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Posted: 13 years ago
Trishuuuuu, you make  me love this fanfiction more and more with each and every update! ๐Ÿค— Aww, that weight lifting part was SOOO AY-ish!! Asmin, meri help karo.. mujhse uth nahi rahe ๐Ÿ˜†..and BOOM, she falls on him! Awww !! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Ahaa, everyone thinks that Asmin and Daksh ke beech kuch hone wala hai! ;-] Pehle Meera..phir teacher..phir Aanchal! ๐Ÿ˜† 

Arjun likes Aanchal too? Cute! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Shlok ki entry Abhay-style! And poori ladaii Kabir-Abhay style!  I'm SOOO looking forward to thisssssssss! 
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOL Trishu I loved  it! Too damn good! except i don't know who to cheer for here. I loved A-Y and I love M-S. kahaan phassa diya yaar!
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Posted: 13 years ago
@komzie & Akhi-thank u guys๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago
 
                                                                Part-9
 
(Daksh came out frm the princi's office.................then Rohan came there)
Rohan:"dude.......aapne dad se baat ki?"
Daksh:"nahi yaar vo new guy............wats the name?"
Rohan:"kon Shlok?"
Daksh:"ha shlok.......vo andhar hai or ussk liye dad mujhse baat nahi karna chahte hai"
Rohan:"i told u k ye tumpe vari parega"
Daksh:"watever..........lets go"
(Daksh & Rohan left)
(in princi's office)
Princi:"vo mera beta tha Daksh............i'm sorry ki usse ne disturb kia"
Shlok:"it's ok....no problem"
Princi:"so.........go & enjoy ur classes"
Shlok:"yes sir"
(he stood up)
(in other side Aish walking in the hall way..........thinking about the gym class scene๐Ÿ˜†)
Aish:"mai to usski madat kar rahi thi fir mai giri kaise?..................ha,Daksh ne hi mujhe khicha hoga....................damn Daksh.........abhi tumhari khabar leti hu"๐Ÿ˜ก
(she's walking through hall..............then cross the princi's office....at the same time Shlok came out frm the office)
(Aish did not noticed him bcoz she was very angry on Daksh & she left............but Shlok can feel her)
Shlok:"Asmin?.................main tumhe feel kar sakta hu.......tum yehi kahi ho..................i have to find u"
(he started  finding Asmin)
 
 
(in Raichand's house)
Chand:"Haseenaaaa............kya Shlok college gaya hai?"
Haseena:"ha...................aaj usska pahela din hai..............i hope ki vo koi garbar na kare"
Chand:"aaaaahhhhhhh...............................hume college jakey usse milna chahiye...............wat do u think?"
Haseena:"noooo.................usse akele handle karne do"
(Chand & Haseena's as useal expresions)
 
 
(in cantin...............Daksh was sitting with Rohan & Angad)
Angad:"Daksh,maine suna k tum or Asmin...................
Daksh:"just shut up..................aisa kuch nahi hai......................or issme meri koi galti nahi thi................vo jaan booch k mere upar giri thi"
Rohan:"but tumhe kya sachme lagta hai k ussne ye jaan booch k kia tha?"
Daksh:"yes,i'm very sure................atension pane k liye ussne mujhe use kia"๐Ÿ˜ก
(suddenly Aish came there)
Aish:"Accha,to main tumhare upar giri thi saab ka atension apne k liye?"
Daksh:"then wat?"
Aish:"hello,mujhe koi shouk nahi hai tumhare close aney k liye....................and BTW,mujhe to lagta hai ki tumne mujhe khicha tha"
Angad:"woohoho miss.............Daksh aisa kyu karega?"
Aish:"main tumse baat nahi kar rahi hu langur"
Daksh:"how dare u?tumne mere frnd ko langur kaha"๐Ÿ˜ก
Aish:"kyu?sirf tumhara frnd nahi tum bhi langur ho"
Daksh:"aapna moo thora soch samajh k khola karo....varna....
Aish:"varna kya?tum mujhe maroge...........oooo main to dar gai tumse.............i'm so scared...............dekho mujhse mat uljho tum nahi jante ki mai kya cheez hu..............issi  liye aapni limits me raho.............do u get that?"
(Daksh didn't said anything....just giving her chalenging types expresions)
(then Anchal came there)
Anchal:"Asmin.............tum firse inse baat karne aa gayi?...........chalo yaha se"
Aish:"Daksh main firse kahe rahi hu k mujhse mat ulajhna"๐Ÿ˜ก
(Anchal start pulling her)
Anchal:"chalo Asmin"
Daksh:"ha  ha dekh lenge........
(Rohan & Angad was shocked to saw their fight)๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Rohan:"wow............aaj tak Daksh ko ladko se iss tarha ladte huye dekha hai aab ek ladki se......
Angda:"dude.....ussne mujhe langur kaha"
Rohan:"tum toh waise bhi langur ho"
Angad:"ey...tu bhi shuru ho gay"๐Ÿ˜ก
Daksh:"guys shut up..............ye ladki mera dimag kharab kar rahi hai"๐Ÿ˜ก
 
