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Posted: 13 years ago
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OS 2

Taani smiled Onu's way then noticed a bump on his forehead. She leant forward and ran her fingers over the fairly large bump and gasped. "Onu!" she exclaimed and he took her hand away from his forehead and took them in his, moving his haie to hide the bump. It was no use.

"Onu!" she said, moving his hair that fell in front of him away from his face. "yeh kya kiya tune?" she asked but he shook his head. "Onu, main do din ke liye kya jaati hoon aur tune aisi haalat banaadiya apna" she shook her head.
"Taani" he stopped her hand oncemore and this time touched her cheek, assuringly.
"Jaanthi hoon main tujhe, dekh ke nahin chalraha hoga, hain na?" she asked "tehr" she reached for her bag "main saaf karti hoon" she said getting a tissue out and wiping the dry blood around the bruise.

"Kitni baar main kehti thi tujhe? Apna diyaan rakha kar! Lekin nahin! Tu meri baat suntha kahaan hai?" she muttered, making Onu smile as she pushed his hair back.

She was still Mishti. His Mishti. She hadn't changed.

"Onu?" Taani looked up "Tu sunraha hai na?"
"Haan" he nodded, smiling as she put the tissue away.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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2nd Feb

OS

"Onu!" Taani batted his hand away from the mitaai when they reached the store.
"Taani, khaane de na" he pleaded, just as he would do in their childhood
"Nahin!" she told him "bilkul bhi nahin!" she said "ab chal yahaan se" she said pulling his arm and prying him away from the temptation of the sweets.

"Tu meri maddat karne aaya hai ya khaane ke liye?" she asked as he persuaded her to stop by another mitaai store.
"Dono" he said finishing the rasgulle.
"Onu?"
"Haan?"
"Acha hai?" she asked as they walked home.
"Haan, bohat acha" he made a face showing her how much he was enjoying it.
"Mazaa aaraha hai?" she asked
"Haan Taani, sahi main"
"To theek hai" she said reaching for one "thode aur khaale!" she said stuffing it into his mouth then ran off.
"Taani ki bachi!" he exclaimed chasing her into the house, as she shrieked.

"Maa!" Taani exclaimed running behind Laboni to pritect herself.
"Taani! Kya kar-rahi hai baba?"
"Maa! Dekho na isss!" she complained, catching her breath. "itne rasgulle kaaye the ke poocho mat!"
"To khaane dehti na!"
"Haan! Dekhiye na maa!" he complained
"Maa! Agar main rokti na to vo pehle ki tarah motu ho jaatha!"
"Nahin hota!" he told her
"Hota!"


"Taani bilkul sahi kehrahi hai" Neelu's voice came from behind Onu.
"Dekha!" Taani smirked, walking over to Neelu, "vaise maa, aapko nahin lagta hai ke vo thoda sa mota horaha hai?"
"Haan! Bilkul. Lekin kya karen? Teri maa khilaa khilaa kar isko motu phir se banaana chahti hai" she sighed
"Chinta mat karna maa. Main hoon na" she made a face at Onu.
"Maa! Dekhiye apni behti ko"
"Haan, haan. Main sab dekhrahi hoon!" Laboni said pretending to glare at Taani."Ab tum dono jao aur jaake haath mun doh ke aao"
"Theek hai maa" Taani walked off, giving Onu a look before running off.
"Di?"
"Haan?"
"Kohi kehsakta ke in dono ki shaadi hone waali hai?" Neelu chuckled and Laboni laughed with her.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just wrote this one now: Enjoy.

3rd Feb

OS.

"Taani?" Laboni called from the garden
"Haan maa?" she called back from the kitchen where she was making dinner
"Aana to!"
"Aayi" she replied and turned the gas cooker off before making her way into the garden.
"Yeh sukaana, mujhe dukaan se phone aaya hai. Udar jaana paregha" she said passing Taani the bucket of clothes.
"Acha, theek hai" she smiled
"Main aati hoon" She said
"Acha" she nodded and Laboni left.

Taani began squeezing the water out of the clothes and hung them up one by one.

She felt something light fall on her back and ignored it for a second, thinking it was just her imagination but then, whatever it was, came faster. She turned to see Onu hiding flowers behind his back. "kyun aaya tu yahaan?" she sulked, turning away from him.
"Meri Laboni Maa ka ghar hai, jab aana chahta hoon, aoongha" he told her walking up to her.
"Maa abhi dukaan gayi hai. Jab aayeghi to tu aana" she said picking up the bucket that had now gathered water.
"Taani, chal bahar chalte hai?" he suggested
"Bahar?" she asked him
"Haan" he said excitedly
"Main tere saath bahar kyun jaoonghi?" she asked "tu to mere saath ghussa hai na?" she reminded
"Abhi maine chordiya, ab tu bhi chor"
"Nahin" she walked off and he followed her into the house.

 "Onu! Tu jaayegha nahin yahaan se?" she asked and began to tidy the living room up.

