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Posted: 13 years ago
wow nice update.. bhoot scene was nice.. do continue soon
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hey thkxxx for add me and very cute update so nice feeling when geet hugs Maan wow pls update more.
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awesome update...........funny to the core...loved it

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Posted: 13 years ago
  hey dear  
its so funny
and geet and bhoot part was really funny   
well maan ko geet ne chappal se maara oh no my dear poor maan  
well loved it alot dear  
please continue dear  
its realy lovely yaar






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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Yaar
But Geet !!!!!!!!! How could she beat Maan that too with Jhooti
Thats really funny yaaršŸ¤£
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great pone
geet beating maan calling him bhootn ka sardar.
hehhe too good
do continue
bye sumi
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devisha, plz add me 2 ur pm list....
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loved the way geet thought that maan was a ghost!!!
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good update

that was funny..

cont soon..
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Part 12

Geet and maan both reach d layout room and maan makes her sit comfortably on the chair in order for her to work comfortably.....geet feeling very scared puts her head on the table....maan on noticing this gets a glass of water for her to be alryt........


Maan: geet....geet....


Geet: ji sir...!


Maan: geet...lagta hai tum bohot dargayi ho.....tumhari tabiat bhi kharap lagrahi he....dekho tum yeh pani peelo aur tum thodi der ke liye agar chaho toh aaram karsakti ho.........


Geet: hmmm.ji sir...lekin sir main aaram nahin karungi...muhe jaldi kaam khatam karke ghar jaana he.........


Maan: theek he.......!


geet aftr drinking d water gets bk to her real self......maan starts working........geet is drawing d plans whereas maan studies them........suddenly maan calls geet............


Maan: geet zara yahan aana......


Geet: kyun sir...?


Maan: cricket khelne ke liye............


Geet: par mujhe toh cricket khelna aata hi nahin he sir.........


Maan: geet main tumhe kaam ke liye bularaha hoon....mujhe tumse kaam he..........


Geet: oh achcha toh aisa kahiye na......theek hesir main aarahi hoon.......haan boliye sir...kya kaam he...?


Maan: achcha geet yeh plans ko written form main print karna he.......maine likh diya he rough mein..tum sirf use type karo aur print karo.......kaafi sara type karnahe toh jaldi karo.....


Geet: uff kitna kaam dete he (she murmurs)...


Maan: kya?? tumne kuch kaha?


Geet: nahin sir.........


Maan: ok ab jao aur kaam karo............


geet starts working wen maan starts looking at her....maan smiles and feels a gud feeling in seeing geet in frnt of him working...he smiles wide....he just gets lost in her innocence.........very innocently she wrks...dis attracts maan a lot...he sees geet settling her hair.........banging her head on her hand aftr making a mistake.....these thngs make maan attached to her ..suddenly maan cums bk to reality world.......n says....


Maan: yeh main kya karraha hoon...?...kaam toh mujhe bhi karna he....main iss ladki ke taraf kyun dekhraha hoon......maan...focus...focus.........!!!


Geet on the odr hand while typing cant understand the handwriting of the person who has written what to be printed so she goes to take help from maan..........


Geet: sir....mujhe aapse ek help chahiye.........


Maan: kya hua geet?


Geet: sir yeh kya likha he mujhe samajh me nahin aarahahe....


Maan: tumhe yeh samjh me nahin aaraha he...?


Geet: haan sir.....kaise samajh me aayega........kitna ghatia handwriting me likha he....lo batao aise handwriting me koi likhta he kya bhala.....pata nahin kisne likha he.......samajh mein hi nahin aata......


Maan: kya? kya kaha tumne......yeh handwriting kharap he.....btw yeh handwriting meri he....


Geet: huhhhhh...yeh hand writing aapki he sir...?...sir kaisi handwriting he aapki...aapki teacher ne aapko school me handwriting practice karna nahin sikhaya kya...?


Maan: geeeeeet...


Geet: uppp...sorry sir........khair woh sab chodiye na...mujhe bataiyye na yeh kya likha he aapne.......?


Maan: dekho geet kafi saara he toh yeh main padhke nahin suna sakta hoon...toh iss part ko main hi type kardeta hoon...........theek he...?


Geet: haan sir...theek he........!


Maan goes to type the portion wich geet cudnt type......geet on the odr hand is standing behind maan and sees him typing...suddenly geet notices dat maan has made a typing error..........and has made a big error in typing..she tells maan to rectify it.....


