-Shanak SS- Banwra Mann Final Pg 16 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
 Saaz i would like you to continue...please πŸ˜›
also can  you get on with Shaan's guilt...πŸ˜‰

 khanak and Shaan dialogue night ... kya baat hai...πŸ˜›very nice..sofa kamal hai!!! it has a nice touch..
 keep at it...  get into the skin of shaan....what is he feeling love to know.........atleast you can.....πŸ˜ƒ

screw the cvs who are idiots and not showing πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
thnx saazy!!....
rite now all the FFs are keeping me happy after yesterday's precap!
update soon and PM me pls!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Saaaz,you are so talented!!Loved it!It's beautiful.Wish the CT's ask you guys to pen down a track for them!!Waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Lovely........Superb part yaar !
Now I dont get why CV's cannot show sumthing as subtle and simple as this !! Brain department me locha hai unke !! Huh !
 
I love your story !!! Cant wait for the next part !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
OMG Saazy! I loved it!

can i just kiss you right now!!!

this is really good...i love it how you are involving each character and keeping the emotional and comic relief very subtle...

I loved the ending...can't wait to see what will happen next...

update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
i loved ur take with d situation....i wish the cv's would have thought something similar to this(mature)...

update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
nice one saaz....... i m missing shaan and akki talks..... loved it..... and mad not able to hug khanak because she was holding the mobile...lol.. typically maddish...
 
love the way u keep the original essence of the characters
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
SaazπŸ€— mindblowing update... loveeed itπŸ€— plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

@adventure gurl: thanks much

@rbo_d_best: vaishu? Right? Thanks re

@Mani: Thank you..communicating between lines?? 'hmm'but these two burdthals never get each other that way'no matter how hard I try' haan?πŸ˜ƒ

@SYS: I hope the next part meets your expectationsπŸ˜ƒ

@Sneha: Yaar, yeh SAM anywhere anytime useless haiπŸ˜†

@shanakrocks1: Thanks re,,CVs ke baare mei jitna kum bole, utna acha'

@Naveen: Nahin yaar- koyi shock and CV walla shock tho deffo not

@Shriya: Thanks, yep my dear, KFD sunke saal beeth gaye

@Krishna: MY LADY IN PINK'loved your comments on both parts,,,as always hitting right notes,,,yes sofa is very dear to shanak's story'hai na??

@ADITEEEEEEEE: Tu tho title dekhke hi BAWRI ho gayee'.you went from thanking DocD to saying the SHOW is fabulous'..hope the next part is satisfactory!! 'yes dearie'the title that got you unhinged has been completely inspired from the song  Bawra Mann written and performed by Swanand Kirkire from the movie Hazaron Kwaishein Aisi; shall post the song with translation very soon; thanks for comment reπŸ€—

@RboFan1: Thank you

@ Krock: CVs pagal hai'tu mera SS padh

@Rafia: dearest rafia'your comments are a pleasure to read always pointing out your fav lines and what you think of them'love that about you'thanks, they make me very happy

@Anu: Oye, standing ovation ki bachhi'BAITH JA!!!πŸ˜†.. Itna mujhe mat chadda!! loved loved how you imagined them wearing those clothes,,,,I am very bad at describing the aesthetic of the scen'I am so happy when someone does it for me in their head..I love that!!!

@Saira: Yaar such kind words of appreciation!! Thanks so much, I am touched..I really am! I hope you like the next update equally.😊

@May: thanks re..

@Shia: Yaar, FF jahapannah'apne bol diya..humne mann liya!!

@Deepali: Thank you!!

@Angel: Thank you and always welcome!

@Wooster: OYE'tu pagal tho nahin ho gayee hai'listen itna pressure mat daalo tum log'.I shall be exploring some aspect of Shaan;s emotion'but whether it is the guilt that you are hoping for'.I don't know!! I hope you enjoy it nonetheless'thanks for commenting re!!😊

@Ammu: Thank you'yes FF and VMs are more enjoyable than the show unfortunately'kya kare?

@Souma: I am extremely hurt by this'that is all I have to say!!

@Smitha: Haiylo'kya talent'nothing nothing like your VMs yaar!!!

@Vandoo: Brain department hi nahin hai'tala lag gaya'.UPPER CHAMBER TO LET ka board laga hai unke gale'πŸ˜†

@Rooj: Ummm'.can I do a rain check on the kiss!! But a virtual HUG 'right away dearπŸ€—

@Loveshanak: Thank you

@Priyacool: yep dear, I wanted to focus the story on shanak and K-house 'wohi tho tha GOLDEN RBO ka USP.πŸ˜›

@Bona: Where were you? Why took so long? Thank you dearie

 

@all: NEXT PART coming soon'.I do hope you guys enjoy it'

and for the song Bawra Mann...highly recommended...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rClcGR6rdNk

have posted lyrics on 

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1597539?pn=3

shall post translation too if anyone is interested...

Edited by saaaz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
r u updating it now... just now