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Posted: 14 years ago
updated 0n page 82 😳
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Hey Mansi.......... plz update soon...............dying to read ahead
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firstly like many people said even i dont skip any part😆

this was another fab part👍🏼
dis story has a very unique flavour ,the characters had a modern shade but yet dis story even had a particular eastern karisma
which i absolutly adore.............
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hey love your ff...can you please add me to your PM list?

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I jus reached back home from Mumbai..GOSH! it was tiring..:( Ill continue for sure during the weekend :)

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@ I did not get time to reply to comments this time..sorry..but I read all of them..thanks so muchh!!😃

Some one had mentioned..of Nupur being a teenage bride..I just wanted to clear all the negative vibes around her. Her brother is her only family. She wasnt even mentally prepared to be seperated from him. But dont worry..Mayank is mature enough to handle her. :)

And thanks for the SG suggestions..their scenes might be a bit filmy..but I found dem to be cute..so I jus followed my instincts..hope the SG fans like it..:)

A special mention to my friend here..who made this beautiful VM for my FF!! Amber (Sajjal) The title of this FF..is based on a very fav. song of mine..by Auburn..I would be really glad if you all see it once..its amazing :)


And sorry Amber..U wont be the 1st to comment!! I wanted to post a seperate post for ur VM!😃

Scroll down for chap 9
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'Nupur..' Mayank said a bit irritated..by her constant turning and moving.

She made a face and again slept straight thinking about everything unnecessary. She needed to sleep. But it wasn't working. She turned again. This time towards Mayank. She touched his arm. 'Mayank..are you awake??'

'What happen?' he said facing her.

She sat up straight. Taking a deep breathe. 'I cant stay here.' She whispered. 'I want to go home right NOW.' She said a bit loudly.

'What??' Mayank said stunned.

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CHAPTER- 9

Nupur closed her eyes in frustration. 'Mayank..Im so sorry..its not your..its my fault. Leave.' She fumbled with her words and lied down closing her eyes.

'Nupur..get up.' He said in a mellow tone.

She got up twiddling with the bed-sheet and looked down. 'What?' She asked.

He hesitated a bit; but eventually caught her hand. 'What happen? You wont tell me?'

She was about to start with her frustration; but then closed her mouth. 'Nothing. I said na..then what.' She said irritated.

'Nupur.' He said a bit sternly.

She sighed. 'Mayank…Im feeling so odd here!!' She said finally letting her voice out. 'New house..new room. Sharing a room. It seems so weird to me.' She ended softly.

'As if I'm not feeling odd.' He rolled his eyes and left her hand.

She looked at him. 'I agree.'

'See Nupur..when we got engaged, I thought we will get married a year later. Till then it would have been fine. But in 10 days..it will be odd. And Im giving you all the space you want. Really.'

Nupur took a deep breathe. 'Hmm thanku…you know what Mayank..bhai makes the worlds yuckiest coffee. He cant iron even a shirt. He always dirties the kitchen. Im so worried about him.' She confessed out of the blue.

'See Nupur I know all that very well. I know the bond both of you share. But going home now is no solution to the problem. Ill drop you there tomorrow morning myself. Its really late now. Why don't you give him a call?' He suggested passing his phone.

She looked at the phone for a few seconds. Reluctantly she took it and dialed the numbed. 'Busy?' Nupur looked at the screen strangely. 'Who is Bhai talking to?' She thought.

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'I don't know Chashmish..it actually feels so weird to be alone.' Samrat sighed. He was sleeping in his parents room; eyes filled with tears.

'Samrat please don't cry. Nupur will be fine.'

'I know she will..but then…everything happened so suddenly na?'

'Yeah it did.' She replied.

'Chashmish..can you come home? Im feeling so lonely..' He sighed.

'Me..come home? Samrat…how can I?'

'You said you're my friend..wont a friend do this much for a friend..? Please..' He pleaded.

'Samrat..its so late. How will I come. Go to sleep.'

'Fine..bye.' He angrily cut the call and switched off his phone so that she wont be able to call again. He threw the phone somewhere and closed his eyes.

He opened his eyes again..and a doubt surrounded his brain. He had millions and millions of friends. Why does he only call Gunjan..when he's upset..or he's happy..or excited..why not others? Why did she have that "special" place? Was it some other feeling..which he was unknown of? He relaxed himself and calmed down a bit. But closing his eyes..he could only imagine her. Her giggles..her eyes..her hair..her glowing skin…their dance..them at the scary house holding hands..he slowly opened his eyes..was it..the most weirdest feeling of "LOVE?"

He slapped himself on the head and closed his eyes. He wished that just once if he could see her. He felt someone else in the room and opened his eyes. She was standing there..in the same blue and gold lehenga..she wore at the wedding..her hands swaying..and a naughty grin on her face.

