Originally posted by: naamteeg
Dramatic and comedic parts are coming together so well, Tonya!It is almost like we are riding the roller coaster ride of Maan and Geet's emotions.😭You made me feel sad for Geet when she walks out and sits outside contemplating Maan's attitude towards her.😊Then you lighten the mood by brining her back to the bedroom with a smile on her face and admiring a sleeping Maan.🤣Then you jump into a comedic scene of them comparing arms and biting each other's fingers.The transition of emotions are great and you are handling them so well.🤣And on a funnier note. Below are a couple of things I noticed for the first time in your SS/FF🤣🤣- "pins her down on the bed"...ahem.. ahem.. Tonya you are getting daring hon🤣- "please click here for next part" 🤣 takes away the pleasure of going through each page looking for your update and stopping to read and enjoy other's comments. I guess it works well on SS but not on FF...I couldn't stay away till the weekend to read your post... see I am so addicted😳 ... now I have to go make some tea to keep myself up to finish some work... it was all worth it! Loving the new FF!
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