**THE WAY I LOVED U**[FINISHED] - Page 17

omg .. lovely update yaar ..
update soon .. me waiting ..

Trishhh, I read half of this update BEFORE I went to school, and then I had to leave coz I was getting late..and throughout the school, I was sitting there impatiently, huffing and moaning, wanting the school to end sooon cause I wanted to complete the part. 😆

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

Trishhh, I read half of this update BEFORE I went to school, and then I had to leave coz I was getting late..and throughout the school, I was sitting there impatiently, huffing and moaning, wanting the school to end sooon cause I wanted to complete the part. 😆

Lmao .. Daksh doesn't like Shlok because he thinks that Shlok will steal the limelight off him? 😆 I really liked how Shlok 'sensed' Ashi when he came out of the room...I REALLLLYYY adore Shlok here, though I love Daksh a bit more, 'coz he reminds me of Yuvi. 😃

Ahaa, Daksh and Ashi. Their fights are always hilarious .. tumne mujhe giraaya, no, tumne mujhe kheencha! 🤣 Ashi called Angad langoor? Aww! 😆

Yay, Ashi-Shlok .. FINALLY.  Haha, Daksh thinks that the world revolves around him. 😆 Like you said to Liz .. Ashi will recognize Shlok, and I think that she'll hug him or something .. and Daksh will see that, 'coz he was planning to keep an eye on them!

Greaatttt goinggg! Continue sooon..I want an update tomorrow ! =)

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Trishuuuu... SORRY SORRY I cudnt comment before.. Yaar, I was Busy.. But.. I want to say.. LOVE YOU for writing so gud.. Muuaahhz to U. Wowieee Fan Fic. I dnt know why, But Im in love wid dis. Finally.. Shlok met Asmin.. I cant wait for the next part..

it's ok dear...no probs

Originally posted by: similuvs_ashiuv

omg .. lovely update yaar ..
update soon .. me waiting ..

thanx alot simi🤗

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

Trishhh, I read half of this update BEFORE I went to school, and then I had to leave coz I was getting late..and throughout the school, I was sitting there impatiently, huffing and moaning, wanting the school to end sooon cause I wanted to complete the part. 😆

Lmao .. Daksh doesn't like Shlok because he thinks that Shlok will steal the limelight off him? 😆 I really liked how Shlok 'sensed' Ashi when he came out of the room...I REALLLLYYY adore Shlok here, though I love Daksh a bit more, 'coz he reminds me of Yuvi. 😃

Ahaa, Daksh and Ashi. Their fights are always hilarious .. tumne mujhe giraaya, no, tumne mujhe kheencha! 🤣 Ashi called Angad langoor? Aww! 😆

Yay, Ashi-Shlok .. FINALLY.  Haha, Daksh thinks that the world revolves around him. 😆 Like you said to Liz .. Ashi will recognize Shlok, and I think that she'll hug him or something .. and Daksh will see that, 'coz he was planning to keep an eye on them!

Greaatttt goinggg! Continue sooon..I want an update tomorrow ! =)

thanx akhi

loved all the three parts trisha .... sorry for replying so late .. didn't manage to take out enuf tym 2 read n comment ...
loved daksh-aish's gym scene -- totally crazy 😆😆 glad you brought shlok to mount ... ab daksh ka jealousy ka temp. would be rising 😆😆' langur ' was 🤣wat an idea !! he was thinking they were plotting against him 😆 loved meera-aish's interactions .. arjun's imagination was really sweet 😛 i loved everything about the updates 😃

ohh trish .. we die yaar .. update soon plz .. cant wait ..

                                  

                                                Part-10

 

 

(Shlok & Aish was talking & Daksh listening at them)

Aish:"Shlok?"

(she's feeling strange & strangly looking at him)

Shlok:"kyu?naam pasand nahi aya?"

Aish:"no no'..actually mujhe class k liye late ho raha  hai''''so,nice to meet u Shlok"

Shlok:"nice to meet u too"

(he was looking at her like he was know her for many years ago)

Aish:"bye'."

(she left)

(Shlok said himself)

Shlok:"mujhe aapni feelings ko control karna hoga"

(took a breath & he also left)

(then Daksh said)

Daksh:"mujhe iss wacko se hi pata karna padega  k ye dono kya baatey kar rahe the"

(Aish walking,followed by Daksh)

(when Aish came closer to the class door then Daksh shout at her)

Daksh:"Asmin'''ruko"

Aish:"now what?aab maine kya kia?"

Daksh:"tum uss ladke se kya baat kar rahi thi?"

Aish:"kounsa ladka?"

