Rudranethra (ss) maaneet part 6 pg 40 updated

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maharnavami...9th day of 10 day durga festival...

Ujjaini

Dusshera celebrations were full on in ujjaini...many devotees were visiting the temple to offer prayers to the deity of the shrine...everything was going well...special poojas were taking place continuously...whole area was crowded...

maan...an young business tycoon of delhi visited ujjaini for the first time on the request of his mother...ganga...although maan was not at all interested in such rituals he attended the shrine for the sake of his mother...Maan entered the shrine with his mother...just then an aghora came near him...maan initially got scared when aghora stood near him suddenly...ganga went ahead for darshan...maan started to leave...but aghora pulled maan's hand and gave him a strange thing made of bones...with sanskrit inscriptions all over it...maan looked at aghora confused...he was frightened with the look of aghora and his way of behavior...then aghora forced maan to take the thing made of bones...

aghora then kept his hand over maan's head as an act of blessing...and left...maan without a second thought threw the thing given by aghora aside and went inside the temple...

when maan entered the temple...he felt a strange feeling...as if he came there before...slowly the sound of damarukam started...its intensity became more and more...maan heard some voices "hara...hara...hara...hara...hara...:'all around him...making him sick...he looked around ...he was walled off from rest of the people...immediately he turned aside...it was dark...he took few steps forward...his eyes widened looking at the image standing before him...he felt as if his life is ending...his hands were shivering...that image started to move towards him...it moved closer...closer...

maan screamed..."maaa" and woke up...ganga came running into maan's room...she sighed as it was the daily nightmare of maan since the day they came from ujjaini last year...

maan looked at ganga with a horrified look...ganga couldn't control her tears after seeing the daily torture of his son...

what is the reason behind maan's nightmare...what did aghora gave to maan...what is there in maan's future...? what is the solution to maan's problem?

to know more read my latest ss...rudranethra...a maaneet fanfic of socio-fantasy...


Index


part 1 page 3


part 2 page 10


part 3 page 17


part 4 page 25


part 5 page 33


part 6 page 40



Plz do comment ...



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Posted: 12 years ago
Sounds very interesting...do continue!!
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hey plz dont stress yourself first complete ur ongoing SS then continue with this

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Originally posted by: abinash079

hey plz dont stress yourself first complete ur ongoing SS then continue with this

plz tell me all your works are FF or SS

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no dear iam not stressing myself...all the ss which i am writing are entirely different from one another...i feel happy when i write updates for all the four...