Hi My new FF - sanyog updt last parts 22/12

Life is a game

It will always plays its style

It is destiny

Whom to met,

Whom to live our life

That 's all destiny decide for us

 

 

This is a story of a girl

Lives with lot of happiness

Fights with all the odds

Takes up the challenges

Ready to fight

Never loose her hope''

But destiny had a different plans for her

But she is ready for that

 

And she is lead of our story

Her name is "PARI"-Angel

She resembles pari helps all

Smiling ,'Sweet,Sensous,Sibbings,Genuine''''

But Strong in her mind,determined'''

Hard core fighter'''''''.

This is her story

The story of life and destination

 

Resembles the charcter of geet ''''''

An replicate  of Geet''''''.

Let us see what destination stored for her

And how the story is going to take part

Will be revealed in coming episodes'.

 

 

And title of my story is "Sanyog"

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Edited by srilu_123 - 12 years ago

Thats Very Nice👏

looks interesting.....will be waiting for it

Wow- Nice start :)
Please update soon.. and do add me to your PM list, thanks.

wowoow.... nyc start....

The  male character resemble Maan Singh Khurana

As usual My fav

The name is just changed to Rahul  Khanna

Which name will be RK

But there will be little later introduction of him''..

So there is lot of wait for him''''''''

 

 

Part 1

Sorrow will be so bad

But sometimes It gives us energy to fight with the odds

But with out pain there will be no happiness

As the end result will be always happiness''''''''

The pain is in both the characters

Lets us see how destiny brings them''''''''..

Let us start the story

A small girl playing in rain

Mama catch me'''.

Pakad kar dekhoo muje

Doondeye muj ko'''..

And a 28 yrs lady with a  sweet smile'''.

Running towards her''''''..

And trying to catch her'''..

They are playing In rain'''''..

It is a  hill station''''

And lady smiling

Pari beta kaha ho tum''''''''..

Accha mama tak Gaye hay

Ab toh ajaaooo

Accha tum jeete mein harii'''

Ab toh ajjaoo'''.

Pls''''''

The girl hugs from the behind'''

Suddenly the mother fells

Mama'..mama the girl is shouting'''''..

The scene shifts::::

 

To the hospital

Mrs sunaina''''.

Mein ne apko pehle bataya

Ke apke bachane ke chances bahut kam hay'''

Ap iss baat ko jaante hay''

Leki doctor mein kya karoon'''..

Mein jaanta hoon mere pass waqt kam hay

Lekin'''

Mere parishani hay meri beti ke liye

Pata nahii iske baat meri beti ka kya hoga''''.

She comes back to house

And she sees pari is sleeping

She kisses her forehead

Muje maaf karo beta

Mere zindagi tujse hi hay

Lekin mere pass waqt bahut kam hay

Muje tere chinta kaa rahi hay

Pata nahi kya karoon''''

And she sees at the Ganapati's idol

Kya karoon bappa ji''''''..

Mere zindagi'''

Mere maa, papa, behen sab kuch hay,'''.

Pyar ne bahut bada dard diya

Apno se peecha chuta'..

Lekin iss e pyar be muje jeene ka ek naam liye''''..

Mere beti ko dekar

Lekin ab wahi mujse mere jaan maang raha hay'''

Isse kasuati par hoo ki mere saath saath mere pari ka bhi'''

Ek sawaal ban kar rahee gayee'''''.

Ab mein kya karoon'''''..

Part ends

 

 

 

 

Edited by srilu_123 - 13 years ago

Everyone

part 2
Her mother takes a box and she opens a cloth

And takes a photograph'''.

Tuu akele nahii hay

Tere pass sab log hay

Lekin darr lagtha hay

Ke kahi mera gussa who tuj par nikhal na dee''''''''.

Lekin pata nahii meree naseeb

Kyaa hoga'''

Mean time she prays to god'..

Maa mein ne pyarr mein dokha kayaa

Sab kuch chod kar yeha par agayee

Lekin mein kya karoon mera beta'..

At that time an middle aged lady comes inside

Sunaina ,,,,,,,,,,

Kya baat hay beta parishaan hoo

Haa daimaa''''''mere zindagi ke baaremein soch kar darr rahi hoo,'''

Aap toh sachaaii'.jaante hoo na''''

Dai maa :dekho beta tujeee yaad yah na '..

Who moorat wala baba ne hamara pari ke liye kya kaha tha.

Ke tumare betee bahut badee hasti banege'..

Zindagi ke har sangursh who ladkar jeetege..

Dekha ek din tuje apne beti par naaz hoga

Sunaina:haa dai maa par who sab dekhne ke liye shayaad mere saase na hogi'''..

And she looks at pari'''

She sighes a bit and takes a letter pad from the notepad

And she writes a letter''''

Maa'''''.