"Nahin jaoongha" he said sitting on the sofa, comfortably, putting his legs up.
"Onu!" she exclaimed, pushing his feet out of the way so that she could pass him.
"Taani! Jab main dekhta hoon na tujhe, tu saaf safayi karti rehti hai!" he said
"Aur main jab bhi tujhe dekhti hoon to tu mujhe tang karta rehta hai!" She told him "ab hogaya hisaab baraabar?" she asked "mujhe kaam karne degha?"
 "Taaniii" he pleaded "chal na, thodi dehr bahar chalte hain" he persisted. He wasn't going to give up so easily. She sighed and turned to him.
"Mujhe nahin jaana!" she told him, irritated  "tu chala jaa" she said
"Theek hai" he got up from the sofa "Main jaaraha hoon"
"Theek hai" she said, putting the magazines from the table to the side.
"Maine kaha ke main jaaraha hoon!" he emphasised from behind her and she turned to face him.
"Aur maine kaha: theek hai!" she countered "ab jao!" she ordered and he pretended to glare at her before leaving.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#14

Thanks for liking it girls😉

Roksako to roklo! 🤣

Here's another one. I basically rewrote the yesterday's second scene

OS 2

Taani walked into his room and stood by the door, watching for a second him as he slept. He looked so peaceful. So cute. She stood there for a second, just admiring him before turning to open the curtains, she pulled the curtains back and stepped back, knocking over an ornament as she did. She made a face then looked at Onu to see him squint his eyes as he stirred.

"Kaun hai??" he exclaimed
"Main hoon" Taani walked over to the bed "chal, acha hai ke tu utha"
"Taani, subha subha yahaan kya kar-rahi hai?"
"Maa ne kaha ke main tujhe aake utaaloon"
"Kyun?"
"Kyun ka kya matlab Onu? Pata hai ke time kya hua hai abhi??" she asked
"Kya?" he said, turning over to face the other way.

She made her way over to the bed and pulled him to face her. "Abhi das bajgaye Onu! Chal ut!" she told him, trying to pull the blanket away from him but he got to it before her and pulled it over himself. "tu jaa, main aata hoon"

"Haan, tu yahi kehga na. Tu jaa main aata hoon. Lekin mujhe pata hai ke jab main yeh darvaaza se nikloonghi na? Tu karaate maarkar soraha hoga aur phir maa mujhe daanteghi!"

"Taani!" he stirred, irritated that he was being woken up and lectured so early in the morning for him.
"Onu, main teen thak ginoon gi, agar tu nahin uta na..?" she paused to think. He pulled the blanket off himself.
"To kya?" he asked "Kya karleghi tu"
"Main ek balti leke paani giradoonghi tere upar!"
"Giraakar dikha" he challenged her, slowly pulling the covers back.
"Tu ruk, main abhi aati hoon" she said making her way into the bathroom.
"Aah na!" he called and she made her way back into the room to see he had disappeared and the bedroom door was open.
"Acha?" She said to herself "theek hai. Baad main dekhleti hoon usko" she said and smiled to herself before making her way downstairs

Edited by Lubz.TaAnu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aaj ka pehla OS: enjoy.

"Taani kitna time lagaati hai" he started the car and drove off.
"Onu, chup kar. Pata hai? Maa insist kar-rahi thi ke main Mauli ko apne saath le aoon!"
"Kya?" he laughed "Mauli ko?"
"Haan. Tu itna hass kyun raha hai?" she asked him "Vo to shukkar hai Mauli samajgayi aur mana kiya varna hum to sach main pakarjaate Onu" she told him worriedly
"Taani" he took her hand in his. "hum ghalat kya kar-raha hai?"
"Onu, 3 dino ke baad hamari shaadi hai. Agar gharwaale ko pata chala ke main teri saath aayi hoon to pata hai ke kya hoga?"
"Kya?" he persisted, annoying her
"Onu!"
"Acha! Acha. Relax. Abhi ponchne vaale hai"
"Vaise hum jaa kahaan rahe hai Onu?"
"Pata chal jaayegha" he told her simy
"Onu, bata na!"
"Taani, abhi ponchvaale hai hum. Sabar nahin karsakti?"
"Nahin karsakti!" she told him
"Main tujhe date pe lehjaaraha hoon aur tujhe chir agayi hai"
"Date?"
"Haan. Date. Aur nahin to kya? Hum dono bahar hai, saath hai. Date to banta hai na?"
"Haan Onu, lekin..."
"Ab lekin kya?"
"Nahin. kuch nahin. Vaise thodi shock main hoon"
"Shock main?"
"Haan"
"Vo kyun?"
"Kyunke hum kahin dino se saath hai aur pehle mujhe ek dafa bhi date pe nahin lagaya"
"Sarasr jhoot!"
"Matlab?"
"Main dinner ka treat kiya tha na? Vo kya tha?"
"Vo?" she asked
"Haan!"
"Vo to tujhe jalan aaya tha aur tu mujhe party se lagaya tha" she informed him, smiling "Usko date nahin kehsakte"
"Vo date hi tha!"
"Nahin tha Onu"
"Tha!"
"Nahin tha!"
"Tha!" He said "ab chup kar aur radio ko sun" he said turning the volume loud.

