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fariya94

@fariya94

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#771

sonia have u forgotten that u r an ff writer...oh God u r testing my patience...update jaldi warna😡

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sonia1000

@sonia1000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#772

Its not an update 😛 ... First of all sorry to those who were waiting for update...bt I don't think k I'll b able to continue this ff... You guys have no idea what is happening in my life... I lost someone close to me... I had a death in my house... It was so sudden k my whole family was in shock... I still can't believe that she is no more with us...bt what can we do... We have to accept it... Its a bitter reality bt we have to accept it...bas Allah ko jo manzoor tha...
Plus I guess their is nothing left in this story...bt if u guys really want me to continue then plz give me suggessions k how should I continue cus my mind is not working... I did try to write but I couldn't... So plz all ff writers neet, anuska, dj, alisha, aishu n all others...plz I need ur suggessions...

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fariya94

@fariya94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#773

well sorry for watever happened its really unfortunate...see if dont want to conti. the ff its ok...but give an ending update...so that it should be called a complete ff.

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MidnightMusings

@MidnightMusings

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#774

Hey Sonia... My sympathy to you and your family... May the person's soul rest in peace..

It's alright but please don't end the FF... Take your time to write.. I will wait for your update... The current track of Mahi and Sid is great... Plus we all love your way of writing yaar... So please do continue it ... We would love to have you write back...

Take your time, whenever you feel better...

Take Care

Liashna🤗

Edited by Liashna - 13 years ago

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Medha

@sr-medha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#775

Hey,sonia:)

This year I lost ny grandma..Iknow its really difficult to accept the death of ur near and dear ones..but we have to move on...and ultimately time heals all the wounds..

I hope u recover from the trauma..

and do continue the FF if possible..

lots of love,

medha

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Mala

@mala1108

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#776

My sympathy to you n your family

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Neetu

@RestlessWriter

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#777

Originally posted by: sonia1000
Its not an update 😛 ... First of all sorry to those who were waiting for update...bt I don't think k I'll b able to continue this ff... You guys have no idea what is happening in my life... I lost someone close to me... I had a death in my house... It was so sudden k my whole family was in shock... I still can't believe that she is no more with us...bt what can we do... We have to accept it... Its a bitter reality bt we have to accept it...bas Allah ko jo manzoor tha...
Plus I guess their is nothing left in this story...bt if u guys really want me to continue then plz give me suggessions k how should I continue cus my mind is not working... I did try to write but I couldn't... So plz all ff writers neet, anuska, dj, alisha, aishu n all others...plz I need ur suggessions...

Sonia,

Sorry to hear about your loss.. Its really difficult to deal with the death of a dear one and my prayers are with you and your family to have the strength to deal with this difficult time. Also, may her soul rest in peace.

As for the FF, its entirely up to you. Whether you are in the frame of mind to continue or not is your decision. If not continuation, like Fariya suggested, I think you could just giving a concluding update. Take your time and write whenever you feel like it.

As for suggestions, I really don't know how you'd planned on taking the story ahead so..

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huma khan

@humafaiiry

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#778

mis snia mehra hw dare u cn thnk f endin dis ff. . . . I jst luv luv LUV dis ff! Its soOo Beautifuly writen. .m folowng ur ff frm a lng tym bt never get tym to cment! Bt seriously yar dis s perfct da way u have proceeded it til nw. . .u hve dne ol da justice to sid, ridz n mahi's charactrz! Mahi s da highlite f dis ff 4 me, she s sho cute n naughty lyk her parents! . . . Modi family s rokng man, N SR romance *blush* *blush*, m cravng 4 more, plz bring it up . . .as per sugestion i wantd dm to go to houstn n want to c ridzy in a ful modi bahu form. . .dis twist wl increase da interests! . . . Anyways plz plz plz i beg u cntinue it! N plz do pm me wen u write nxt!

