i like the kheer scene a lot
great update continue soon
Yet another excellent update. Can't wait to see the next update as I am dying to read more of GoHem from your POV.
Originally posted by: angelirebelli
Awww... thanx much Shilpa... U r a darling, my own Genie on IF...🤗🤗🤗
Awesome update Shilpa.. anything else would just not be your thing ...U have become an expert story teller ... ⭐️Love the way everything is falling into place got GoHam... the effort each is making for the other... so real..lifelike...👏.Gopi trying to send a message to Aham via the kheer was beautiful, how cute !!! Aham, finally, getting to know about Teej, there isn't anything talking cant help clear...Adore Koki, so like her to take Rashi to task.. on their team now, Kokila will be something to watch out for !!The greedy me wants more... 😉The VM was fabulous, downloading it for to my library...thanx again Shilpa!!
Originally posted by: queenyuks
I really liked this part.
I loved Koki's awesome snooping and catching Raashi again
And I loved the Ahem and Gopi moments.
Thanks for this treat Shilpaben
Yuks
Ahhh ,... you really did a wonderful update ...You made me cry, after seeing the vm ...I can't tell you how I feel, ...thank you.
Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
great part..
kokila damn good detective
cought rashifabulous updatelove it & enjoy❤️👍🏼ty sweetywaiting eagerly next one
Originally posted by: Jake-neil
Couldn watch vm. Will save it for later. Only a hug? Was hoping for more to dream abt Ju.. Raja😆. And how dare Koki shout at Rashi? Grrr..
Originally posted by: winter30
I just love it. especially your vm. Such a beautiful song.
P.S could you tell me which movie the song is fromMany Thanks in advance😊
What a great update ... The Gohem relationship is blossoming more and more.
All loose ends are being tied up one by one with it the guilt of mistreatment by Ahem continuing to surface and yet again he apologises.For Ahem it feels that this is his second chance so might as well do it right.The VM was mindblowingly awesome. You certainly have tugged the hearstrings of each and every Gohem follower, including mine.Now waiting patiently for more togetherness in the next update.
Shilpa fabulous update! I like this Aham and Gopi that understand each other and they are so cute. Update soon. Eagerly waiting for the next part. 😃
Originally posted by: Traxy101
Really nice chapter, glad to see Ahem and Gopi getting closer. I really like the way you write, it's very unique and makes the story interesting
Originally posted by: neetusidhu
wow shilpa beautiful...is all i can say about this part...great job...
Originally posted by: soni4eva
fanx 4 da pm n da updatefinally kokila caught rashi da update was fab luvd itplzz cont soon👏
Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms
Your update was fabulous. GoHam were sweet to each other and Rashi/Koki combo were at it just as they do in the serial...lol.
love it!!!! i cant wait wait for the next update!!!
Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s
sorry for not commenting..
actually im busy..
wil b back on 25th ... with lots of comments to ur SS
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