Geet: sir yeh aap kya karrahe he...itni bari galati......laiyye sir main aapki madat karti hoon.......


geet while helping maan places her hand over maan's hand over d mouse...as soon as she places her hand on maan's hand maan immediately closes his eyes....as if her touch passed current thru his body...he never experienced this feeling ever b4....he feels sumthng very special and divine wich he cudnt explain in wrds........he opens his eyes and says in his mind...........


Maan: yeh kya horaha he tujhe maan...? jab bhi yeh ladki tujhe chooti he mujhe aisa kyun lagat he ki mera iske saath koi khaas rishta he....kyun iske chune se meri dil ki dhadkane tez hojati he.......kyun iski ek baar chune se aisa lagat he ki yeh waqt yehi pe thamjaaye.........kyun...kyun...aakhir aisa kya rishta he mera iss ladki ke saath............


Geet removes her hand and says..............maan is still looking at her..........


Geet: sir hogaya.....


seeing maan lost...........


Geet: sir...sir...kaam hogaya...


Maan; upppp....haan geet bolo.........


Geet: sir kaam hogaya........ab aap jaiyye baki ka main karlungi.............


Maan: theeek he.........(maan in his mind)...main yahan se uthke kaam pe focus karta hoon varna main yaha iske saath bethkar paagal hojaunga.......


Maan gets up nd leaves and geet starts working as usual...maan gives a slightest look at geet thru his eyes and gets bk to wrk again...maan again luks at geet bt to his surprise he sees geet dozin off to sleep as she isreally very tired.............maan on noticing distries to go near her and help her out but tkes bk his steps thinking she myt nt lyk it..........maan sits down and geet who is almost sleepy gets up suddenly and says dat.......


Geet: geet...kaam...geet kaam.jaldi khtam kar aur jaa..........


maan on the odr hand noticing dis decides to do sumthng for her making her feel better...he gets up nd leaces again....geet on the odr hand has finished all her work and in her mind says......


Geet: hmmmm...saara kaam toh khatam hogaya he......raat ke 12 bajgaye he...ab ghar jaate jaate bohot late hojaiega...dm bhi pareshan hojaegi.........mujhe sir ko kehke nikal jaana chahiye.........abhi bolti hoon inhe.......


Geet turns arnd and to her horror sees maan not dere...she again gets scared.....


Geet: huhhh...yeh maan sir kahan chale gaye.........phir se mujhe chodkar chale gaye....mujhe toh lagta aaj yeh mujhe darakar hi chodenge......mujhe toh lagta hai ki iyeh mujhe darane ke iraade semujhe yahan pe leke aaye he........yeh shayad unka hi plan hoga......lagtalight bhi unhone hi off kiya hoga......hamesha apne maan me mere khilaf saazish rachte rehte he............aaj agar unki saazishon ka parda phash nahi kia toh mera naam bhi geet nahin.....Hey Babaji mujhe shakti do ki main maan sir ke khilaf awaaz utha sakun...


Maan cums bk wid coffee for geet...geet dsnt notice dat as she is furious on maan.......


Maan: geet...dekho main....


Geet: main...main kya haan...main kya?...mujhe pata he aap aap he.....aap kyun he....???


Maan: kya...?...kya kehrahi ho...pagaal hogayi ho kya...?


Geet: haan...pagal toh main hihoon na...baki sab bhi pagal he...ek aap hi normal he............


Maan: geet yeh tum kya bakwaas karrahi ho.........


Geet: haan haan...bakwaas toh main hi karti hoon...


Maan: geet.....


Geet; mujhe pata he mera naam geet he....


Maan: geet ho kya gaya he tumhe...?


Geet: aap kahan gaye the sir.....kisi yatra pe gaye the kya...?


Maan: geet main woh....


Geet: sir dekhoye yeh galat baat he...agar aapko mazak karna hi he toh kisi aur cheez ke saath kariye lekin aisa ghatia mazak bilkul nahin...geet aisi na insaafi nahin sahegi....kitne battameez he aap...aapne mere saath aisa kia kaise....


Maan: ab maine kya kiya geet........


Geet: sir aap mere saath aise kaise karsakte he...ek akeli ladki ko akele chodke jaane me aapko sharam nahin aati...


Maan in his mind..........


Maan: ooo.....toh ise phir se darr lagraha he....achcha....


haan toh.....chodke gaya toh....


Geet: hhhuuuhh..kaise besharam insaan he aap.....ek akeli ladki ko chodke chale gaye tehelne ke liye......


Maan: lekin maine toh suna tha ki geet bakshi ko darr nahin lagta he....


