OS: ADHURE TUM ADHURE HUM - Page 3

You kdding me right 

Originally posted by: --SONEE--

Hi Rose..hello maam.🤗

Im soo sorry for late comment😳...ohh god wenevr i resd first spot i nevr comented on time..seriously.dis is too much sonee😡...next tym wil nevr ever res my spot.lets see...pakka😳...bhale  last comment kyun naa karu'😆 😆'ok enough maskabazi hain naa?😉..no no u can go on if u like. cuming to d update...i must say'Wow very nice  os Rosie👍🏼😳...very well written.thank u ji..👏

ok start arrhh i hate dis scene😡... wer D gt gayab😭...i mean...halwa hai kya?😡.god seems like ur stuck with this line lol..DSP ko gayab karna...khade khade choo mantar.exactly idiotic cvs..ridiculous cv😡...

   but u knw after particular dis scene... u wrt really nice...really very nice n  better dan cv👏👏👏..ooye hoye kya baat hai....luv dis bappa n nakku talk...specially dis line very well sed.. "after all He brought him as her savior in her life and after facing so many trials they had finally united " wow so true words rosie..these lines were meant for the cvs for acting like maniacs...He is her savior n he wil def back to protect her...loved it😳...really dey just reunited n separate again soo soon...its hurts yaar..its killing sonee." mujhe aap (bappa) par aur apne pyar par pura bharosa hai , sahab zaroor lautenge , unhein lautna hi hoga "... haan haan hum bhi yahin keh rahein hai...thnks 4 saying dis rosie..hope these lines cm true...saab jarur lautenge😳..hmmm lets hope for the best .

      & dis ws d best part "lekin is baar pariksha meri nahin apki hai. Ek insaan jo aap par vishas nahin karta tha aaj usey bhi apke astitva (existence)par bharosa hone laga hai aise mein aap uske vishwas ko kaise undekha kar sakte ho."...really i mean how?? Wit our tasha'Hw can u do dis bapaa.sweety its not bappas fault only cvs can be blamed they didnot spare bappa even ..used him badly.??not fair.. if u hv ans plz gv me?? lol sorry jks aprt...but trully yaar..isnt she is feeling or thinking  d same?.yup we all are thinking alike..glad u put dis lines & dis kinda scene..thanks so much ..u know whenever the cvs make a mistake it inspires me to write and correct it.superbb👏

Thnk god she talkd wit bappa n back to return in PN...rather than dat jungle n dont knw wer she landed..i swear...hun🤢...wow she is ready wit dinner... beautiful...kya confidence hai DSP pe..he wil be back...right naa..😆.😛😳

wow soo beautiful line rosie...""sahab aasmaan mein jaage hue taaron ko bhi ab toh neend aane lagi, aap ab laut aao aur intezaar mat karwao.""😍Yaar os ke aad me khud ke mann ki baat kehadi 'I knw I knw😉'..why do u think i write OS ..just to convey my feelings ..lol.. wow u wrt it soo beautiful...her pain is really visible yaar' at least we can feel it really ..thanks for feeling it ..hai naa...yeee  yeeee der he is...😛

omg..rosie...dats soo touchy, emotional moment😭😳' hw she complaining to him...uski complaint usiko'lol... awwww n wht he sed ""itne sawaal kar rahi hai , ek baar bhi pucha ki sahab apne kuch khaya ki nahin?.""  & ""jab tak tu nahin khayegi mera peth kaise bharega?"" can I hug him? Plz'ok later.for a moment i thought u would say can i hug u ..lol ..yah u can but i know wont ..sharmilee sonee.;)😳

haaye...dis scene is soo...excellent & marvelous.yup the scene was marvelous in the show i just used it from there..i never  ever believe dis...agar Tasha  kitchen  scene naa dekha hota..but my gud luck'maine dekha hai'soo hv to blv ... dis two hv sum magic man..magic is the rt word for them.soo simple dinner scene but dey mk it sooo extraordinary😍...n u too rosie...great wrk dear.yar i m nothing compared to what they showed in the show..👏

n dis scene tk my heart away yaar.so filmy know ..and ur crying..😭"nakku main tujhse door kaise jaa sakta hoon, tere bina mein adhura hoon tera saath paa kar pura hota hoon. Tu mujh mein basti (reside)hai , yeh saansein sirf tera naam leti hain."

