We're the Perfect Two-MJHT FF- Part14- pg140 19/5 - Page 64

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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 update..
congrats 2 ur sis
hey just love the simple growing relationshp...how maturly mayu is handling it gr8
bt mayu is giving hard time to smai...very bad han ..lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
I've been reading this story since the beginning but this is the first time commenting. This is one of the best ffs I've read. You've done a great job, esp with satisfying both MN and SG fans.
I'm a Mayank-Nupur fan, so obviously I loved their part. Mayank counting how many times she turned, then the morning bit...it was too cute!!!
I've loved SG in this part as well. Sam was too funny. lol.
Can't wait for the next part. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow mansi

first of all congo to ur sister

n the update was simply amazing

too good

I loved sajan man

they were so sweet

nupur annoyed mayank so much by god

but mayur were really cute

waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago

such a cute update,,,seriously m will be a villain in sg lovestory 🤣 🤣 thats so not happening 🤣

but loved the whole update! :) loved the MN parts kyunki they were so real LOL

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Posted: 14 years ago
my heartful wishes to ur sister dear.....the update was awesome dear...loved it...............................
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Posted: 14 years ago


Hi mansi
at first i want to congrats ur sister dear.
May ALLAH bless her and give her all the happiness
Mansi ur update alwz made me happy.
Oh GOSH how could u manage both the couple in this ff ?
it was just brilliant and bind blowing yaar

i loved my mayur a lot and here i have fnd a new mayur. they r very sweet,cute and adorable

haye my nupur is so innocent and mayank is understanding and matured enough.
poor mayank - at their first night he was counting how many times did nupur turned her side.LOL
but kya kare nups was feeling a lil bit uncomfortable.


i loved the morning scene also.
wow maynk took her in sams house.
he is really a nice guy.
sayank convo was too funny and i loved it.

sajan scene was also very good- specially sams imagination.LOL
very nice update dear
fantastic and beautiful

plz do update next part soon.
take care and do lots of fun.

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey congoz for ur sis engagement!

now, the update was awesome........mayur were so cute😆😆😆......so natural............feelin wierd n awkwardness.....n mayu......how nicely he handled her n in d mornin took her to her home............awwwwwwwwwww..😳......hope they fall in love soon!

n sanu......omg.that scene was really gud.........

SG fallin luv..............thats nice

loved the update!

do cont soon!!

n thnx alot for d pm!😛😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
i love your mayur. they are different and cool.
pls dont make us wait so much for updates.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sajjal-

reserved..not first but happy that you updated😆

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Mansiiiii finally sweety you updated, but first congrats to your sister. May the blessed couple be happy in their newly joined life.

Second i have to say that SaJan stole the update today, they were too cute. Sam telling her to come over and she refusing and then his anger over it adorable/

then both imaging each other ...in their presence and confused over their feelings was totally sweet
and i loved it when they both asked each other abt totally januable as they say.

Loved MN also...Mayank counting how many times she twisted and turned ..aww...and then nupur shuting up just so he would not go and sleep in the guestroom
...she is so cute.

Happy that she stayed and mayank made her understand and then in the morning he himself took her there....to visit samrat.

btw i have to say one thing, i can never imagine a brother asking his sister how her wedding night went? that just does not fit right. A brother would never ask such personal and intimate details bt than again samrat is her only family ...bt still can;t imagine that.

Samrat is such a cutiepie...abt mayank being the biggest VILLIAN in his and gunjan's lovestory///tottally supercuteeee :))

Loved the update...thank god you updated...



Well..I had to reply to this!😳 That scene isnt complete. There is a REASON..why Samrat asked that to Nupur..that will be next chapter :)

And two things I wanna say...

1) SN's relation is exactly the same as I share with my first cousin..we are extremely close..and can share each and everything. And I guess the day either of us get married..we wont think twice before asking how was ur "wedding night" esp him..😆

2) Also..Samrat knows the relation MN currently share..and also knows that they wouldnt have conssumated the marriage..so hes just teasing them..to irritate..😛 while Mayank yes..Nupur a different reason..u shall know later :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
edited my comment on pg 86

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