Taani smiled as a familiar song came on. She looked at Onu who seemed as if he wasn't paying attention.

"Onu?"
"Haan?"
"Onu" she tried to get his full attention
"Haan Taani, bol na!"
"Yeh gaana yaad hai?"
"Yeh gaana?" he asked, confused
"Tujhe ye gaana yaad nahin hai?" she asked, dismayed
"Nahin to. Kaunsa gaana hai?"
"Chor" she looked away and out of the window.

Chirodini,
Tumhe Je Amar,
Jugi Jugi Ami Tumhaari.

Chirodini,
Tumhe Je Amar,
Jugi Jugi Ami Tumhaari.

Ami Ache,
Shi Je Tomar,
Tumhi Acho She Tumhaari,

Shongi,
Shongi,
Amra,
Moro Shongi


"Taani, yeh gaana boring hai" he said tuning the station
"Kya?" she exclaimed and batted his hand away.
"Taani"
"Khabardaar ke tune isse haath lagaya to"
"Par.."
"Par var kuch nahin"
"Taani, meri gaari hai"
"To?" she asked
"Acha, tu bata, is gaane main khaas baat kya hai?"
"Khaas baat kya hai?" she asked, not believing her ears.
"Haan. Kya?"
"Tu na? Mujhse baat na kar. Main sahi main tujhse ghussa hoon ab"
"Ab kya?"
"Huh!" she said turning away in a sulk. She heard him laugh and spun her head to look at him as he laughed to himself.

"Ab kyun has-raha hai?"
"Tujhe dehk ke"
"Mujhe dekh ke?!"
"Haan" he chuckled "tu kitna jaldi ghussa karti hai"
"Aur tu kitna jaldi bhulta hai!"
"Oh, hello. Main kuch bhula nahin hoon!" he told her "sab yaad hai mujhe"
"Acha?"
"Haan. Ab aankhein band kar"
"Kya?!"
"Main kaha ke aankhein band kar. hindi samaj main nahin aati hai kya?"
"Onu... lekin. Aankhein band?" she asked
"Taani chup chaap aankhein band kar varna main yeh bandage utaar doongha aur teri aankhon pe rakhoongha"
"Nahin Onu" she said, worried that his wound would become infected
"To kar. Abhi"
"Acha! Theek hai" she sighed and closed her eyes.

The next thing she felt was a jolt, making the car come to a jumpy halt. "Onu!" she exclaimed opening her eyes to see the car had almost hit the car in front.

Onu made a face thenturned into a side street.

Taani smiled as she realised where they were. At the waterfall.

"Onu...hum..."
"Dekha! Surprise ruin huwa na?!" he complained childishly "Taani tu apni aankhein band nahin raksakti thi kya?"
"Nahin raksakti thi. Kyunke agar main aankhein band rakti aur tu hamara accident karvaadehta to kya karte?"
"Gaari se nikal" he sulked undoing his belt and they got out of the car.

Taani followed Onu out of the car and as they began walking, she suddenly burst out laughing.

Onu turned to see her laughing and stopped before pulling her towards him. with her crashing into him. "Onu.." she said quietly before looking up to meet his gaze. They locked eyes before Taani looked away smiling.
"Bohat hassi aarahi thi na?" he asked softly. Taani couldn't help but smile.
"Haan. Aarahi thi" she told him "tu kaam aise karta hai ke hassi to ayeghi na Onu?"
"Acha?" he asked. She recognised the look in his eyes. Uh oh.
"Onu" she warned "dekh, tu kuch shararat mat karna!" she warned him slowly making her way to the waterfall. " u door rahe" she warned him as they reached the steps of the waterfall. "Maine kaha na door rahe" she warned before running up with Onu chasing her as they did in their childhood.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hiya lubzyyyy thanks for compilin all ur os's here....
now i can keep a tab of all ur wonderful work....😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aaaw thank you Nadzy 🤗 🤗 🤗

Means alot :)
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Originally posted by: Lubz.TaAnu

Aaaw thank you Nadzy 🤗 🤗 🤗

Means alot :)


gosh u dont hav to thank me sweets... ur sooooooooo dam creative....
anyways i got u a lil nick name😉 from now on im gonna call u........
choti kjo... im a ardent fan of karan johar's work and dat too cz he makes da most romantic movies and ur no second to his work👍🏼 
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Originally posted by: NaDzGirl


gosh u dont hav to thank me sweets... ur sooooooooo dam creative....
anyways i got u a lil nick name😉 from now on im gonna call u........
choti kjo... im a ardent fan of karan johar's work and dat too cz he makes da most romantic movies and ur no second to his work👍🏼 


Aaaaw😆😆Fine by me.😆

Yeeah his work is amazing, I agree😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lubz🤗 Now I will find all your work easily.. Yayy!!🥳