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Mayank sighed and took the phone from her hand. 'Must be on an important call. You go to sleep now.' He said pushing her shoulders and making her lie down.

'But Mayank…Im not sleepy!!' She pouted.

'Nupur..' He shouted now.

Making a face. 'Mayank..can I borrow your pillow?' She asked a bit apprehensive.

He didn't think twice, but handed it over to her. She kept it in the middle of both of them and hugged it tight and closed her eyes.

'Good night.' She mumbled.

'Excuse me..thats my pillow!' He said irritated. He sighed. 'Welcome to married life.' He said to himself and lied down.

'Umm..Mayank.' Nupur tapped his shoulders. 'You can have half of the pillow. Ill take the upper and you take the lower half.'

He suppressed a smile. 'Its fine. Good night.' He pulled the comforter over both of them.

'Mayank……'

'What???' He said now irritated.

Shaky voice. 'Should I move away a bit. Your allergic to mehndi right?'

'No need.' He replied.

'Acha last thing….' She was about to ask.

Interrupting her. 'One more question and Im going and sleeping in the guest room.'

Loudly. 'No no. Im sleeping. Good night.' She closed her eyes.

He softly chuckled not letting her hear. He waited for 15 minutes..as silence took over completely. He waited for her to sleep. She finally did and he sighed with happiness and joy.

'Finally..I can sleep!!' He sighed and bounced his head on the bed comfortably. But his happiness was short-lived. Nupur was fast asleep..but her turning and twisting did not stop. She changed her sleeping position every 25 seconds. He counted.

In sleep she almost pushed the pillow on the floor. Mayank caught it and kept it under his head. He slept on his stomach, facing her. His eyes were wide open as he kept looking at her and sighed. "..would she finally sleep?" He thought to himself.

It was only two hours later..that finally Nupur went into deep slumber. Her hand was tucked under her head. She also slept on her stomach, facing him. He was always really scared of how the so-called "wedding night" would turn out to be. The last thing he expected it, was to be comical..which it actually turned out. Mayank sent a prayer to god thanking him..as his droopy eyes closed..pushing him towards sleep.

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'Chashmish…are you actually here?' He rubbed his eyes.

'Your in love with me Samrat..agree to it..please..' She said with a grin.

'Me and love? No ways..I'm surely dreaming.' Irritated he lied down and closed his eyes. He slowly opened his eyes and saw that she was lying down next to him.

'You love me na?' She pouted.

He made a sad face. 'I think I'm going mad…' He sighed.

'Awww…' She giggled.

She pulled him closer and hugged him tight like a baby. He too caught her waist tenderly. She caressed his hair..and patted his back..putting him to sleep and placed a peck on his hair.

Samrat got up a few hours later to see himself hugging the pillow tight. He searched for Gunjan..but she was nowhere to be found..Sighing he went back to sleep.

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Nupur opened her eyes next morning by the rays of the sun. She would rarely get up early..but that day she did. She yawned and turned right to see Mayank peacefully sleeping next to her. She got up in shock seeing him. She then out-of-nowhere realized that they were "married" now..and she had to see the sight everyday. She was feeling very lazy to get up..so she lied down again. On the other hand Mayank also slowly got up. He stretched his arms and slowly opened his eyes. He saw Nupur. She lightly smiled at him and he too smiled back. Suddenly he got a shock and got up.

'What happened Mayank? Are you fine?' She asked him in a worried tone.

'Nupur..' He softly said and sighed. 'Nothing. Good morning.'

Making a face. 'Umm..good morning.'

'Sorry..' Holding his fore-head. 'It will take some time.' He forced a smile.

She nodded. 'Hmm..I know.'

'Ill go and get ready..office.' He mumbled.

She nodded. 'Its only 6..wake me up in an hour okay..' She requested.

'Are you sleeping again?' He asked a bit surprised.

She giggled. 'Umm..ya. What will I do getting up so early? And you ask me to sleep..I can fall asleep anytime..' She confessed laughing. 'I am very lazy.'

'I know that the best. Im actually lazy too. In getting up. Gunjan has to force me.' He too laughed. 'I think even Ill sleep off again. Im sure Gunjan wont come inside today.' He said lying down again.

'Why?' She asked confused.

He rolled his eyes and chuckled. 'Nothing..good night.' He said closing his eyes. 'By the way..thanks to you..I didn't sleep the whole night..'

'Me? What did I do?' She asked shocked.

Facing her. 'You keep turning all the time. Cant sleep in one position.' He said a bit irritated to tease her.

'Me? No..No ways..' She said looking away. 'Maybe once or twice.'

'43 times to be precise..' He smirked.

'You COUNTED?' She rolled her eyes.