Mein jaanti hoon'.
aaj bhi aap mujse naraaz hay

Aap mere shakal tak dekhna pasand na karenge''''''..

Lekin mein kya karoon maa'''.

Mere pass waqt bahut kam hay

Aur mere beti aur apke natii'''.

Iss duniya bilkull akele hay

Bas ek baar usse dekhiyee'''.

 

Isse jyada mein apse kuch nahii mangoongi''''..

And she looks at the window

At the moon

Pata hay ,,,,,,,tu mere pyarr ke nishani nhay

Gawaa hay mere zindagi ka

Ab toh gawaa banega ''mere beti ke zindagi ke bhi'''.

And she cries ''..

Tears are unstoppable''..

And suddenly she gets a pain'''

And she lies beside pari''.

Next day morning'''''..

Sunaina is in hospital'''

And pari is sitting with diamaa''.

Pari:diamaa''mama kaha hay,,,,,,,,,,,,muje usee dekhna hay'..

Pata hay mein ne sab kaam kardi hay'..

Brush kiya ''''..naha liye''bilkul good girl bane'''

Pls diamaa'''.muje mama ko dekhne hay''.pls daimaa''''''.

And daimaa''..hugs pari''.

Ab mein kya bataan tujko ke tere maa''tuje chod kar bahut door ja chuke hay

Who bhagwaan ke pass chale gayee'''''''''.

Pari is still looking at the window'''''''''..

Looking at moon''..

And asking mere maa kaha hay'''..

By that time the door opens

An old lady enters'''''''

She is Rajeswari devi'''''.

Mother of Sunaina

She looks at pari'''''''..

And diamaa'''aap kaun hay

Mera naam Rajeswari devi..

Aur mein sunaina ke maa''''''''''..

Uske beti ko leene aye hoon''''..

Kaha hay who'''''.

At that time she sees pari'''..

Her eyes is in anger'''''.

And she asks driver to collect her the luggage

And she sits in the car''..

And diamaa'..told pari that she is her naani..

And she need s to go with her''''''

And she convinces that her mother meets there''''''''

And pari sits in car'''''''.

And the car leaves the compound

And enter into a very big compound'''.

On the name''''''''.

Shanti Bhavan''''''''''''

 

Edited by srilu_123 - 13 years ago

really loved it....do contd soon

part3

The car enters into the compound

That is the big haveli

And a lady enters at the door with a girl

And beside another lady also enters she smiles at the car

The second lady was not pleased,''

She is varsha,.,'.sister of sunaina and his husband vivek also stays with her

And the girl is kanika'''''..daughter of them'.

The first lady tries to wish''''

But rajeshwari devi does n't reply to them,

And she comes to pari''''who is looking at them surprisingly'''

She comes to pari and hugs her and takes her to a big room

Pari not in good mood..she wonders where her mom is''''.

She come with a doll in her hand'..try tosmile at kanika but she sees her weirdly'.

At the room pari seems lost'..

She islooking at the window trying to locate her mom'''''''

By that time radha ,,,,,,,,the first lady comes to her'..

She asks who u r

What do u think''''

Pata nahii..please muje mere mama ke pass jaana hay'

Muje yeha acchaa nahii lagtha hay'..

In mean time rajeshwari is talking to thephone

Haa 'who property muje chaiyee..

Radha takes her to the house she introduce smein tumara maami''hoon'.

Aur shekar tumarha mamajihay''..

By that time a 8 yr boy enters and looks at pari''''''

Pari asks him who he was'''..

He replies yuv raaj'''''''''..

Pari asks him kis desh ke'''

He gives a angry look'..

By that time kanika comes there and yuv raaj goes with her''''they are playing outside and pari seeing them.

By that time a bird comes in''.

And kanika sees this and scared and yuv raaj ''''..hits the bird with a stone

By that time pari gets the bird and it saves it''..

Yuv raaj comes to her,'

Yuv raaj:give me the bird'..

Pari:no you would kill her

Yuv raaj:its my place and I can do anything to her'''.

Pari:no I willnot allow you to do'''''''

And pari goes inside with the bird''''

Radha sees this''

Kitne pyarri  bachee bilkul sunaina par gayee hay..

Masoom''.aur acchii'''''..

Yuv raaj and kanika thinks about pari

And make a evil plan''''''''..

They enter into the house with a mudded slippers and they keep the slippers into pari 's shoe racker'''.

RD calls Pari''''''.

Pari comes in'''..

She drags her han d''tere maa ne yeh sikaya hay kya,,,,,,,,,

Shararat bhi karthi hoo'''.

Tumare wajah se eh sab kuch huwa hay'..

