CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 - Page 6

wow, a new FF and a totally new dimension.....well this is far more interesting to read........I LOVE UR THINKING!!! dealing with social problems thru a story is a wonderfu idea........GOOD LUCK dear and yeah i'm eagerly waiting for ur next update. i totally loved it!!!

omg...this is so different and amazing......loved it to the core....poor geet.....she is being terrorised by maan.........continue soon........i really love all ur ffs.....they are all very nice and completely different,.........

Nice update

nice part
Urggh dnt lyk Maans intentions
Haha geet wanted 2 kick him wer it Wud hurt
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

Oh god maan is soo bad.... Okay geet ko sujit ke saath dekhney se toh acha hai ki maan jabardasti shaadi kar ley.

Edited by DILIBADAAT - 13 years ago

OMG😡😡

Edited by smj1977 - 13 years ago

INTERESTING

Awww Paulami....me hating Maan....
arghhhhhhhhhhhhh how could he stoop so low......
poor geet.......my heart bleeds for her..she is getting married to a devil.........

continue...really superb...............waiting for nxt part.........................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz