Maaneet FF**Back in your arms**Updated on Pg 108 - Page 2

Originally posted by: _innocent_

@mayuri... my name is julie😳..

and interesting plot..cnt wait to read it

interesting  plot

Maaneet FF**Back into your arms**

 

Well guys as I promised you the first part of my FF will be updated to day. Here it goes. I am sure you all know the concept. Please ignore minor mistakes as this is my first ever FF in Geet forum. Hope you guys will enjoy

I am new here guys so don't know many of you here. Positive criticism is and shall always be welcome!

 

Part 1

 

Geet is standing facing towards the moon on the terrace. She was thinking about what all happened today. Maan getting to know the truth about dev betraying me. Thought he is Maan's brother; still for my sake and that I should get justice Maan put him behind the bars. I am the cause for all the trouble that is being brewing in the Khurana house. Including dadi's illness. She had to somewhere draw the line she thought. She had to leave her Maan for their as well as his happiness sake. She was in tears now. The very thought of leaving her Maan and to go away from him was killing her. Her heart was bleeding. She was dying a death; it was as if someone was piercing her heart with needles.

Meanwhile Maan helped dadi go to her room. He made her sleep and tucked her in. as he was about to leave, she stopped him. She made her promise her that he should in any case be their with Geet now and support her. She also told him that I don't to even want to see dev in my house now. Did I fail so miserably to bring up my grand sons that dev committed such a sin? Please tell me Maan where did I fail. Blabbering about how she was unsuccessful in bring up dev, she felt asleep. She had too much for the day. The truth had mentally worn her out. Maan saw this and kissed her forehead promised that no harm shall come to them now. Everything was over. Now there would be only happiness everywhere. Saying this he leaves. Switches off the lights, shuts the door behind and goes to the terrace. He knew that Geet would be there only.

Maan sees Geet there, he felt relived that she hadn't gone anywhere. He constantly feared that would any day run away from his life before even he could stop her. His face which showed only pain he caused her; was very visible. He slowly went towards her. She could very well sense that he was very near.

 

To be continued very soon.

 

Guys m really sorry for the short part''next update I have to still work it out

 

Hope you will love this part'..enjoy!!!!........and drop your comments!!!!!....will love to read them'.your comments make my creative cells to work and inspire me to write more parts'

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Loads of love❤️❤️

Mayuri❤️❤️

Edited by mayuri.vet - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vrsharma

nice starting

nice start.. looking forward to the next part.. do continue soon n plzz add me onto ur pm list..

hi mayuri🤗i'm SONA, realy awesome start yaar do continue ur FF waiting for next part do write it soon and ya add me to ur PM list 😊

hey  lovely  starting  ................plz  add  me  in  ur  PM list................

Originally posted by: swetha10

nice start.. looking forward to the next part.. do continue soon n plzz add me onto ur pm list..

Originally posted by: sona-rai

hi mayuri🤗i'm SONA, realy awesome start yaar do continue ur FF waiting for next part do write it soon and ya add me to ur PM list 😊

Originally posted by: vaniabi

hey  lovely  starting  ................plz  add  me  in  ur  PM list................