yaar each nevery dialouge i mentioning😳... & ahhh but dis nakku's incomplete dialogue.sorry i made u cry sorry again..brought tears in my eyes😭...Rosie..hw could u .what to do ? how could i show him when he has not returned in reality .dis ws dream...kyun?? why?? kai ko??.hope n pray this dream comes true soon..*sniff sniff*

N what shuld I say abt last para'dis gv me sum kind of ummid...hum fir milenge'amazing line Rosie sooo simple yet soo meaningful n beautiful too n  I lyk dis bit a lot'😍❤️

Har aahat par tumhare hone ka ehsaas hota hai

jahan nazar pade wahan tumhara deedar hota hai

kise pata tha hum yun bichadenge

par dil kehta hai hum phir milenge ...glad u liked these lines for a change they were all original ..written by me

 Awesome os Rosie👏..very well written'n specially u knw I luvd each n evry dialogue' Thnks for writing soo wonderful os😳'dear'I hope wil gt sumthing in  future also'hai naa??😉...plz haan bol naa'haa'plz😳.hmmmmmmmm no comments ..lol...n omg soo long comment😲 ..and i love u for it..nw I cant help it'don't blame me'😳Thnks once again🤗no need to thank me ..i do this for u guys ..glad u appreciate my efforts

@ yuvika ...yup couldnt stop myself from writing this ..glad u liked it ..i know the ending was heart breaking..but wanted to give it a realistic end to it.

@ shallymann ..dear it was an OS with no more parts ..glad u enjoyed it

@ rubal @ ivy ..thanks for ur appreciation.

@ neverforget ..so happy that u enjoyed reading it and the  last lines as well ..hope they cm true

@ mlshe ..ohh sorry i made u cry ..i know it was very emotional

@ shwetta ..glad u liked it and sorry for making u cry ..like everybody even i wish mishal returns soon

@ geet ...i agree with u it is heart breaking to know that mishal is no more part of the show ...we all wish he comes back soon and relives us of this misery ...dear this a complete OS ..so cant continue it ..sorry

 

@ prncz ...glad u liked the OS so much ...thanks a lot ..yes yes yes we all wish that mishal comes back to wipe away our tears asap ...

Edited by stranger2rose - 13 years ago

Rose very well written, oh it is nakuu dream 😭 hope dutta returns soon in ff and also in serial continue it na😊

@ kiran ...why would i joke with u ..i wrote those lines and glad u liked them so much ...well my first attempt didnt go bad i guess ...thanks a lot dear for appreciaiting it

@ spandy ...hey finally a comment from ur side ..thanks so much ...yup hope the dream cms true

Hi, Rose! 🤗 Now don't be mad at me please...I know I'm commenting centuries after everyone else 😳...

It's really nice to see you writing again. I loved the OS. It's sad that Dutta's return turns out to be her dream 😔....poor Naku. Still, I loved the way you wrote that part.....it was as if he had really come back.

I hope you keep writing. FF, OS, VM, old scenes.....these are the only ways we can still have our Tasha...and Duji, right?

Bravo 

Rose it was sensational yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Im totally surprised how can u create such magic in ur writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😳😳😳😳😳😳⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Stupendofantabulously  Fantastical......................👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Just tooooooo gooddddddddddddd..especially the poem dat u wrote in end...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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It really touched my heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😍😍😍😍
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@ mimi ...hey thanks for ur comments glad u finally read it and enjoyed it as well. i know even i felt happy writing after such a long time wish to continue doing so .

@ pinky ...so happy to know that u loved the OS so much. well i dont have any magic its tasha who create it . such an amzaing couple that inspires me to write again n again . ohh thank u so much for appreciating the poem . glad my first attempt went down well with u all.

aww rose..so emotional...tumhe mujhe rulana acha lagta hai? awww...it was just a dream...bechari Naku...and the end wali song/poem is so sweet...and I am so sorry for the extremely late comment...but beautiful OS!, and I'll read the other one soon :)