 
(in hall way...............Anchal talking to Aish)
Anchal:"Asmin tum kyu bar bar Daksh se baat karne jaati ho?...................tumhe vo pasand nahi to kyu bar bar usske samne jati ho?"
Aish:"mai to...........
(suddenly she noticed at Shlok who was sitting on a bench)
Aish:"vo kon hai"
Anchal:"shayed aaj naya aya hai"
(Aish start walking at him)
Anchal:"kaha jaa rahi ho?"
Aish:"arre vo naya aya hai or hum bhi naye hai to baat karne me kya jata hai"
(she stood beside him)
Aish:"hi"
(Shlok turned to her.....................then again he feeled the same feeling)
Shlok:'hi...tumhara naam kya?"
Aish:"i'm Asmin...............par saab mujhe Aish bulate hai"
(shlok started thinking)
Shlok:"akhir tum mujhe milhi gayi"๐Ÿ˜
(Daksh was passing by..................he saw them toghter)
Daksh:"ye wacko uss Shlok k sath kya kar rahi hai..............kahi mere khilaf planing to nahi kar rahe hai ye dono?.............i've to find out"
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey awesome update
u knw what u hav confused me which one to support daksh or shlok
both of them are cool dudes
and yahan pr bhi feelin wala part jo hamesha abhay ke saath hota hai strt ho gya
bt to day no arjun and aanchal scene(arjaan scene) 
bt i likd d total update
and i really wish ashi and shlok plans against daksh........... cz in dat way shlok and ashi will come close to each other


nd really its lovely update๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one.... love the fight of daksh and asmin... update soon....
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Posted: 13 years ago
ahhaha!!
ashi bhi na...
mein toh uski madat kar rahi thi.. giri kaise? oh.. usne kheecha hoga...๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
lmao. rukho khabar leti hoon๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
and i can so imagine chand and haseenas expressions.. lol
daksh ko lagta hai ki ashi jaanbooch kar attention paanekeliye uspar giri?๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
usne galti se bhi ashi ko aisa bol diya toh woh gaya๐Ÿ˜ณ
and lol, usney sun bhi liya.. trishu, am loving u for this ff.. mast likhti ho tum๐Ÿ˜†
ahahahah, aur aur aur.. bechaare angad ko langoor bola, ashi sach mein gusse mein hai..๐Ÿ˜†
aww, ashi and shlok mil gaye, par ek doosre ko pehchaana kaise nahi?
i didnt understand.. shlok likes ash, but usko pehchaana kaise nahi?
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Posted: 13 years ago
hei,
finally shlok-aish met..n really daksh-aish will never stop fighting..but its nice..continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u all๐Ÿค—
@Lizz-shlok ne to pahechan liya aish ne nahi pahechana but don't worry next part me pahechan legi
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Posted: 13 years ago
Trishuuuu... SORRY SORRY I cudnt comment before.. Yaar, I was Busy.. But.. I want to say.. LOVE YOU for writing so gud.. Muuaahhz to U. Wowieee Fan Fic. I dnt know why, But Im in love wid dis. Finally.. Shlok met Asmin.. I cant wait for the next part..