Love: A Pain but Still beautiful!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Characters 
Shilpa Anand As Cadet Sanjana Khan 


A Girl with a dark past...
Her Dream..Army
She will organize events but never participate or attend any because of her past...
She have a heart of Gold

 

Iqbal Khan As  Cadet Angad Khan

vdr8.jpg Iqbal khan image by iqbal_khan_fans_orkut
A cool, funny, handsome boy
Brother of Sanju(Sanjana)
Loves her sister more than anything
Only he knows abt her past nobody else
(Both of them have grown up in orphanage) 

Karan Singh Grover As Cadet Armaan Malik
 a handsome dude..total flirt..but his heart iz always searchin for true love... He can do anything for his friends



Neha Bamb As Cadet Kripa Malhotra
 Sweet, Cute innocent girl.. believes in love so much...Waitin for her prince charmin


Aamina Sharif As  Cadet Kashish Sinha
total tomboy,she doesnot believe in love..thinks "Love is for fools" but she is a great friend..oh good full time fighter for rights..(i didnt find any of her pic like tomboy)



Rajeev Khandelwal As Cadet Rajveer SIngh Shekhawat
tough guy..if he love someone or something he will nerver tell or show it

Jay Bhanushali as Neev
a cute, stupid funny intern

Panchi Bora As Prachi
14niuz8.jpg panchi bora image by aleya_2010pretty cute girl... also an intern

i need one cool nice character name and 2 negative :(

Part 1 ----- pge 2


if u like it tell me and if u dont still tell me cause i wanna how good or bad writer i am 
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
i dont know much abt army but still i love it so if anything is wrong plz dont mind it!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyy dear
nice intro 
cont soon 
n nice cs
plzz add me to ur pm list
thx
dhrvuika
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys come on yar tell me 
its my first vm ever!!!!!!! 
💔
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi sara
first of everything else
Welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
swagat hai aapka rajeev-aamna ke fanlist mein
i knw u like other jodis  too but i llove rajeev-aamna pair only so for me u r the admirer of ra jodi..so a grand welcome from my side.
now thank u so much to think of given us n write this  beautiful fic having ra too
well honestly i also like rajeev n aamna to be in army background n love to see them in this character though i also don't knw much abt army n all
the intro is jus fab.
i like angad -kripa ,neev-prachi n armaan-shilpa too
so this fic is n will be one of my most desirous fic.pls dear cont soon wit it  n try to update it on regular basis.
i knw u must be busy in ur life n it will be difficult for u to write jaldi-jaldi.but dear i also can't help myself..so will be waiting for ur fic eagerly always...
hope u don't mind by my such comment on  this fic.
n ya dear try to pm me wen u update nex....
n ya if u don't mind than i want to spread this fic to all ra dewane..or i can help u if u want to do this on ur own..i don't knw if u r new to this forum or not.so again forgive me if i give u unnecessary advice,,it jus i'm so excited for this fic that can't control myself..
grt work dear.. 
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ya i forgot to mention earlier.nice selection of pics...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcum to FF world..!! n Naaaicee introoo.!! doo upadte soon.!! looking up for the 1st part.!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi
the up is good
i will just for rajeev bcoz he is mine fav
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9

Part 1
Sanjana and Angad House (They both grown up in orphanage but by doing part time jobs and saving money bought their own house)
Girl: Nayi Bhaiya Aaj aapki Bhari hai
Boy: Nahi Aaj teri bhari hai Cheater
Girl: hawwww u called me cheater again :-O
Boy: Sanju is a cheater..Sanju is a cheater
Sanjana: Angad is a  Rat.. 
Both of them r running around fighting like kids (if u have bro or sis u knw what i mean)
Angad: chal cheater tu kia yaad rakhay gee her cheez mai cheating karti hai..aaj bhari tumhari but mera mood hai mai breakfast bana loon ga..
Sanju: I love you rats..you r the bestttttttttt brother in the world
ANgad: Chal Ja tayar hoja..warna academy k liye late ho jayen gai theek 9 bajay pohanchna hai waha.. Its our first day so dont wanna be late hun
Sanju: ok bhaiiiii love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Angad: Chal ja ja muskay na laga..
its first day so they dont wear their uniforms
Armaan Maliks House....
Armaan is screaming around for his stufff(by the he is spoiled brat of rich family...but with a good heart)
Ammy: meray shoes....and breakfast readdddddddddy nahi haiiiii 
Serv: ami beta abhi laya 
Amy: Kaka dair ho jaye gee na bus aaj k din pohanch jaoon phir to late he late
(Lets let him get ready for academy we gonna check on rajveer)
Raj lives alone 
HE is getting ready for  academy alsoo
His phone rings
Raj:Hi Kripss (Kripa and Raj are best friends)
Krips: Hi raj..plzz yar mujy pick kar lena 
Raj: Phir say tu nay ghari ko kahin thok diya dont tell me kisi becharay ko upper pohancha diya
Krp: rajjjjjjjjj... nahi yar bohot nervous hoon iss liye..first day new ppl new adventure
Raj: aisa lagta hai aaj he tunnay sarhad par jang k liye jana hai...acha chor i'll pick you uppp dont worry
Kripa: u r darlling sweetheart etc etc
Raj: i hate buttering...bye see ya
Krips: byeeee


Kashish's house(she lives with her massi)
Kshish: no massi plz no
Massi: to phir yeh pehan
Kashish: Massi mai academy ja rahi hoon kisi ki shaadi par nahi 
Massi: Kya pata koi mill jaye
Kashish: Aay God...plz save me from this messs
getting out of her room..
(thts hw kashish looked)

neev and prachi will enter later and also new character will be introduce as they enter


i know its not interesting but still i tried my best to make it interesting

(if u guys want any of ur fav character to be in it tell me :) )

Edited by SaraRajveer - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
omgg this is soo fricken interesitngg ! i dont know wat ur tlaking boutt ! this is amazingg....andd can u please PM me when you update?? omgg pleasee....and update sooon ! =]