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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

Wow!Wat a chap!Brot smile n tears at d same tym. . thanks azi...Detaild coments on d way. awaiting...but no worry ...take ur sweet time....😃Clg culturals gng on.oh! i see...enjoy dear 😃 .So 1ly way to be online is thru mob. .See u 2mrw.inshallah .Wl cmnt 2mrw inshallah😊
Tc shumi dii.u 2 dear😊 .

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: premprem1

nice chapter.. loved it when he said sorry to her...thank u so much dear...glad to know that everyone like that sorry scene..😃.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Shumi di.... thank u once again for the wowieee update. it is all my pleasure dear 😊Finally, Krishna managed to speak...yep...he will speak more in my next update...😃 Im so happy dat Prats is helping him.. me too 😊love the part when he said SORRY.. thanks 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Eden_luvsKriya

Hey di! Awesome chap 👍🏼 thanks dear 🤗 ...luvd it when Krishna startd 2 speak n his first word was sorry....aww dat was so sweet...exactly....and tanks for liking that scene😃...m eagerly waiting 4 him 2 get completely ok no worry ...soon he will be...😃n dyeing 4 Kriya romance 2 start in full swing.😍😍......lol😆😉😳.....

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Posted: 14 years ago
diii....
edited my comments at page 44😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: roshna1020

hii shumi di.....hi roshna 😃 nice chp!!!👏 thanks😃 loved the touching moment wen he said sorry ...aw...one more reader who like the sorry scene.thank u so much dear 😃.. the most funny moment was wen he laugh seeng baby pics😆...hahaha....funny na?.liked both pics esp 2nd pic.😊 thanks 😃looking forward for the xt chp ..... yep going to up date right now😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

R U updating now Shumi di?

YESSSSSSS😃
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PART-20

pratigya was reading a religious book loudly to him while giving exercise to krishna's hands.

krishna:'...bas..nai...🥱'he said in broken words.

pratigya:'don't want to hear ..?'she started understanding his broken language.

krishna:'...bor...Sleepy'

pratigya:'umm...religious reading is boring for you...😡😊'
krishna:😒
pratigya:'let me try some joke...'

krishna:'na...😒'he shook his head side ways.

pratigya:'omg...don't like it...😲'

krishna:'nai.....😒'

pratigya:'why?😕'

krishna:'gthiya...'
pratigya:'...kya!😲...mere jokes ghatiya hai ?😡..muchay aap se kuch nahi bolna. mai jaa rahi hun...😡😊'she got up from the bed and try to go...but she could not.she turned back and saw her dupatta's edge was in krishna's hand.she looked at him.

krishna:'solery....😔'he pulled her dupatta and said sorry to him.

pratigya:'fir mera joke aap ko sunn na pade ga...mansoor hai?😡😃...'

krishna:'ummm...'pratigya turned back , sat beside him and started telling

pratigya:'ek din police ne raat kay 1 bajay sharab kay nashay mai aap jaise ek aadmi ko pakada..'

krishna:'mai...wey..?😡😊'
pratigya:'haan aap jaise...aap club mai sharaab peethay hai na?😡😃...'

krishna:'umm...toda...'

pratigya:'what ever...'

krishna:'filr...😛'

pratigya:'fir kya...?wo police wala aadmi se poocha 'raat kay ek bajay tum sharab pee kar kahaan ja rahay ho..?..'
krishna:😕

pratigya:' aadmi bola lecture sunne ja raha hun....😃'
krishna:😃

pratigya:'police ne poocha 'ith ni raat mai tumhay kun lecture dayga?..'
krishna:😃

pratigya:'bolo wo aadmi kay jagha aap ho tho kya jawaab day thay...?😃'

krishna:'pr ati gya...'he spelled clearly

pratigya:'...what...Confused'she was confused

krishna:'meri biwi......pratigya...😃'

krishna:Angry..mai aap ko raat mai lecture thaythi hun...?😡'

krishna:'nai...'

pratigya:'tho fir...?😡'
krishna:'din mai bhi...😆😉'

pratigya:Angry

pratigya:'achcha laga...joke...😃'she took his right hand and hold his palm in to her's.

krishna:'thoda ...'

pratigya:'srif thoda sa...very bad...pull my hand...😊'she was giving exercise to him while talking.she hold his palm with hers as if shaking handing with him.

