STORY - Khooni Building(completed) - Page 4

neelambari

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Posted: 13 years ago

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ya....i dont remember that name...so cant understand it was the same dig or not from visroms post....sorry.

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visrom

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: chinnu_manikyam
ya....i dont remember that name...so cant understand it was the same dig or not from visroms post....sorry.

See Chinnu....humour is best appreciated when the meaning is hidden. Never mind I'll explain it to you...

DIG Shamsher was played by B P Singh. Daya was saying that DIG is rarely coming to the bureau these days...the underlying meaning is that B P Singh is not coming to direct CID. Got it?

(Who is S??? The other person who handed the suspension order to Daya in Staged Murder - He was DCP, played by Surendra Pal...I was actually clarifying this with Prabha a few days back for something else)

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neelambari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

thanks...now its clear and sorry for inconvenience.

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visrom

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: chinnu_manikyam
thanks...now its clear and sorry for inconvenience.

No inconvenience....😊

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Bhavanab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Wow !!! This was very nice Visrom !! I really liked it and especially the DIG comes less to bureau part !!!

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latha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

dis time ur story is a lot different from all others stories n
think ur story must contain a lot of thrillin suspense more is int rt

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visrom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Thanks for reminding me 😛

Actually the story is half way thru....(4-5 scenes are over) and I am right now overloaded with work and relatives at home. No time for creativity as it requires some tranquility.

Will do it the moment I am free.

(And don't have any expectations)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: visrom
(And don't have any expectations)

Arre why yaar 😕. Don't sound like FW 😃 , thoda expectation to chalega na. 😃

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visrom

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: prabha.

Arre why yaar 😕. Don't sound like FW 😃 , thoda expectation to chalega na. 😃

Pata nahin...I started this one off to kill time and all of a sudden my work came back...good for me but the story hangs there.

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visrom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Story updated on page 1. Thankfully an 'unlike' option is there, so you all are welcome to unlike the 'likes' you had posted to my promo. I am sure most of you would want to do it.

Sorry....waiting for feedback.

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