Destiny's Play-Pt XXXIII(Pg 144) 4/3 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: preethia

congratulatios for new thread..................


well loved all the 3 parts...................

part 18 expressed maan identifying her talents and sharing a cute moment where he promises that she will see him more smiling.............also maan knows abt her affection towards his baba is genuine.................

part 19 where he is admiring his better half's beauty......................the way he clips her hair and the dialogue where he tells that he admires her long hair............was awesome...............

part 20 showed strong chracter of pinky which i loved normally she is expressed as bubbly gal but here i loved her characterisation..................loved the way geet understood the situation and handled it very well.....................i am loving her more now so no way maan can restrain himself from falling in love with his wife...........................

usual question now r there going to b any more updates opti................r u done for today?


Thanks for encapsulating the essence of each part so nicely. Yes, will post another update today. Could be one or two.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mujeh laga Adi, Pinki key liye bana....

Jis tarha Geet...bani Khurana ki Zubain....
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice update opti. I was thinking that Pinly would be paired up with Adi, may be influence of other fanfics and the show. But dont know whats in store. Geet is very balanced and sensible too. Liked that geet and maan are drawn towards each other gradually. But wondering what is their inhibition in expressing what they feel for each other.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Wow congrates 4 nw thread. Nice updates.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
congrats on the new thread...

lovely lovely update...tx for both the parts...

waiting for more 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Newdime

Mujeh laga Adi, Pinki key liye bana....

Jis tarha Geet...bani Khurana ki Zubain....


My fic has a few surprises
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Viji79

Very nice update opti. I was thinking that Pinly would be paired up with Adi, may be influence of other fanfics and the show. But dont know whats in store. Geet is very balanced and sensible too. Liked that geet and maan are drawn towards each other gradually. But wondering what is their inhibition in expressing what they feel for each other.


Thanks Viji. You'll find out what is inhibiting them soon enough.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: chubzy

Wow congrates 4 nw thread. Nice updates.


thanks chubzy
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaara2212

congrats on the new thread...

lovely lovely update...tx for both the parts...

waiting for more 😉


Thanks zaara
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Aarthi for that lovely picture.