Daksh:"mere samne zyada smart banne ki kousis mat karna ''''vohi new entry"

Aish:"oh u mean Shlok? he is such a nice guy"

Daksh:"whatever'''tum usse dur  rahogi"

(suddenly Shlok came there)

Shlok:"ye kisse mile or kisse nahi ye batane wale tum kon hote ho?"

Daksh:"isska partner"

Aish:"oh hello''.main sirf tumhari gym partner hoon or tum kiss haaq se ye saab puch rahe ho?"

Daksh:"main tumhe Shok se pahele se janta hoon"

Shlok:"mera naam Shlok hai"

Daksh:"listen mr.whatever'..mujhe tumhare naam se koi farak nahi parta''''.tum Asmin se dur rahoge"

(Aish started flirting with Daksh)

Aish:"kyu Daksh?........tumhe jalan ho rahi hai kya?"

Daksh:"what?.......dekho mujhe koi jalan nahi ho rahi hai"

Shlok:"so?.........tum Asmin se dur raho''''.Asmin chalo class k liye der ho jayegi"

Aish:"han"(again she's feeling strange)

(Shlok & Aish enterd in the class & Daksh looking at them very angrily)

 

 

(after college Anchal standing on road for lift)

(Arjun passing by'''.he stoped his car after Anchal)

(he started thinking)

Arjun:"oh no!kahi fires mera vahem to nahi?..............kya Anchal sach me yaha hai?"

(he turn back for Anchal)

(Anchal surprised to saw him there)

Anchal:"Arjun?tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?"

Arjun:"pahele batao kya tum sach me yaha ho?"

Anchal:"kya matlab?tum kya kahe rahe ho?mujhe samajh me nahi aaraha hai"

Arjun:"btw,tum yaha kyu khari ho?"

Anchal:"vo actually mujhe ghar jaane k liye lift chahiye thi to''.

Arjun:"main tumhe lift de deta hoon''''.chalo"

Anchal:"okey"

(she sat in the car)

(then they gone)

(in the car)

Arjun:"suno Anchal"

Anchal:"ha.."

Arjun:"kya tum aaj mere office ayi thi?"

Anchal:"main or tumhare office?.....nahi to'kyu?"

Arjun:"nahi baas aisehi"

(he was something like blushing)

(Anchal also staring at him)

 

 

 

(in Raichand's house)

(Shlok entered through the main door'''Haseena came there)

Haseena:"so'''.kya hua college me?usse mile?"

(Shlok was very happy)

Shlok:"ha mom'''..usse mila bhi or baatey bhi ho gayi)

(it was a cute smile on his face)

(Haseena looks scared)

Haseena:"what?.........kya ussne tumhe pahechana?"

Shlok:"I don't think k ussne mujhe pahechana hoga'''.maine usse aapna pura naam bhi nahi bataya hai"

Haseena:"kya matlab?"

Shlok:"matlab maine usse sifr aapna naam bataya hai'''..sirname nahi"

Haseena:"lekin mujhe lagata hai k vo jaldhi samajh jayegi''''.vo itni bhi nadan nahi hogi"

(Shlok smiled)

Shlok:"pata chale to chale but main ye pata lagne nahi dunga ki main kon hoon or kya hoon"

Haseena:"I hope so"

 

 

(in Aish's room'''.she was thinking about Shlok)

Aish:"Shlok'''ye naam kuch jana pahechana sa lag raha hai,lekin yaad nahi aaraha ki kaha suna tha"

(Meera entered in the room)

Meera:"hey sweetu  wasup"

Aish:"nothing''.bass kuch soch rahi thi"

Meera:"kya?Daksh k bareme?"

Aish:"massiiii'''.aapko kuch or nahi sujhta hai kya''''.mere itne bure din bhi nahi aye hai ki main uss Daksh k bareme sochu"

Meera:"to kisske bareme soch rahi thi?"

Aish:"u know aaj college me ek naya ladka aya hai'.Shlok"

Meera:"one sec one sec''kya kaha Shlok?"

Aish:"ha"

Meera:"ye naam to''..

Aish:"wohi to'..main bhi confused hoon'''.kahi ye vow ala Shlok to nahi?"

Meera:"ho sakta hai'''..usska sirname kya hai?"

Aish:"yehi to problem hai'''..main puchna hi bhool gayi''''kal college me puch lungi'''''fir pata chalega k ye konsa Shlok hai"

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sorry 4 late update

i was so busy thouse days

Edited by 00123trisha - 13 years ago

me first.. yipeee. Trishu darling, wowiee update. Daksh getting jealous. Asmin cant remember Shlok.. waiting for the next update. pls hurry up ok. ur ff is driving me crazy.