'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95 - Page 32

Originally posted by: dg0628

jag ...lol i edited my spot....and u update the next part soon PLEASE .....with a cherry on top....and no ur excuse u told me will not work here :P

Originally posted by: dg0628

Res :)

* Sorry i'm fixing my spot late -_- i was soo consumed in writing the update for my ff and then forgot to come back and post here ...my bad but i did read it right away 😃

ok so let me start :

Ahhhhhhh omg how cute are they .....Dutta all naughty naughty haye haye 😍

and naku all shy-vy ...haye haye....LOL i loved reading all of it

and wen he wakes up in morning and what she does to his heart...and he all like i can't show

the effect of her on him 😳 and her waking up and soo embarrassed of the whole thing....waking

up that late and then all sorry about it.....and love love loved it wen he said that he doesnt like chai

from someone else 😳😍

I'm glad that he did not tease her in that state ....poor girl would have fainted 😆

aww loved how the moment he found out no one is home he thought of Naku only and then

went back to her to have some fun woot woot ...haha I loved it 😳

Haila and baaji all upset poor baaji he doesnt have anyone na to go to and hug and tease lol

and he cant even have some fun ....he has to work hard so our TaSha can have fun 😆

and Dutta all lovey-dovey with Naku again ...

but then kya hua? .......like complete flip in personality ...lol he hurt my baaji and naku :(

but I loved that he clamed down and thought about it and felt bad and even went looking for

them....I dont think they should go.....my creativity would go something along the lines where

both Baaji-Naku team up and ignore Dutta and he should try hard to make-up to them and

they should just make fun out of it 😆 see me now thinking about ur ff story instead of writing

mine

anyway wonderful part ...enjoyed every bit and piece there was

u never cease to amaze :D ....... keep it up

and thanks for the pm ....i jetted right over and waited for u to post....thats why i was first :D

update soon please...i am so curious to know wat happens :P

Originally posted by: kiran255

Hey Jagu !

Third place not bad :D

Love Love Love the update !

Start he khasay ahem ahem jagah say hua:P

hehehehhe

Dutta all naughty shaughty 😳

HMM Love how naku wokes up and realize in what state she is ,

she is such a sweety , she feels ashamed taht Dutta has seen her like this !

a very sensitive thing in my regard (she was with the man all night but in morning she doesnt want to be all besharam , ttheir is a fine line betweeen love aur besharmi (and still she needs time )

she always manged to have haya😊

thast a nice thinga nd love Dutta understands that too :)

he doesnt tease her all n not staring her , he knows she needs time

though he tries that she understands that its not a big deal but may be he like her feeling guiltyin innocence more :P

do i need to tell u

taht ur word "saab "

here is soo much meaingful

its everything in ur FF ,

saab is the word to mano to ask forgiveness

everything is Saab😳

love his reply that he will soon be back !

and woooooooo no body is home

and Dutta dont want to keave Naku 😃

and he ask baaji to go

OH my Baaji , bechara he is the one jo har jagah phasta hai :P

and he walks back to room

hmm ahem ahem momenst

and in my opinion he must said

"kaha that na jaldi aaon gay , tu dekh agaya "

i mean khasa jaldi a gaya but i tink its the best which fits here :P

heheheh

and hmm then Dutta all in mood of romancing and no doubt he enjoys his wife innocence :P

and hayeeeee

romance kay bad ye sab

Dutta shouting at baaji , bechara baaji he is spanked badly by Dutta

and what Nooooooo Nakud drop tea on Dutta

OH no its just fuel the fire :P

Dutta is super madddd but in anger he uses a hell of dialogues :P

and aw my baby Dutta he realizes that he makes a mistake :😳

oh chotu leads Dutta to others and whta does he hear their

Lil complains abt him

that is so sweet Baaji here is more chota bacha than chotu

love how he is complaing aye Sahib

and wo Naku is changing too , or may be baaji ko dekh kar she is confiednet

and spits out her heart

thast is sooooo sweet

and wht NOoooooooooo
dutta calling them up !

This is a real cliff hanger

expecting a quick update !

PLz jagu update fast :D

Originally posted by: droopy_asleep

Wonderful update....and to answer your question, here is what I think he would have said!
Thodisi....mujhe bhi pilade :)

Originally posted by: vikaluvsmish

ohh.. this so made my day.............. i love how innocent naku is like she had not idea what dutta wanted to do.............. and yep i think baaji-naku will not listen to chotu and not go to dutta, which in turn will make dutta come to them ha

Originally posted by: AzMishy

Thanks for the update n just loved it!!! :D
Answer to ur Q errmmmmm come will complete ur task of making a heir!!!!! Hehehehehe just kidding! :p me have no idea! Hehehehe

Originally posted by: -Ritz-

that was a wonderful update jagrutid. 👍🏼 and I'll try and guess and he might have said: mein tumse bahut pyar karta hoon Nakusha!. ☺️ Not that he ever has to say that since Naku knows it. 😳 but this is the only thing in my head right now. 😆

waiting for the next update.

Originally posted by: dc17-7

hey jagruti,

nice update dear...... thank u for the PM........

tc
divya

Originally posted by: jessica10

loved the update

Dutta is so in character here..naku is also so sweetly innocent.

loved the tasha scene

poor baji got shouting and naku too.

Baji is so adorable complaining like a small child..liked how naku too opened up

i wonder if they will go up..real cliffhanger

hope u update soon