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huma khan

@humafaiiry

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#779

n ol ma condolence wd u n ur family! May her/hs soul rest n peace. . . .i knw its vry dificult 4 u bt u knw na its lyf n v hve to move on! Keep smilng BS 😊. . .

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sonia1000

@sonia1000

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#780

Hello🤗. Disclaimer: This update is a complete non-sense...because I myself have no idea what I have written😆. But PLZ do leave ur comments if u want me to update again😛

Part 33:

They kept coming closer n closer. They were just a breath away from a sensuous passionate liplock when

TRING TRING!!!! (so what if Sid lost his mobile...landline to hai na 😛)

Thankfully "TRING TRING" brought them back to their senses. Sid took a step back, away from Riddhima n Riddhima feeling all shy ran towards bathroom. Sid moved to attend the phone.

Sid: Hello...

Receptionist: Good afternoon Sir..

Sid: Good afternoon...

Receptionist: Sorry to disturb u Sir... bt there is a call for you...should I transfer...

Sid(to himself): yahan kis ka phone aa sakta hai... (to receptionist) Ya... PLZ...

Receptionist: OK...(she transfered the call)

Sid: Hello...who is this?

Mahi(almost shouting): WHAT IS THIS PAPA... MAIN KAL SE AAP KA PHONE TRY KAR RAHI HOON...AAP KA PHONE KAHAN HAI...

Sid: Saans to le lo...

Mahi: NAHI AAP BATAO MUJY...

Sid: Relax Mahi main batata hoon...(then he told her all that happened... ofcourse the edited version😉)

Mahi(started laughing): aap dono Honeymoon par gaye ho ya adventurous trip par...(just then something strike her) magar pauhanch k to mujy phone kar sakte they na...kyu nae kiya...

Sid(how could he tell her): Wo...wo kuch zaroori kaam aa gaya tha...is liye bhool gaya...

Mahi(sarcastic tone): Ohhh...Aap shaid bhool rahe hain ke aap kisi conference pr nae honeymoon pr gaye hain...to kaisa zaroori kaam... aisa kya kar rahe they...(suspicious)

Sid(thinking of an excuse...of course can't tell her what he actually was doing😉): Wo...wo actually...aisa hua k...main...main...

Mahi: Bas... bas...samaj gayi... *shook her head* mujy pata tha k yeh sab hone wala hai... I guess I was expecting too much from u both...Its all my fault, main aap se expect bhi kaise kar saki hoon k aap mom se door raho gaye...(after a pause) aap dono ko to bas mauka chahiye... kahin bhi shuru ho jate ho...even apne hi ghar k kitchen main jane se pehle b knock karna parta hai hai k pata nae kab kya dekhne ko mil jaye... (Sid embarassed by Mahi's comment)

Sid(stammering): Nae nae... aisa koi baat nae hai... wo to main...

Mahi(sarcastically): Chill Papa... na main itni bewakoof hoon aur na aap itne Shareef...so no need to lie...not to me atleast...

Sid(tried to change the topic): Acha tumhain yahan ka number kaha se mila?

Mahi: Bas mil gaya...mere dil ne kaha k aap ko meri vishesh tipniyoon ki zaroorat hai...to maine kaise bhi kar k number dhoond nikala...wo kehte hain na kisi cheez ko dil se chaho to puri Kainat tumhain us se milane ki koshish main lag jati hai... (Kainat means universe not me😆)

Sid(irritated): OK OK... Cut this crap n come to point...phone kyu kiya...

Mahi: How rude...maine itni mushkil se wahan ka number dhoonda...wo bhi sirf aap ki help karne k liye...instead of saying thank you to me...aap mujy attitude dikha rahe ho... I know aap ko mera phone karna kyu acha nae laga...apka romance session jo intrupt kar diya... (doing emotional attyachar)Aap to wahan jatey hi mujy bhool gaye...

Sid: Baby its not like that...you know na how much I love you...