Bolo tum ne kiya tha'''

Pari replies her haa,,,,,,,mein ne kiya tha,'''..kyon muje apne mama ke pass jaana hay''.yeha nahii rehna hay''''..

And she cries and leaves from here'''

Yuv raaj sees her surprisingly''''.

And he sees pari is crying with her mama's photo''''''

 

Kabhee Hasna Hai

 Kabhee Rona Hai,

 Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam Hai
Kabhee Patjhad Hai

 Kabhee Sawan Hai

, Yeh Aata Jata Mausam Hai
Kabhee Hasna Hai Kabhee Rona Hai,

 Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam Hai
Kuchh Jine Kee Majburee Hai,

 Kuchh Iss Duniya Kee Rasme Hai
Kuchh Din Hain Khone Pane Ke,

 Kuchh Wade Hain Kuchh Kasme Hain
Ek Bechainee See Har Dam Hai,

Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam Hai
Kabhee Patjhad Hai Kabhee Sawan Hai,

 Yeh Aata Jata Mausam Hai
Koyee Sota Hai Aanchal Ke Tale,

 Koyee Dil Manta Ko Tarasta Hai
Kahee Mayusee Kee Dhup Khilee,

Kahee Pyar Hee Pyar Barasta Hai
Kabhee Dard Hai Toh Kabhee Marham Hai,

 Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam Hai
Kabhee Hasna Hai Kabhee Rona Hai,

 Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam Hai
Gujare Huye Lamho Kee Yade,

Har Wakt Hame Tadpatee Hai
Ek Saya Banke Aatee Hai,

Ek Saya Banke Jatee Hai
Ek Tanhayee Kaa Aalam Hai,

Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam Hai
Kabhee Patjhad Hai Kabhee Sawan Hai,

 Yeh Aata Jata Mausam Hai
Kabhee Hasna Hai Kabhee Rona Hai,

 Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam Hai
Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam

 

 

         

Pari sees a box..

She opens to find a cage '..

She sees and opens and place the bird '.intoit

Acchha tuje kya naam se pookaru'''.

Tere naam hay'''''''..meetoo'''''

And she smiles

Yuv raaj comes there

And says '''

Tum smile karthe waqt bahut acche lagthe hoo'.

Friends'''''.

Pari looks at him'.

And smiles and u resembles a donkey''''.

She also smiles

And they both shake their hands'''''

The story begins

Kabhee Hasna Hai

 Kabhee Rona Hai,

 Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam Hai
Kabhee Patjhad Hai

 Kabhee Sawan Hai

, Yeh Aata Jata Mausam Hai
Kabhee Hasna Hai Kabhee Rona Hai,

 Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam Hai
Kuchh Jine Kee Majburee Hai,

 Kuchh Iss Duniya Kee Rasme Hai
Kuchh Din Hain Khone Pane Ke,

 Kuchh Wade Hain Kuchh Kasme Hain
Ek Bechainee See Har Dam Hai,

Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam Hai
Kabhee Patjhad Hai Kabhee Sawan Hai,

 Yeh Aata Jata Mausam Hai
Koyee Sota Hai Aanchal Ke Tale,

 Koyee Dil Manta Ko Tarasta Hai
Kahee Mayusee Kee Dhup Khilee,

Kahee Pyar Hee Pyar Barasta Hai
Kabhee Dard Hai Toh Kabhee Marham Hai,

 Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam Hai
Kabhee Hasna Hai Kabhee Rona Hai,

 Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam Hai
Gujare Huye Lamho Kee Yade,

Har Wakt Hame Tadpatee Hai
Ek Saya Banke Aatee Hai,

Ek Saya Banke Jatee Hai
Ek Tanhayee Kaa Aalam Hai,

Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam Hai
Kabhee Patjhad Hai Kabhee Sawan Hai,

 Yeh Aata Jata Mausam Hai
Kabhee Hasna Hai Kabhee Rona Hai,

 Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam Hai
Jivan Sukh Dukh Kaa Sangam

Varsha:pehle maa ne jadoo kiya'.bachpan se sab kuch sunaina ke pasand

Khana..soona peena..sab kuch sunaina'..ab agar mein yesee chup chap rahoo toh''''''maa ke bath yeh beti''''.side lelegi'''''''.

And his husband looks at her surprise''''.

At the time'

Kanika comes inside crying

Mama,'..ab toh yuv raaj mujse baat nahiii kar rahaa hay

Varsha:kyon''''yuv raaj tera dost than a'..

Kanika:ha maa.lekin.ab who pari'''.ke saath hay''''

Dekho naa''''..

At varsha sees yuv raaj and pari'playing in rain

Pari all smiling'.

And yuv raaj also smiling'.and playing around'''''

Where radha feels happy''''..

She sees them in anger

Precap:RD decides to send pari to boarding''''..

 

Edited by srilu_123 - 13 years ago