krishna:'😊...he tried

pratigya:'aur thoda....😊'she encouraged.

krishna:😊....tried more

pratigya:'ummm...zoor lagakay...😃'
krishna:
pratigya:'...dumse...'she left her hand loose to eneble him to pull.

krishna:😊...he pulled her forcefully and she went and fall on his chest.it was a sweet surprised for pratigya.

pratigya:'god!!!!😲...you got full strength in your hands...😳'she tried to get up from his chest.he circled her with his both the arms and did not allow her to go away from him.she raised her face, it was very close to his.sly smile spread across her.
krishna:'bahuth achcha laga....😛😉'he gave a teasing smiled to her happily.

pratigya:Angry...😳...'she gave a false angry look to him.

krishna:'i love you...😛'he kissed on her head.
pratigya:😳...😛...she acknowledged him with a smile.

few days later doctor suggested krishna to sit on the wheel chair.

it was around 7 pm. shakti brought a wheel chair and came home late.pratigya and shakti was helping krishna to sit on the wheel chair.while helping shakti casually asked pratigya.
shakti:'aaj tumhari dost nahi aaye.....?🥱'he was asking about rolli without looking at pratigya.

kastur:'nahi tho...😊'she looked at krishna.
krishna:😕...he was confused with his question.is there any problem in the business?' he was worried.

as per the suggestion of pratigya they decided to shift krishna's room down stair so that he can move around in his wheel chair.

while shifting krishna's room, in his ward rob pratigya found a beautiful wooden box with japanese foliage pattern on it .

pratigya:' wow...this box is beautiful😛...kya hai iss mai...?😃'

krishna:'that is my personal...'he was sitting on the wheel chair.trying to snatch it from her.

pratigya:' muchay thayk na hai...can i ?😛'she moved away from him ad tried to open the box.

krishna:'pratigya please...don't open...'he stretched his hand from the wheelchair.

pratigya:'please muchay thayk ne dho na...'
krishna:'i said it is my personal.give it back...😡'he got angry. looking at his anger she gave that box to him.....but he could not hold it properly.lt slipped from his hand , fell on the floor and wide opened.
pratigya:😲....she look at the things which fall out from the box with surprise and slowly sat down to gather the things.

pratigya:'aap...yeh sab!😲...'she collected ....a big silver ear ring with a small dangling in the middle , a neatly folded apple green chiffon dupatta and a CD from the floor.

pratigya:'mera hai na...!!!!😲'she was wondered looking at her ear ring and green dupatta.

krishna:'please muchay thay dho...they are my memories , my treasures...'he pleaded.she came close to him.

pratigya:'...what CD this is..?😃' she went and put it in DVD to play.

krishna:'pratigya...please...don't play....'this time she did not listen to him.the CD started playing....pratigya kept her mouth and eyes wide open while watching the CD.

.....it is her office!...krishna's cabin....!
'sir...sir..sir...'she was patting on krishna's back

'what the hell is happening to you???...why are you frequently going unconscious??...' she was shouting and shaking his shoulder.

'like before i am not going to take you today...uttiyeh..'she was saying angrily and sprinkling water of his face.

'i don't care ...i am going ...'she started moving....she stopped,turned back and went back to him.

'today i will help you sir.but not again...' she was slapping on her fore head.
'...issa lag tha hai jungli share nashey mai hai...kya zaroori eitna sharab peene ka?...'she was screaming loudly looking at his back.
' shakal se tho masoom lag raha hai...par hai tho ek number ka akkdu...badmaash...lafanga...luchcha...aur aur...haan behooda...uff...kitha attitude dikha tha hai...'she gave him one slight slap on the back of his head
'sir uttiyeh..please get up...'he was on her shoulder now.

'thank god this numb skull has some sense in it....'she was saying loudly and walking along with her.

they were walking...krishna was opening his one eye alone and looking at her hiding his smile.she too looked at him.he was sliding his right hand around her hip and was holding her tightly facing very close to her.both of them were facing each other standing in a romantic posture...krishna was winking at her romantically.

'you...you...you....'she was pulling back her hand from his hip.krishna was laughing out loudly.

'you...you...you...i know it was you pratigya.it is your ear ring...'krishna was telling.pratigya was pushing him away.

