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Geet slowly drove to the parking area of Orbit Mall, Malad. She parked the car near a pillar where it was mentioned B2-LS. She memorised the pillar no. and then escorted Abhijeet to Cafe Coffee Day. Both Abhijeet and Geet entered the Coffee Shop

Waiter: Yes Ma'am! Welcome to Cafe Coffee Day. How can I help you?

Geet replied: A table for two!

The waiter showed them a corner table and Geet and Abhijeet moved towards it.

Meanwhile Maan drove to Naitik's place. Naitik sat on the couch dozing off being exhausted after work. There was a knock at the door,

Akshi: Naitik? Dekhiye na, koi aaya hai

Naitik didn't reply

Akshi: Naitik??

She came out wiping her hands in her apron and shaked Naitik

Akshi: Naitik? Arey, yeh to so gaye! Mainhi kholti hoon.

Saying this she moved towards the door and unbolted it.

Akshi: Namaste!

Maan: Akshara bhabhi?

Akshi: ji? Aap?

Maan: main Maan, Naitik ka dost!

Akshi: oh haan! Maan Singh Khurana, right?

Maan: yeah! Naitik hai?

Akshi:yup, so rahe hain, aap chaliye main uthati hoon.

She moved towards Naitik and jerked him once calling his name, he didn't respond. She tried twice again and then thrice but he continued to snore! Finally, Akshi twisted the end of her pallu into an ear-bud like shape and then tickled Naitik. Naitik got up suddenly and then not realising of Maan's presence he pulled Akshi in his arms.

Naitik: aaj aapka mood kaafi achcha hai?

Akshi blushed and asked, Naitik? Koi aaya hai?

Naitik: aapki chaalon se mein waakif hoon!

Maan coughed

Naitik looked at Maan and then at Akshi and then stood up suddenly with a jerk.

Naitik: arey Maan!

Maan: Naitik! Humein kahin jaana tha'right?

Naitik blushed: haan! Chalo, Akshara aap tayyar ho jaiiyye!

Akshi: Maan ji! Aap kuch lenge?

Maan: no, I am perfectly fine!

Akshara insisted: kuch toh!

Maan:ji nahi, kuch nahi.

Akshara: okay Naitik, I'll get ready, give me 10 minutes

 

***

 

Geet and Abhijeet sat sipping Coffee, Abhijeet still looked gloomy. Geet placed one hand on Abhijeet's palm

Geet: Abhijeet! Aap mere colleague hain! Mujhe aapse kuch nahi chupana chahiye.

Abhijeet looked puzzled: matlab?

Geet took a deep breath: Abhijeet! I am married, maine kisi ko apna poora naam kabhi nahi bataya!

Abhijeet was flabbergasted: Dr!

Geet grew serious: Let me properly introduce myself to you. I am Mrs. Geet Khu' Geet stopped and then replied. Meri do saal pehle HP ke chhote se gaon mein shaadi hui aur phir I came to Delhi.

Abhijeet looked shocked: Dr.! I am sorry. Pur main kabhi aapke husband se.

Geet: we parted'

Abhijeet felt guilty

Geet:isliye, main kabhi relationship mein dobara panda nahi chahti, already meri zindagi mein kaafi shocks hai, aur nahi!

 

***

 Maan drove the car and parked it beside a pillar named B2-LS. There was just one more car in that section. They shopped for a while and then, Maan went his way strolling through the corridors, peering into the shops. He had no wish to come there and chat but Naitik's insistence. Suddenly, strange feelings started surrounding his mind again. They were just the same as he had experienced at the airport. Zaroor kuch hai. Shayad Geet yahin' He left his sentenced unfinished and then started trodding through the crowds searching for his lost love. Geet also started feeling strange. A different scent had suddenly saturated the air. She tried to hurry up.

Geet:Abhijeet, I have some work. Kuch nayi reports hai. So I think we should leave.

Abhijeet stood up and smiled back.

 

By the time Geet rose up, Maan had seen her from the glass wall and his eyes got filled with tears of joy. He took a step ahead and then suddenly stopped.

 

Abhijeet: Geet!

Geet: Abhijeet! Kya hua?

Abhijeet: one request?

Geet: boliye na?

Abhijeet: ek hug aur ek kiss?

Geet burst into laughter for the first time in these 2 years. She pulled Abhijeet's cheeks and placed a small peck on them. Abhijeet blushed. Then she hugged him tightly. Abhijeet hugged him back

 

Maan stood there helpless, what had he seen moments before, Geet with someone else? Geet actually was hugging some other man. Maan's heart burnt. His rage grew more. He couldn't swallow this fact that Geet could be with some other man. But some part of his mind spoke to him Maan! Tumhe dukh kyun ho raha hai? Tumhi ne to apne se use durr kiya, aur ab woh, apni zindagi mein khush hain Maan Singh Khurana. Tumhari galti ki tumhe sazaa milni chahiye aur mil rahi hai! Kuch ghalat nahi liya Geet ne. Use haq hai. Maan couldn't accept this condition and tears rolled down his cheeks.

 Then all of a sudden he heard Naitik's voice Maan! Maan! Maan wiped off his tears and faked a smile.

 He turned his face away finding it really hard to walk on the ground which suddenly seemed empty without Geet. Geet was so near'yet so far!

That night Maan couldn't concentrate on his work. He ordered special vodka for him and gulped the entire bottle. Then he ordered one more and in this way he gulped 3 bottles of vodka and then set out on a dusk-shrouded path through the forest, walking clumsily.

 

Precap

Geet saves Maan and mysterious murder

 -Previous PART 10-

The Pictures Credit to: sldeeps

 Please do tell me if Inhuman Ties gets boring or something like that. This is the first ff which is really close to my heart

 For you Stuts: Next Update, Naksh romance (little bit) because you've really pushed me to Update soon!

Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😳 wowww... awesome part...
firstly... hey.. was this a long part? i felt as if it was tooo short.. sacchi!

🤗 awesome part shivu... plz update next part soonnn yrrr!!!!

one thing.. in malad,.. theres IN-orbit mall🤣🤣🤣

i really liked this short and sweet part.. waiting for naksh romance!
no thanx for the pms!
btw... u saw the avi?
Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Stuti? you der or not...???
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update dear👏 i will read the previous parts also soon😃
Edited by mugdharajatfan - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: CIDMaaneetNaksh

Stuti? you der or not...???

me der... edited my comment!
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👏AWEOME PLZ UPDATE SOONNN BCOZ PRECAP IS INTERESTINGGG
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww awesome yaar
luved ittt
superbbb
waiting for maaneet meetingg
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

me der... edited my comment!

arey stuti...like in PKYEK... google became loogle...so InOrbit Mall became orbit Mall Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update, hope to see soon maan and geet together. I know maan is wrong but he has suffered a lot and got his punishment. plsss update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: seemamary

Awesome update, hope to see soon maan and geet together. I know maan is wrong but he has suffered a lot and got his punishment. plsss update soon.

yeah...he has suffered alot