'What else do you want me to do? All my sleep vanished. From tonight im going to tie you with a rope. So that you don't move and let me sleep peacefully.' He giggled.

'How mean!!' She punched him on the shoulder and did not stop.

He laughed and clutched her hands tightly. 'Okay I wont tie you with the rope…happy.'

She removed her hands from his grip and turned the other way. 'I don't want to talk to you. This is me. And sorry to say you have to live with it.' She said sternly.

He was surprised by her confidence. 'And what If I change it…?'

'That will be good for you.' She bluntly smiled and went off to sleep. He did the same with thoughts in his mind to prove his point.

Opening her eyes again. 'Mayank..can I ask you one last and final thing?'

'W-H-A-T?'

Her tone got a bit serious. 'Why did mom go off so early? She was supposed to stay for a week na?'

She asked so innocently that he didn't want to lie to her. 'Actually my mami got paralyzed after an accident..so mom takes care of my two cousins..forgetting her own children. How nice na?' He ended sarcastically shocking Nupur. He turned and fell asleep.

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Gunjan hadn't slept the whole night. It was 6 in the morning..and her eyes were wide open..showing signs of tension. Samrat's phone was switched off and she was really worried for him. But how could she go to his house..that too at such a late time. She questioned herself. Her face was on the pillow..and it looked sad. She forcefully closed her eyes to grab some sleep. Unable to do so..she opened it again..and this time Samrat was lying next to her. His hand tucked under his head. She got up in shock.

'What are you doing here?' She yelled.

'Looking at you..what else will I do?' He said in a funny tone.

'Dekho..Sam..Samrat..' Moving away.

Pulling her closer and looking in her eyes. 'Dekh to raha hun Chashmish..' He grinned and moved closer. She closed her eyes in anticipation. She waited..and waited..and opened her eyes to see nobody. Her face fell and she seemed so confused. She gulped and forced herself to sleep.

She felt a hand go around her waist. 'Sleep well Chashmish.' Samrat mumbled and snuggled closer to her and slept.

She knew it was a dream. But she was loving it. What if it didn't turn reality..seeing dreams felt better. With a smile on her face..she slept.

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Samrat got up the next morning. He yawned as he climbed down the stairs. 'Nupur..get my coffee..and my paper.' He screamed while rubbing his eyes. He stopped in his tracks for a few seconds..and realized that Nupur wasn't there anymore. He felt sad again and turned to go back to his room.

'Your coffee and paper!!'

Samrat turned hearing Nupur's voice. He saw her standing there with a tray in her hand..wearing a plain red saree with no jewelery but only her red bangles of the wedding. She looked gorgeous.

'Nupur..' He went and hugged her. 'What are you doing here?' Going back. 'In this new look?' Suddenly. 'Nupur..why did you come here? What will Mayank and Gunjan think? You're a complete idiot. Do you know that?' He tapped her head.

'I so agree with that point Samrat.' Mayank entered from the kitchen.

'Mayank!!' Nupur glared as Samrat and Mayank hugged each other.

'What is this morning surprise for me?' He asked both of them.

'Ask your sweet sister!' Mayank teased drinking his coffee.

Samrat giggled while Nupur made a face. He took the coffee and took a sip. 'Waise guys..how was the wedding night hun?' He asked casually winking at them. Nupur's eyes widened with shock while Mayank's throat burned with the coffee. He started coughing.

'Excuse me.' He replied going in the kitchen.

'You will never change will you? Shameless!' She said hitting his back.

'What…what did I say?' He acted innocent.

'Bechara Mayank…' She pouted.

'Wah! Mayank ki badi chinta ho rahi hai..hun?'

'Bhai..please..'

'Waise Mayank..blushes more than you..' He said giggling. Even Nupur joined him. 'Ab batao bhi..how did last night go?' He whispered in her ear. And burst out laughing.

Folding her hands. 'Why should I tell you? And whom were you talking to last night?'

'Me…why? Did you call?' He asked.

'Yes..and it was engaged.' She shouted.

'Bhabhi..I cant find the….' Gunjan entered from the kitchen.

'Chashmish!!' Samrat screamed. 'You have also come?'

She looked away from the prying eyes of Nupur. 'Umm..haan. Bhabhi..I cant find the haldi..can you tell me where is it?' She asked politely. She had offered to make break-fast. Nupur nodded and went inside the kitchen.

As Samrat saw Nupur going away..He pulled Gunjan's hand and took her somewhere away.

'Did you come into my room yesterday?' He asked in an accusing tone.

'Me?' She looked confused. 'Umm..no. ' Looking at him suspiciously. 'Did you come to my room in the morning?'

'No ways. Why would I come?'

They both heaved a sigh of relief. Samrat looked at her and all the last night thoughts came to his mind. Was it true? Gunjan was still unknown to her feelings.

