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PrashT thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Cuty16

Hye Prashu, Heyyy Rups😳
great yaar,
just loved dis part. Thnks yaar😳
b'coz my two wishes got fulfilled
1st avita were 2gether for some time only but its ok loved dere convo,
2nd dat i got to know about arpi's past wo bhi before avi ha ha ha.
main past is yet to come...

Arpi's past is really painful,
realy life becomes hell when sumone like Rajvir enters and start playing wid ur emotions. I knw dear
This is just a half past...

Hope avi solve these all. Hope so😊
Nice one dear,will wait for next one.
will update sooon😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jes_jade

Finally we got few updates & new OS frm this forum...😲😲

U shud all give double updates when updating so late...That's ur punishment...but then maybe Priya wud have to update 4-5 updates together...🤣🤣Just Kidding..Don't take seriously...😆😆 hah
aha..i wont also😆😆😆

Coming to the FF..

It was brilliant writing...& fantastic update !!👏👏👏 😃😃😃

Well Arpi is trying to be strong by herself..but I guess she is falling a little weak..& I knw this is where our hero Avi wud come to make her strong & protect her...😍😍😍 I hope he comes😊

Rajveer...😡😡
Now what is his problem...why can't he leave her alone..?? I think he is a psycho !!🤪🤪
he is😆😡

Plzz..continue soon...😊
😊😊 Sure Sis

Love ya Sis..🤗
🤗🤗 Love ya tooo🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aleena1

Hey Prashuuu.u.u.u.u.u.u.u😆🤗


A.l.e.e.e.n.a.a.a.a.a.a.a😆😳


How r u? M fine dear... Whr r u?? nd How r u??
Loved the ff... amazing👏 ⭐️
the characters are sooo different from the serial... great work👏👏👏 Thnk u dear
Loved the spin the bottle scene...😊... keeping us in suspense... and abt Arpis past... update soon... i wonder what rajveer has done to Arpi... You will get to knw very soon😊
update soon
keep it up👍🏼 Thnks a tonn Aleena😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Cuty16

Hye Prashu,
Did u got the dates?



Heyy Rups..

nah ..nt yet😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: danno

hey my c2 Heyyy My Jalebi😳😳😳😳😳😳
just love it Awww..so sweet of you😳
yaar iss rajbir ka jaldi se kuch karo avi...arpi ko kuch jyada hi dara raha hai yeh abhi toh bahut darana baki hai
jusr love it 😳😳
well done and keep it up Sure Jalebi😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a lott for the appreciation 😳😳

Please there is request from me ..Please keep the forum alive as much as possible...😳

Next part is in next post😳

Hope you will like this part too😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heyy Guys this is next part of my FF😳

I hope you all like it😃

This part is dedicated to Nidha for her comments and her FF too😉







Arpita was alone at her home. MC Rai had to go for urgent meeting in Delhi and he would be returning after two-three days. Ramu Kaka and other servants were sleeping in servant quarter which was at a distance from their bungalow. Her heartbeats increased with fear. She could feel the thumping of her heart. She didn't know what to do. Suddenly, someone threw a stone which crashed the window pane. The stone was inside the note. She was very hesitant to pick it but still she took name of God and picked it.

It read,

Hey Darling,

I am coming to take you with me forever from rest of the world. You were mine, you are and will be MINE always.

Yours,

Rajveer.


She quickly went to close the doors and windows, and sat quietly sobbing at her bed. She was praying and sobbing. 😭When suddenly, she heard some sound in the hall. It was sound of breaking glass. She started shivering badly. She hid behind a couch near the door of her room. After few minutes of silence, someone started opening the door vigorously and then Rajveer banged and almost broke the door, and it opened. 😡She was already shaking in fear and was adjusting herself in her small hideout so that Rajveer doesn't see her.😭


While Rajveer was very angry and frustrated since he couldn't find her. He calmed himself and called her out, "My dear Arpita... Where are you??? I know you are here. I can smell you..🤢🤢" and he takes a deep breath as if he is trying to figure out her smell. He started searching balcony and closet but couldn't find her. He banged his hand on the window pane. Blood was oozing out of his cut 👏but he couldn't feel the pain as his eyes were searching for Arpita. His back was facing her and she found a chance of escaping but at the same time he turned and saw her running away. She went in the hall and hid behind a wall near to wireless phone. Rajveer in split of a second came in the hall, "I know you are here babe!! Don't play hide and seek with me.. Im not in the mood to play. Why are you scared of me? I wont harm you..." 😡


Arpita tiptoed towards the phone which was 10 steps from her. She tried calling Manjari but she wasn't picking up her call. And when she picked up, she heard a male voice and the call was disconnected abruptly. Manjari thought that may be MC rai had come home. Rajveer was standing just behind Arpita and took the phone, disconnecting the call. Arpita froze. She turned around and stared at her nightmare who was in front of her with an evil smile on his face. Rajveer jerked his neck and said, "Here you are my darling." Arpita was stepping backward and pleading.. "No...No...Please ...Please...let me go.. Please leave me.😭." Rajveer, with a slight higher tone said, "How can I? I have told you hundred times that You are mine. I have right on you.🤢🤢 Then why will I leave you???" Arpita went more and more backward and he was taking steps towards her. She banged another wall. Rajveer leaned forward. He touched her hand and glided his fingers on her hands. She felt disgusted on his touch. Rajveer almost forced himself on her to kiss and caught her hand tightly so that she couldn't run away. He pressed her mouth so as to kiss her🤢. She was struggling herself to get free but couldn't.