Mahi: Bas aur kuch kehne ki zaroorat nae...(after a pause) upar wale ne sirf shakal hi gori di hai...pr dil to boht kala hai aap ka...😆

Sid: OK...I m sorry...ab to maan jao...

Mahi: hmm...its OK...n don't ever talk to me like this...

Sid: OK...(after a pause) acha batao to sahi phone kyu kiya...

Mahi: actually main bore ho rahi thi...to socha kisi aur ko bore karti hoon...

Sid(confused): huh?

Mahi: Nothing leave it...

Sid: Acha...Bore kyu ho rahi thi...Vikky hai na wahan pr...

Mahi: I don't wanna talk about that idiot...

Sid(serious): Mahi!!! wo tumhara bhai hai...

Mahi: I don't like him...he use to pull my hair...irritates me 24x7...aur aaj...aj to wo mera lollypop bhi kha gaya ...aur aap us idiot ko mera bhai kehte ho...aap ko kya pata yaha mere sath kya kya attyachar ho rahe hain...

Sid:(laughed slightly): Mahi aap se chota hai na...jab aap ka apna chota bhai ho ga to aap us ko bhi aisa hi kaho gay...

Mahi(raised her eyebrows): Chota Bhai (stressed on this word)...mujy aap k irade kuch theek nae lag rahe...you better concentrate on Sheela than indulging urself in such ☺️activities...

Sid(again changed the topic): aa...Acha..acha... batao ab aagay kya karna hai...I guess ye Sheela ka topic boht ho gaya...tumhari mom ko boht bura lag raha ho ga...main kehta hoon ye darama khatam karte hain...

Mahi: Hey bhagu!!!! meri saari mehnat pr pani dalo gay kya...aap ko mom pyaar k do shabad kya keh dain...ap to foran phisal jate ho... aisa karo gay to puri life phisalte raho gay... soch lo papa...(Trying to brainwash Sid) aisa mauka bar bar nae mile ga... ap mom ko prove kar do that you are a man...aur ghar main sirf aap ki chale gi...just imagine...

Sid began to imagine himself dressed like an emperor (Mugal-e-Azam types imagine Saleem) n Riddhima who was dressed as "Anarkali" feeding him grapes... (My Sid n Riddhima have nothing to do except imagining faltu stuff😆)

Mahi(loudly): HELLO!!!!!

Sid(Mahi's voice brought him back to reality): huh...

Mahi: So...???

Sid(thought for a second): OK...we'll continue this drama...

Mahi: Great...(Anji called Mahi)...I m coming Masi...(now to Sid)...OK Papa have to go now...will call u later... Bye...

Sid: Bye...n Take care...love you...

Mahi: Love you too...Bye...

After disconnecting call he moved out of their cottage...n scene shifted to Riddhima who was hiding her self behind bathroom door n over heard all this...n was shocked😲

Riddhima(talking to herself): To itne dino se dono baap beti mil kar mere sath game khel rahe they... how mean they are... isi liye Sid itne din se mujy ignore kar raha tha... un dono ne mere against plot kiya n how dumb I m k I fell for it... is ka badla to main le kar rahoon gi... Mr. Mean Modi...ab dekho tumhari ye Mrs Chudail Modi kya karti hai *evil smile*😈

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Yes...yes...I actually updated😛. I have no idea where this story is heading🤔. Jo dil main aaya likh dala😉. I m writing after so long so PLZ ignore spelling mistakes😆.n that Mugal-e-Azam wala part, just ignore it...I don't know what have gotten into me that I wrote it.😆

Hope u all did have read my note... thanx a lot for showing ur concern towards me n my family. I know life is not in our hands, we can't change our fate... we have to accept it n move on...So from now we won't talk about it anymore n Yes I m continuing this ff bt don't expect regular updates, I don't know when I'll b able to update again as I m being too lazy these days😛.

DO LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS...its a dhamki😈...😆

Edited by sonia1000 - 13 years ago