Rudranethra (ss) maaneet part 6 pg 40 updated - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
wonder who want geet
super part
love it
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amazing...interesting and mysterious...yeh kahani to aur bhi dilchasp ho gayi hai...please Deva update soon
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Who was abhiram talking to??
VM selection was good. Apt well...
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well interesting update...vm was good...but can u please tell me what did that mean???
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great part...
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awesome update...
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wonderful update...yet again Maan reached Geet when she needed him...without either one's knowledge...what's happening to Maan in such times...anyway good to see that he's there to console her...who was Abhiram talking to..??/Looks like the entry of the devil is about to happen,hmm??well its time I guess...what did he send Abhiram seeing which he's so frightened...??clear out some mysteries yaar so that we poor humans can understand better😆...but I expected nothing less😃...its brilliant...do continue soon...
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superbbb!!!
 
that maan and geet are somehow connected with each other and that maan is her saviour!
 
continue sooon!
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Part 6

abhiram slowly opened the cover...his heart raced in fear...when he saw the photos...he almost fainted..."no" he screamed in pain...he tore the photos into pieces...he held his head screaming..."vasundhara..."...again his mobile rang...abhiram looked at the number...he knew it was him...he has no courage left to face him now...but he has to answer the call...slowly he took the mobile and answered the call...

"abhi..tumne bathaya nahi..tumhe gift kaisa laga?"

abhiram clenched his fist in anger...

"arey abhi..ithna bhi gussa math kiya karo..sehath keliye achcha nahi hey..."

abhiram got shocked...he looked around in fear...

"ghabarao math...mein waha pe nahi hu...lekin ek baath yaad rakhna...kal geet mere ghar mein hona chahiye...nahi tho..iss baar photos nahi...sab kuch live dekhneko milega..."

having said these words he cut the call leaving abhiram in shock and fear...abhiram  fell on the floor...being not able to digest the shocking photos...

an hour passed...

geet slolwy opened her eyes ...and looked at maan who was holding her tightly in his embrace...she screamed in fear and pushed maan away waking him up...

"tum...tum yaha kaise aagaya...aur mein tumhare saath yaha pe...kaise?" geet screamed in anger...

maan slowly opened his eyes and saw geet staring at him with anger filled eyes...he smirked...and stood up...and started walking ignoring her...which irritated geet to the core...

"ruko...mein tumse kuch pooch rahi hu...?"geet yelled...

maan turned back..and in one jerk pulled geet into his embrace...and kissed her..on cheeks...geet stood speechless with his sudden act...

"chalo mere saaath" he said looking into her eyes...

geet could not say a word after that...she was just lost in his eyes...maan freed geet from his embrace...he held her hand tight and started walking ...geet didn't resist him..infact she followed him as if she was under his spell...

both reached downstairs...all the guests looked them in confusion...geet kept staring at maan without an eyeblink...maan walked holding geet's hand in his usual royal walk...ignoring all the ppl around him...he reached his car..made geet to sit inside and drove the car towards his residence...geet sat silently in the car looking at maan...lost in his presence...

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Abhiram locked himself in his room...he was crying his heart out.. thinking about vasundhara...just then his mobile rang...his eyes widened in shock... he took a deep breath and answered the call...

"tume kya lagtha hey..geet ko ghar se kisike saath bhejne se...mujhe patha nahi chalega..."

abhiram got shocked...nothing made sense to him...

"mein ne tume warning di thi..phir bhi tumne nahi maana..tho mein bhi apna wadha poora karonga..."

the call got cut...abhiram stood speechless still holding the phone...tears rolled down his eyes...he collapsed on the floor...and the phone in his hand broke into pieces...

Ujjain

Ganga did all the necessary pujas and rituals...as per the instructions of head priest...she prayed with all her might hoping for her son's betterment...

"beti...hume jo karna tha...woh kardiya...ab sab bolashankar ke upar chod dho...sab mangal hoga" said the head priest looking at ganga..who was chanting prayers...with teary eyes...

ganga sighed and stood up...when she was about to give money to the head priest...he stopped her..saying..."yaha paisa ka zaroorath nahi hey beti..."....ganga smiled and touched his feet...the priest blessed her...ganga smiled and turned back to leave...just then an aghora appeared before her...she got shocked...

"gangapathi ko dharthi pe lana hey...samjao apne bete ko..." said aghora looking into ganga's eyes...scaring her to death...

ganga stood speechless...a whole procession of saints passed by ganga...and in that procession...aghora got disappeared...which made ganga to faint due to shock...the head priest who was watching these things came running to her rescue...

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Geet was lost in maan's presence...she sat silently in the car staring at him...after some time she slept...when maan reached his residence finally..he stopped the car and looked at her...Then suddenly he heard someone calling his name...he looked around...he found none...he shook his head thinking it was his imagination...but when he heard the voice for second time he immediately looked aside...a hazy image of an oldwoman appeared as a smoke outside the window glass of the car...maan's eyes widened in shock...

"andher math jao...bach nahi paogi..." the oldwoman said and disappeared...leaving confused and horrified maan behind...

                                                                                                       to be continued...

Edited by jwalamukhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow maan take geet and left 
pls cont waiting