Sorry.....Didn't get time to touch my laptop at home...
But i read your story, the day you posted it.... from office 😉
The stories posted here are my only way of relaxing... or thinking out of the box... or bringing me into an exiting mode to create exciting ideas
The story was exciting ... i was still wondering how and where is everyone going to find the key...
but i had already expected that this time vivek will be able to open the door 😊
The story was good... but the 2nd time it wasn't that exciting as the 1st time...
and plz... spare daya sir... 😭 plzzz.... insted of putting daya sir into trouble may be you can make daya sir do something exceptionally heroic 😉
naah.... naah... its fine... you need not use this idea... becoz its your story and we wanna read the way you have imagined it
Well.... i all i can say is ...i am waiting for the next part.....
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