MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ - Page 41

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😭 😭 i am crying mehak .this part was really heart touching.
I thought this ff would have happy ending but i agree every cant end happily
u wrote this part beauifully 👏 .mayank deserve this but still it hurting .feeling sorry 4 nupur and priya also.
Write more ff.ofcourse with happy ending

u dont know how much i cried.if mom see me she will be shocked
😆 Edited by .rumki. - 13 years ago

Mehak ... I dont know what to say 😕 

OMG...mehak........i feared ths ending...but i m crying....

i am crying like hell mehak.....unable to write a single word....

omg wow that was awesome and totally unexpected!......and i loved how you ended this fanfic......my head always said that he shouldnt get forgiveness but then my heart said that maybe theres a chance....but his pain was deserved.....and in the end they were both content with what happened.......naina

Oh god...that brought tears to my eyes...it was so beautifully written sweetheart...especially the letter...

ohhhh mayank died....mehak i am gonna put my honest view....plz dont feel bad ok?

i thought the decision of mayank about suicide was pathetic......what he did to nupur was disgusting....and i completely agree with nupur's pov.....but i wanted mayank to be a changed person......in the end too he ran away.....just like the way he always had been running away throughout his life

but anyways.......maybe this is how it was supposed to end....i liked ur story......it was really different frm all ur previous ones😊......do write more😊

last part looks sad pain full one

wowwwww mehak i just read part 9 and 10 and they r awesome aur tum hamesha hi bht hi suspense pe a kar party end karti ho this is not done yar itna suspense mat rakha karo rat ko neend nahin ati hai 😆

thx alot for the pm and plzzzzzzzz update soon

OMGGGGGG Mehak wht did u do?????????😭😭😭😭😭😭