'you are the one who saved me.....my dear savior'he was trying to hold her hand... she was running away.
'i am impressed...thank you and i like you...'he was shouting behind her.
CD stopped playing.
both of them watching the CD with pin drop silent.pratigya under stood that he fixed a camera in his cabin to catch her red handedly.his first and partial confession went straight to her heart.

krishna:😲 ...he was dumbfound.worried to know about her reaction.without her knowledge he took the video of her,she may not like it,that may make her angry too.

pratigya quietlycame near krishna's wheel chair with loads of emotions bubbling with in her and sat on the floor beside his legs.krishna looked at her nervously to know about her reaction.he hold his wheel chairs arms with his hands tightly to manage his emotions.
she gently raised on her knees, lift her head and looked at krishna's eyes.'i too like you sir.....i too....😭'tears broke down from her eyes.she kept her cheek on his thigh and lay on his lap.when she said SIR it remained krishna his first feelings towards her...the days he enjoyed and suffered with that unknown feelings...wonderful days with beautiful feelings! krishna kept his hand on her head with loads of passion, gently slide down to her shoulder and hold her tightly.that lovely action spoke million to her.

next day dinner time.

chandu kaka brought dinner for both krishna and pratigya.

pratigya:'mera khana yahan rak dho...mai krishna sir ko dinning table par lawoon ge...😊'

pratigya:'after a long time you are going to have dinner with your family...i will take you...😊'she brought him in the wheel chair to the dinning table.

already sumitra and shakti were present on the dinning table.

sumitra:'awo baba....😃 nice to see you on the dinning table after so many days...😊'pratigya pushed his wheel chair close to the table.

krishna:'good morning amma, good morning shakti bhai...😊'
shakti:'very good morning krishna...😃'
pratigya served food in his plate.when pratigya was about to feed him he refused.

krishna:'i will try...😊'

krishna:'tum bhi baito...'he showed the chair beside him.but sumitra don't like her to sit equally with them on the dinning table.she don't like to give equal status to her servants.

pratigya:'it is ok i don't want to eat now...'she understood sumitra and refused to sit with them.

sumitra:'chandu you have already kept pratigya's dinner in her room isn't it?😡'she asked him showing her dislike indirectly.she treats pratigya like a servant.
krishna:'pratigya muchay le chalo yahaan se...😡'he understood her amma and stop eating the food.

shakti:'krishna gussa kyun kar rahay ho?...amma kay baare mai tho tum jaan thay ho na?'
krishna:😡...pratigya chalo...'he did not listen to shakti.
shakti:...amma thum bhi na.ithne din kay baad baba dinning table pe aaya hai...aur tum...'

shakti:' pratigya....tum bhi krishna kay saat baito...chandu kaka pratigya ko serve karo...😊' with a wide smile chandu served food for pratigya too.sumitra absolute doesnot like that scene.her face burned and turned red with anger.shakti noticed that.

shakti:'krishna do you know? next week komal is going to come...😃'he changed the topic.komal is the younger sister of both shakti and krishna.she is doing her final year masters in london.
krishna:'is it?😃 when did she call you.....😕'

shakti:'two days before.i forgot to tell you...'

sumitra doesnot want to sit on the dinning table with pratigya. without eating her breakfast properly she got up from the dinning table and went to her room.pratigya was helping krishna to eat while she was eating.

shakti:'pratigya tumari dost rolli aaj bhi thikha ye nahi thi...matlab..nahi aaye na...😕'in between his food he asked her showing no interest in his talk.

pratigya:'haan...she called me and told she is not feeling well...😊'

shakti:'not feeling well?😲 then you should visit her....'he stopped eating and tried to hide his worry in his voice.

pratigya:'it is ok.she has slight cold.she will be fine soon😊...no need to worry...'she looked at krishna.krishna shared a meaningful glance with her.
shakti:' no need to worry!😲 kya dost ho tum?😡...tomorrow is saturday.if you want i can take you 😊...'he showed more interest in his food than his talk.

pratigya:'nahi....wo...'krishna interrupted

krishna:'tum shakti bhai kay saat jawo...😊'he signed her to go to rolli's house with shakti.
Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
*edited* Oieee Shumi dii... Wat an AMAZING Part!!! Krishu started with his naughtiness again.. D CD part was Wowiee.. Sumthng Cooking Between Rolli & Shakti. Uff.. Amma is so irritating. Just like Devika Sabharwal.
Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago

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