bt i promise ,frm nw u r d reason of living ma rest of d life. i knw it won't b easy bt still this is d best moment in a girl's life n i m thankfull to GOD dat He has
 blessed me wid u!!
YES , u, my and abhay's sign of love or should i say u r just part of ma love b'coz he never loved me , he used me...bt still ... i cn't tell u how beautiful this feeling is, bt i don't av dat first person in my life with whom i want to share world's best feeling...he LEFT me...he BEtrayed me...n nw i hate him ( n suddenly she feels d pain inside her of saying these words) and  wl never forgive him n a tear rolled down her cheeks...( flashback- those beautiful moments she shared wid abhay started playing infront of her eyes like a movie)... she opened her eyes wid a jerk...n slowly placed her hands on her stomach...i knw u r his child " a vampire's child" bt u r just mine only mine, piya jaiswal's child!!!!






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minahil1997 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
owesum heena!!!!👏

the start is perfect ... wat an amazing idea ... pia is pregnant with abhay 's child😳 ... abhay used her and betrayed her , thats so sad , i hope he did it fr pia's safety and nt used her... the idea is owesum , waiting fr u to continue ... continue soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome i am too lazy to write my ff don;t tell minhali that , but will read ff though🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVED IT...Please continue..👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
HEY PLZ CONTINUE... I JST LOVED UR FF
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice start dr, plz give us more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it..
plz..continue & do pm me..when u update..
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hey dear...its good..pls continue...seems interesting..pm me for the next :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiala...kya twist dikhaya...Loved it...plzzz continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome start.Pia hate Abhay & Abhay used Pia.I m shocked😲.Plz do continue & PM me😊