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Hello People !! I am back again with a surprize...!! Kuch yaad aaya, pehle kab miley the hum ??? socho... make a guess....ok, lemme give u a hint !!
" Y e Z i n d a g i k e R i s h t e y , Y e P y a a r k e F a r i s h t e y ,
H a r D h o o p m e i n C h h a v S e , H a r S i r p e D u a a o n s e ,
N a f r a t k i Z a m e e n o n p e , C h a a h a t k e G h a t a a o n s e . . .
Yes, this is it !! I am here to announce the Only Winner of the One-Shot Contest, we had few days ago...!! To be frank and honest, m very Dissapointed with each one of you...!! Very much.. n i b'liv even you al too will gt a big shock aftr reading so as to what i have to say and my Complaint !! hmph*** not good at alll! We had ths contest so tht we all cn havw fun, masti and share our thoughts n romantic Imaginations about NaKsh. But i guess, i failed.. cos we got just ONE, yess..just one Entry for the Contest., there were so many members sayin, i'll send, i'll participate and all that..bt nOne of you did that !! We even Extended the deadline so that you cn get max time for the Writing but thn too no 'Faida'
isn't it badd ?? m leavin all ths to u people, n to decide was this Right or Wrong !! And, and.. from now on, we'll only have some contest like things only when you guyz promise to make this a Success with no glitches plz...!! So over to you after i declare the amazin; entry sent in, along with the On-Shot for you all....!!
So... The Topic was....
Patch-Up after a goin' thru a real Bad Time, Cold War..."
vagehra vagehraaaa..etc...!!
How would you want Naitik or Akshara to Manao-Patao-Sharmao from/for the Other one !!😳😳 So.. jss Daudaoo your speedy Dimaag ke Horses n put into some nice ..romantic n mesmerising One-Shot keepin' in mind the Theme given above...!!!!
So, here's the Only Entry we got from aditi7
The story starts after everything bein settled wid sneha.....her mother also had forgiven naitik n his family also didn't had any problem wid him.....
AT NIGHT IN NAKSH ROOM......
akshara ws sittin infrontof her dresser changin al her stuffs n
naitik ws sittin in bed wid his laoptop.....they both were wonderin hw 2
start conversation!!!!!!n at last akshara takes a step..
akshara:-it has been very late naitik,,,,,sleep now...u cn do ur pendin works 2morw(c goes 2 cios door)
naitik:-akshara....... (he calls her)
akshara:-yes wat happened????????
naitik:-akshara,i m sory fr watever happend.....i knw i hv hurted u a lot.....
akshara:-its ok naitik forget al past,,,,,, n
thats also true tat i cld nt stand wid u in ur difficulties.its nt tat i
didnt had faith on u bt i cldnt cntrl my self...so i m sory..
naitik:-tats nt true akshara,,,2day u stood
wid me....tats the only reason tat i cld get out of such big
difficulty.....if u were nt wid me no-one wld hav believed me...so thank
u n i m sory.......
akshara:-ok ok,,,,its over nw....we wil b
fightin again fr dis sory....we both r sory wid each other n ownself
2...nw lets sleep i hav a lots of work tomorrow.......
naitik:-(lookin tensed)me 2.......hav 2 look fr a new desiner........
akshara:-dont wory naitik,,,,,,,,,everythin wil b ok..........
tey both go 2 sllep bt after sum tyms akshara feels tat he ws nt able 2 sleep,,,,ws jst changing his position............
akshara:-wat happend naitik????why r un't sleepin?????/
naitik:-nothin i m havin headache.......
akshara:-wat???????why didnt u tell me??????i wl give u medicine.....
naitik:-no no akshara its ok...dont need medicine..........
akshara:-ok then i wl apply blam........
while applyin balm c cld fel tat naitik ws 2 hot,,,,,,n c shouted 2 naitik.......
akshara:-naitik u r runnin down wid fever n didnt tel 2 any one???????!!!!!
naitik:-no,no akshara i m ok......i ws on litle stress na,,,,,,its al bec of tat......
akshara calls doctor n after sum tym he cums n examins naitik..n gives him a injection n tells 2 akshara....
doctor:-its nothin very serious nw......bt
give him cmplte rest n medicines on tym..i hav given him
injection,,,,his fever wil b down n wil b sleepin til mrng........
akshara:-thank u doctor...........
doctor leavs
n aksharagoes near 2 naitik...he ws sleepin..c sat nxt 2 him n touches
his forehead,,,,,,,he ws stil hot...Suddenly he started murmurin
sumthin.......
naitik:-i m so sory akshara.....i didnt mean 2
hurt u.....i also cant understand how al dis happend....plz i m
sory,,,,,u noe how mch i luv u...
akshara had tears on her eyes....nw c ws angry wid herself......
akshara:-(2 herslf) i
had seen naitik so mch worrid n tensed since so many days bt i didnt
dare 2 ask him abt his health fr 1ce.....stupid me....hw cn i b so angry
wid naitik?????
fr the whole nite c took careof
naitik,,,,,,c ws applyin cold sponges n checking his temp in each n
every moment.........n at the mrng tym c felt asleep bside
naitik,........
every1 ws ready fr pooja in mrng n was waitin
fr akshara,,,,,c didnt cum fr long so gayatri went 2 call her......
gayatri:-akshara wat happened????????????why r u sleeepin lyk dis??
akshara:-(stands up n says)low voice ma.....naitik has got fever......
gayatri:-wat?how?wen?why didnt u tel us?????
every1 cums up...
akshara:-dont wory ma,,everythin is ok
nw....i also got 2 noe it jst yseterday nite only......i immediately
called doctor,,,,,,he gave injection na medicines.fever is down nw bt he
hs nt slept wel in nite......
gayatri:-akshara,u hav also nt slept na???u rest,,,,,,,,,,we wil look after kitchen......
they al go down n akshara sits bside naitik n waits 2 get him up......
AT SNEHAS HOUSE
sneha(2 her mum):-mom plzzz let me do the
work wid singhanias nw,,,evrythin has been sort out nw.....it ws my
fault 2 nt only naitiks....i mis-understood him,,,,,,,n it is nt gud 2
leave work on middle.....they al r expectin frm me,,,,,,,they wil hav
big loss only bec of me....is it gud??????
mother:-its ok,,,,,bt u jst do ur work n cum back,,,,,nt more than tat.........
sneha:-thanks mom......thank u so much.....i wl do as before,,,,,make designs on home only n send it.......thats it......
n c calls singhanias n give tat news.....they al becum happy.....daddaji tells it 2 naitik also...
AT NAKSH ROOM
akshara:-ok naitik hav ur soup n after tat u shld take urmedicines 2,,,,,,,
naitik:-give me akshara i wil hav it al.........
akshara:-wat happened????why r u so happy???
naitik:-sneha ji has aceepted our wor again...........
akshara:-ok thats gud........everytihin has
been solved out naitik,,,,,nw u dont take any stress,,,it wil hamper ur
health again.....b happy tat sneha is back......
naitik:-nt tat i m feelin on top of world bec u r wid me.......
akshara:-n i wil b wid u always......
they both smile n hug each other tightly......😊😊
awesome one-shot Aditi !! Very well, written..👏👏👏. thank you so much for writing this...!! simply cute !! Since you are the only Participant, we Respect your competitive and sporting Spirit and we declare you as the Proud Winner n deserving Candidate !! Here's your Prize Siggy, do use it.. i know its a lame one, bt hv some PC/PS problem....!! Apologies for that..!! Enjoy and Thanks again..!!
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