Before he could kiss, she hit him hard on his feet by thumping her foot to his feet with all her strength. 👏👏The heels of the sandals hit him. His grip on her loosened and she ran away. Rajveer for some time hold his foot but then again he quickly caught her again from her hairs and pulled them badly. She yelled with pain and pleaded, "Let go off me..!! Please" 😭😭Rajveer shouted, "After what you have done to me, Do you think Ill leave you? I wont" She apologized and pleaded again and again but alas! Her pleading went on deaf ears. He threw her down while she fell down on the place where glass was broken before. A small piece of glass pierced her leg and blood oozed out from it.😭😭😭 She cried with pain but there was no one to hear her cry for help. He came towards her and took off her duppatta with a lust look on his face. When he bent down, to save herself , she took a bigger piece of glass and with full force she pierced it on his shoulder and ran off. 👍🏼


Her wound on the leg was bleeding and paining badly. She couldn't even walk properly. 😭But she managed to run as much she could. She went in the servant quarter but all of them were unconscious. She ran from there and thought to go at Manjari's place. She was running towards the main road and thought, "Why this has to happen with me? I don't want to live with such fear." Her past memories became alive. She though before Rajveer could destroy her she would kill herself. She knew he wont leave her until she dies. "It all started with me and it should end with me. Why should manjari and dad suffer from this? They have already suffered a lot. I cannot risk their lives because of me. If I die, Rajveer's revenge would be over and everything would be back to normal. I cannot take this anymore. I don't have the strength to face him" Back in her mind she worried about Avdhesh too since there was an invisible emotional connection between them😭😭. She reached the main road and saw a car coming. She said crying 😭, "Bye Dad, Manjari, RV and Avi...I am sorry" and came in front of the car. The car immediately stopped. The distance between car and Arpita was very less. It was about to hit her when the person applied the brakes. He came out of the car and Arpita fainted in his arms. She called "Avi.." before fainting. * The driver was Avi..., whom did you thought might be?*😳

Avdhesh was shocked to see her condition. He got worried. He took her in his arms and carefully kept her in his car. He went towards the hospital.


In the hospital,

The doctor said, "Don't worry. She fainted due to excessive blood loss and mental stress. We have given her medicine and the blood. She will be fine once she gains conscious." 😊And doctor patted his shoulder to give him assurance. Avdhesh thanked the doctor and went inside the room where she was kept. For the first time, Avdhesh was feeling helpless. His love, Arpita was lying there unconscious. He wasn't there with her when she needed him. He didn't even know what happened. He gently took her hand and kissed it. 😳😳He saw bandages on her palm. There were bandages in leg too. A single drop of tear came into his eye. He said softly, "I promise you, my love that I wont spare the person who did this. Please come back." 😳😳😳He kissed her forehead and went outside to inform Manjari and RV.


After some time, both-Manjari and RV came and were shocked to see Arpita in such state.😲😲😲 Manjari said being worried about her, "Oh My God!!! How did this happen??? What happened to her" and suddenly she realized the male voice was of Rajveer's. Terror struck her too.

Avdhesh saw her expression and he knew that she knows something.


Avdhesh calmly but with a firm voice said, "I need some answers Manjari. You know what I am talking about. You both- Arpita and Manjari denied when I asked both of you and now this has happened!!! She is lying there unconscious..and I am not able to do anything. Tell me what happened. Please'before its too late."


*********************** End of Part 9*************************************


I hope you liked the update.

Please let me know your reviews regarding the update😊

Plz feel free to comment😊 Ill be waiting for your comments😊

If you liked it, Plz hit the "like" button

Edited by prash_t - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
GJ 🤗 🤗

I am shocked that i am going to unres post my before beloved Jaanu Saku - Chan

I am first too 🥳 🥳 🥳

phew this is my last unres post in this FF finally

UGH I HATE THAT RAJVEER😡😡

Enjoy ur life your few days Rajveer because when ODB will come to know you're the one who was torturing his beloved then you're DEAD 🤢🤢🤢

poor Arpi 😭😭😭

the best part of UD was Arpi taking Avi's name before committing suicide...i just loved it 👏👏👏

Lion started Roaring 🥳🥳




LOVE YOU GJ 🤗

Edited by yoga23priya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part Prashu !!!!!!👏👏👏



This Rajveer is such a creep...😡😡🤢🤢

I hope Avdesh knws all the truth & abt Arpi's past life...uske baad toh Rajveer ki hogi dhagaddum pittai !!!!

Update soon..😳😳

Love ya !!🤗🤗🤗






PS- @Sweetu kun : I am also shocked to see u unres ur post so soon...😲😲😆😆👏👏

Am busy with studies..Exms on 10th & 14th...Wish me luck...Kuch bhi yaad nhi ho rha...😭😭

Love ya dear !!
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Missing u all a lot!!😭😭
Edited by jes_jade - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow Mrs.Thakur mind blowing Update dear ;-)
OMG poor Arpi bechaari ko kitna scare kardiya that she preferd to commit sucide then living in hell,
Rajbeer u jerk once ODB came to knw about u naa , tu to gaya bacche hehe
Luv u yaar for Avi's entry at last moment. Muuuwwwaahhh...
Update soon dear
Dying to see Arpi's reaction when she vil find Avi in front of her ;-)

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