I have to say this....i know bachi Fatima beat me to it......OMG... what an imaginatoin👏 ......hats off to you.....i was 😳.and😃.....chaloge mere saath😍.....plz next part......soooo proud of my yaraverian😆 Edited by PerfectYaRav - 13 years ago
Hina .. firstly, I had this HUGE smile reading through the OS .. could imagine it all, like its happening right in front of my eyes!!! 😃 Kaaaaaaash 😍 And by the time I came to the end bit .. and read "tum chalogi mere saath? .. mere ghar?" I gasped, and all I could say & think was OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! 😃 😃
Woh din kab aayega?! 😍 😍 And yes .. like Fati mentioned .. love the title, and now the song is playing in my head!!! 😳
A strange sense of
belonging was clearly visible in his eyes and that said it all... Taken aback by his
unexpected question ,Yami was flustered and wondered if an answer was needed... Secretly ,she had been desperately anticipating this moment
but now when it was here,she felt numb with the sudden joy ....
" Yami ? " he snapped
his fingers " huh ! " she turned red " kya hua ? I completely understand if u
dont want to come ... mai to bas aise hi soch raha tha kyuki maa tumse
milke bohot khush hoti " he said and hoped to convey the underlying
message...
The introvert in him
had always curtailed his strong feelings for her but the positive vibes
he'd been getting from her recently were a strong indication of her
acceptance ...
"nahi
Gaurav ! ....aisi baat nahi hai ..... " she said aloud and when she saw
the smile in his eyes she whispered "I'd love to join you "and said
'...in every sense...' to herself ......
A long silent moment
of celebration followed ,with both rejoicing the beginning of a
confession and this was all they needed for now... an assurance of
togetherness...
~~~
The quiet moment was
disturbed by the workers on the sets...they were preparing for the storm
prediction that night... Gaurav and Yami turned around to watch them
from the railing as they pulled over the covers ... Meanwhile the wind
started to blow strong and her hair was playing havoc on her face...she
initially tucked them behind her ears but soon got irritated and
tried to tie them in a bun ...but when she noticed the disagreeing look
on his face she instantly let them loose...
He smiled
wholeheartedly at her gesture and gently inched towards her till his arm
touched hers ...Her heart galloped a million times and she gasped for air
when he placed his hand in front of her ... She was beginning to
lose grip on her senses with his proximity and couldn't begin to
understand what his hand gesture meant ...
He then leaned towards
her and said " chalo mai tumhe ghar chod deta hoo ... " and softly
whipsered " toofan aane wala hai ... " into her ear,pursing his lips to
control the stubborn smile that crept up involuntarily on sensing her
haywire breath...
She
instantly looked up to face him and their eyes met ...the naughty glint
in his eyes reflected an irresistable smile on her face and soon the
two broke into a chuckle...
The unit members heard their laughter and one of them
shouted out "sir aap log ghar nahi gaye abhi tak? ,jaldi jayiye
warna baarish shuru ho jayegi... "
She sweetly gave him the 'lets go' nod
and he cheekily clutched her hand with his ....
~~~
He waited outside her
make -up room and looked at his watch wondering how long she'd take to
get changed ... Yami on the other hand ,took longer than usual as she
played their terrace moment in her head again and again...
" Yami,aur kitna time
logi change karne me ? " he said knocking on the door after having lost
all patience ....She blinked out of her trance and yelled " bas ho gaya
,do minute "
But
the 2 minutes turned into 5 and she still wasn't out ...he went up to knock on the door again but was left in awe when she opened the door looking gorgeous in a
pretty white knee length dress...She looked simple but beautiful and he couldn't
take his eyes off her ...
" chalein ? " she said ,smiling at his dumbstruck look and he stored her angelic image in his head for a later reference and ushered her out to the main door....
As they walked out of
the sets the song below played on the spot boy's radio ...
Wow Wow !!! Indirectly she agreed to come !! Loved the nuances of the feelings you described !!!😍 Yami in white length knee dress !!! and He couldn't take his eyes off her !!😍 can sooo imagine that !!😍 Fab VM !! Loved the effects you used !!👏
Thanks sooo much yaa!! Yarav keeps our spirits high !! when Episode makes us feel low !!😳
Hina...what a beautiful way to describe their feelings for each other...so subtle but still there...Thanks a lot..needed this after today's episode....please ...need a third part for tomorrow...YaRav's major fight....
Thanks Hina for the second part.........I read this and watched the VM just now.......after I saw today's episode........and it did me good to read and see this! Please continue if you can........ I think we will need a few more one by one as things get more and more serious on the show! 😊
Hina i m ur fan now..r u a writer? i m asking seriously...i was so upsate 2 c today's epi bt ur 2nd pt is so soothing...3rd pt plz jaaaaaldi....plz hina
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