All the four of them sat down to have break-fast.

'Mayank your not going to office today right?' Samrat asked.

'No..Its already late. Whats the point. Will go straight on Monday now.'

'Hmm..' Samrat nodded and ate. 'Wow Gunjan..kya break-fast hai? Aisa break-fast to maine apni life main nahin khaya..man karta hai ke....'

Gunjan was shocked..Mayank a bit angry..and Nupur suspicious.

Mayank moved closer and tapped Samrat's shoulder. 'Bas Samrat..Mere behen se zara door rahoge to better rahega...' He whispered and forced a smile.

Samrat gulped and became quiet. Even if he loved Gunjan..Mayank would be the biggest villain in their love-story..He had never thought of that.

'Waise Mayank...tum toh bata do..ke tumhare so-called wedding night kaise rahe?' Samrat whispered to Mayank in order to change the topic.

Nupur and Gunjan could not hear anything..as they just looked at them.

Smiling. 'Samrat kuch baate private rahe to behatar hota hai..right?' Mayank whispered back.

'Nupur meri behen hai..aur tum mere dost..ab kya to private!' He muttered casually. But seeing his expressions..he added. 'Waise Mr.Mayank Sharma achanak se Mr. Private Sharma bante ja rahe hai..' He teased.

Nupur and Gunjan were whispering now.

'What do you think both of them are talking?' Nupur asked.

'I dont know.' Gunjan answered honestly.

'Yeh Mayank na zaroor meri burai kar raha hoga..' She mumbled angrily.

'Bhabhi..' She smiled. 'Im sure tumhare tareef kar rahe hain.'

'Mayank ka to pata nahin..but Im sure ke Samrat tumhare tareef zaroor kar raha hoga..haina?' She whispered with a teasing tone.

Gunjan was taken-aback. She looked at Samrat. Even he was looking at her. There were questions in his eyes..because of which she felt a bit afraid..Would they also be the Perfect two??

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Pre-cap- GuNur bonding
I know it was small..but then it wasnt balacing with the next scene I had written..so shifted that to the next chapter...:) Sorry for the late update though!! My elder sister got engaged last week in Mumbai🥳 so the delay..😳
Edited by -Mansi- - 14 years ago
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First of all give my well wishes to your sister - Congratulations, that is a wonderful news ...
Amber's video was beautiful - I didn't know Sajjal's name is Amber😳

And now coming to your update -
SaJan are the cutest beings ... Yes it was tad bit filmy but our lives are as well filmy ... I loved how Samrat questioned his acts and how he wanted to confide in her ... Their dreams were so cute .... Gunjan is a sweetheart ... The way they questioned each other was just adorable and Samrat's thoughts about Mayank being the villain just cracked me up!! Gunjan's thought about them being the perfect two was lovely - I felt like saying, ask Mansi not me - she has answers to all the questions 😆

The night could not get any better for MayUr😆 I pity Mayank - she actually turned 43 times😲 - he is definitely a nerd ... But it was very cute and their relationship has that innocence which is just wonderful ... They way Nupur surprised Samrat was endearing ... Samrat is really naughty, poor Mayank ... Mayank's possessiveness is good but I hope it doesn't act as a barrier in the future ... The whispering session was just awesome ... And ofcourse, the morning was really cute ...

I am just loving this story, it's so full of innocence - all four are really innocent ... I was shocked by Mayank's comment on his mother ....

Overall, you are really writing an ameliorate story ...
Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago
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Mansii 🤗
Missed you<3, congratulation Gal soo happy for you and your sis (: !
Okay, coming to the FF yes i agree this part was short soo am not impressed aarrghh, want long updates like usual !
MayUr were really adorable, am glad she didn't go home 😆 and OMG she turned 43 times 😲 shytt 😆 bechara Mayank man ! Nupur sure asks alot of questions doesn't she ? I like this Nupur better she seems more childish and cute (:
SaJan, 😍 they're in love but confused 😳😆 ! Yeah that imagination bit was filmy, but what the heck it happens in movies and dramas so .. yeah ! It was really cute how they imagined each other and then the next day asking did you come to my room last night ?
And, Mayank's not gona like it if he finds out his best friend is in love with his sis i tell you 😆😆 seeing him now !
Awesome update as usual, loved it<3 ! Continue soon pleasee (:
And and and, awesome VM done by Amber ❤️
Edited by MoNayaKiDeewani - 14 years ago
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first of all congratulations on your sister's engagement
coming to update
update was awesome
glad that mayank made nupur understand
and they both are feeling so odd
mayank counted how much nupur turned..aww that was so sweet
loved samrat's dream
mayank's answer about his mother was shocking
mayank greatest villian in sajan's love story lol
breakfast was nice
and precap is good
do cont soon
Edited by fanofmjht - 14 years ago

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