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STORY - Khooni Building(completed) - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Ohhk Visrom I might be the last one to comment, Sorry dear. Your story was had only 1 lash if I am not wrong not pathetic lab scenes, Abhi Daya together all the time Trio magic there, Sachin used very less and more importantly had a logical reasons for murders so no ways it is a NK SS style story. 

As usual story was beautifully woven involvement of Ravi in the story was superb, story was simple yet has an element of surprise. I liked it good work buddy 😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice Story Visrom Di..👏. N really Sorry for late Reply.....😭

-Apurva
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Cid_hd, there's a full length story on pg 1 of this thread.
Thanks to everyone who has liked/disliked and given feedbk.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh so it's complete...love ur story