FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 98

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: saomom

Hmmm..  I'm gonna need a translation on the chapter title... 😆


An Uninvited Guest
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Posted: 13 years ago
please say ur updatin soon as in next few moments/seconds/mins? I wnt b able to sleep otherwise
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Devi,
 
Great update!! I wish Shashank had not come back yet...
 
I'm sure you'll make the story interesting!
 
I wanted to know if there are any other FF that you have written besides this one and "Love and Despair". 
 
Thanks!
Shikha
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hmm...Interesting! I wonder how Shiv is going to react......He is going to feel a bit insecure...though I do not think he is going to let his girl go...

Gauri, I bet she realized  how unsuited she and Shashank were...

Update soon, Devi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
 
Thanks!  Perhaps for us non Hindi speakers you could put a translation in (  ) .  I certainly cannot be the only one who doesn't understand...
 
🤣 ðŸ¤£ ðŸ¤£ 
 
 Gosh, some days I am SO funny! 😉 <sigh>  I crack myself up!
Posted: 13 years ago
Well I'm glad this complication is happening now. It is a smart move. What's the use and fun if he lands in their life after they have made ten thousand promises to one another? This may bring them to voice their feelings....not just desires.

I don't mean to be a killjoy, but what is Neela doing there? Isn't it a family function? She can't be related to Shiv since she had a thing for him and neither to Dhruv since he seems to have fallen for her.

P.S. - Sorry Shashank! I didn't mean for Neela to steal your thunder...but I'm more curious about her presence than yours 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
wht the hell is shashank doing with his hands on gauri?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh Oh..trouble in paradise!!  Well,well lil' devil ..you always come up with the most unexpected situations to trouble me..now I can't sit in peace till I get to read the next part..not fair !!! (pouts)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Devi,
 
Any chance of an update before I go to bed. It is almost midnite. Will be in dream land in about an hour😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh God Dear,

m reading ur FF from past two days ........has effected my work drastically...but it was worth it......n u end up at this point.....uff.....whn 'll u update dear.......! its like holding ur breath till u read the next part....!