Okkkk Guyzzz..
its Fan-Fic time now..
For new members of our CC : Guyzzz we r playing a game in our CC which is being carried forwrd from the last CC ..
Its called "BHAKT IN THE SPOTLIGHT"
N rite now i m holding this wonderful title..😳😳 😉😉
there r some pending ques. from Lola .. so here i am completing my test paper 😆😆
Originally posted by: lola610
Fanfic challenge (my favorite 
) - write us a short scene based on one the prompts below... can use mine and Lali's that are listed in the ToC as examples for length/structure...
- A scene from Shri Ram's childhood which, like the shooting-mangoes-off-trees one that's in both RS and AS Ramayan, gives us a clue of his divine qualities early on - humility, tolerance, etc.
Okkk .. frnds .. i watched some bachpan ki videos of both NDTV Ramayan as well as RS Ramayan ..
and have prepared a Fan-Fic... thnks a ton Lola for giving me the pics ... love u !!
Hope u like it .. feel free to criticise if u dont like anythng .. as dis is my first ever try !! 😉😉
Its another lovely day in Ayodhya...all the three Momies are donewith their morning prayers..
and.. they come to the chambers of Little boys - Ram, Bharat, Lakshman & Shatrughan..
to wake them up...
Kaushalya Mata : Ram !! Dear son.. wake up..
wake up son ..!!
look our Surya Devta has appeared @ ur window.. on his super glowing chariot..
Come on ! Hurry up... u & ur brothers have to do Surya vandana..
Go.. n get ready Son !!😃
Ram : Pranaam Maa !! I hope m not late for the morning prayers?? 😲
Kaushalya Mata : No... No.. my dear ... u are on time ..
u r never late !! 😳😳😳
Ram & his little brothers perform their daily prayers well in time..
Shatrughan (very excited) : Hey... Come on !! Lets go to the Garden in front of our mahal..
I saw some very juicy and delicious mangoes on the trees there, yesterday ..
Lets go and try our shooting skills..
I am sure Bharat bhaiya will get maximum mangoes.. he has improved alot !!
😃😃😃😃
Lakshman (angrily) : huhhhh.. no Shatrughan.. No doubt Bharat bhaiya is very good with
bow and arrow .. but only Ram bhaiya will get maximum mangoes... Do u undersatnd?? 😡
Bharat : Heyyy guyzzz ... chill... Do not fight please .. !! Shatrughan .. Lakshman is right .. Ram bhaiya is incomparable .. 😳😳😳
Shatrughan (interrupting) : But brother.. !! I know ur skills.. 😒
Lakshman : And i know Ram bhaiya's caliber..👍🏼
Ram (in very serene tone) : Okk.. okk.. Brothers ...please dont fight...we have to go to father's chamber to seek his blessings.. right??
And Guru Vashishth ji says that when we pray or seek blessings from someone ..
we should do it with a happy heart and relaxed mind .. we should not have any negative vibrations
around us... okk.. So just calm down u little angry boyz !! 😃😃😃😳😳😳
Lakshman & Shatrughan : Okk bhaiya ..!! As u say .. Sorry bhaiya .. we won't fight again ! 😉😊
Ram : Now that's like my Good brothers .. Come on.. !! Lets go and meet dad !!😊😊
They all go to the King, seek his blessings and head towards the royal garden ..
Its a lovely garden ... with thousands of different types of sweet smelling flowers...
ponds with crystal clear water .. lush green grass and lots of birds chirruping here and there ..
The boys stand near the mango trees ..
Ready to shoot the mangoes ..
1
2
3
and
GO !!!
Lakshman : Oh my God !! I was targetting that mango right infront of me .. and look ..
my arrow went on the apple tree behind the mango tree... 🤔
Oh no.. !! I think I have to work really hard .. need hell lot of practice... 😵
Shatrughan :Oh brother ! Atleast your arrow went somewhere ..
mine has landed just 5 steps ahead of me .. 😆😆😆😆
Bharat and Ram didnt say anything ... they are just enjoying the convo of the duo ..
and smiling ..
Shatrughan (curiously) : Hey lets count the number of mangoes Ram bhaiya and Bharat Bhaiya shot.. ⭐️⭐️
Lakshman(a bit excited too) : yeah... come .. lets find out..😉
Shatrughan: Hey Lakshman bhaiya ... see i told you na.. Bharat bhaiya will shoot off maximum
mangoes... see thats Bharat bhaiya's arrow and there r so many mangoes here..1,2,3,4....😎
Lakshman(a bit angry again) : No... this is Ram bhaiya's arrow ... see... see..
😡😡😡
Shatrughan: No.. no... wrong !! Its Bharat bhaiya's arrow .. 😡
Lakshman (getting furious @ Shatrughan) : Lets ask Ram bhaiya .. (Looks at Ram) What do you say bhaiya... I m right na ??? 😊
Ram : Lakshman... my dear brother... whatever is mine ... it belongs to u all as well... am i right?? 😳
Lakshman (now very calm) : yeah but... 😲
Ram : Is there any place for If's and But's among foru of us??? 😊😳
Lakshman & Shatrughan (together) : No bhaiya .. 🤔
Ram : So does that matter whose arrow is it??? 😊
Lakshman & Shatrughan : No Bhaiya.. not at all...we are reallly sorry..
we fought again... please forgive us... 😊😊😊
All the three younger ones touched Ram's feet and hugged him and then collected the mangoes
lying on the ground and went back to the Rajmahal ..
Here in Rajmahal...the atmosphere is a bit tensed ... and sad .. 😭
Guru Vashishth has suggested Dashrath ji that Ram and his brothers must attain their education now..
and for this they must be sent to the Gurukul...
Parents are not able to prepare themselves for such a long separation from their children..
But keeping in view the importance of education in life.. King has agreed with guruji's suggestion... and the boys are getting ready to leave for gurukul the very next day .....
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JAI SHREE RAM !!
Edited by Dpka1415 - 13 years ago
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