Geet in her mind...


Geet: dekha...baatein sunane ka koi mauka nahin chodte.........ab toh mujhe shak nahin yakeen hogaya he ki yeh sab unki hi saazish thi apne aap ko sahi saabit karne ke liye ki mujhe darr lagta he..........


Maan: haan toh sach toh yehi he na ki tumhe darr lagta he......aur kya kaha tumne..?...saazish...aur main?


Geet: haan....saazish aur aap........aapka aur saazish ka toh gehra rishta he.......din raat pata nahin aap kais ulti seedhi saazishe rachte rehte he......aur mujhe pata he ki aaj aapne hi light off kiya he ...aur woh ajeebo gareeb kisam ki awaazein bhi apne hi ki thi haan......


Maan: kyaaaa.???...kya bakwaas karrahi ho....?


Geet: abhi toh aapne kaha ki aap mujhe yahan pe akela chodke chale gaye...........


Maan: haan toh iska matlab yeh nahin he yeh sa bakwass jo tum kehrahi ho woh sach he...samjhi tum....aur main yeh sab kyun karrvaunga....?


Geet: achcha...aap toh ek bhi mauka nahi chodte mujhe tang karne ka lekin iss bar bhi main haar nahin manungi....shart laga kar dekhlijiye.....


Maan: phir se shart....???


Geet: kyun dargaye....aap?


Maan: nahin...darr nahin...tumhari shart haarne ke record se main yeh kehraha hoon...phir se shart lagaugi toh haar jaogi...yaad nahin pichli shart bhi tum haar gayi thi...


Geet; woh main nahin harri thi...woh toh apne jaan boojh ke harvadiya.........aur waise bhi aap jaie log toh dusro ki madat karna jante hi nahin...sirf nuksaan karsakte he logo ka...........


Maan gets extremely angry and says.........


Maan: kya? kya kaha tumne?...main aur nuksaan kisi aur ka..?...yeh sab jo tum kehrahi ho woh sab galat he geet...aur main tumhe akela chodke isiliye gaya tha ki tumhe neend arahi thi aur taki tum thak na jao main tumhare liye coffee laane gaya tha........aur mujhe koi shauq nahin tumhe darane ka...darpok ko alag se darane ki zaroorat nahin he...


Geet: kya? kya kaha aapne...? aap mere liye coffee lane gaye the... woh bhi mere liye....?..huh!..lagta hai aaj suraj paschim se nikla he...


Maan: yakeen nahin hota toh table me para hai dekhlo.....


geet looks at d table...it ws really dere...she mkes a shocking expression....


Geet: huh...sir yeh sach me mere liye coffee leke aaye the........sorry sir.....mujhe pata nahin tha...


Maan: tumhe toh kabhi bhi kuch pata nahin hota hai...jab bhi bolti ho galat bolti ho...


Geet in her mind...


Geet: yeh maine kya kardiya?.....sir ko galat samjh liya.......geet tu bewaja itna kyun bolti he.....


Maan: dekho geet.......yeh sab phaltu baatein karna band karo...aur yeh batao ki tum uthi kyun?


Geet: sir im sorry sir...woh kya he na...kabhi kabhi main kuch zyada boldeti hoon........aur woh sir main isilye uthi thi kyunki mujhe ghar jana he sir...kaam hogaya he sir...aur waise bhi kafi raat hogayi he..........ab itni raat ko do akeli ladkiyan ghar kaise jayengi.....???


Maan: kyaaa?do ladkiyan...?


Geet: haan sir do ladkiyan...main aur meri dhanno......


Maan: dhanno?...dhannno aur ladki...geet tum sach me pagal ho............dhanno ladki kaise ho sakti he....dhanno ladki nahin scooty he....


Geet: hhhuhh ......sir dhannno meri sabse pakki saheli he...use scooty kehke uski insult mat kijiye........aur Babaji na karey....ki raaste me mujhe kuch hojaye yah phir dhanno ko.........toh kaun zimmedar hoga.....?


Maan: kya..? tumhare dhanno ko kuch nahin hoga........aur kuch ho bhi gaya toh kya farq parta hai........


Geet: mujhe parta he..............


Maan: toh phir tum kya chahti ho....??


Geet: sir main ghar jaana chahti hoon...aur woh bhi jaldi........


Maan: toh phir theek he...jao..maine kab roka he........


Geet in her mind.........


Geet: kaise zaalim insaan he........ekbar haske bye bhi nahin bola..main bhi kisse umeed rakh rahi hoon....iss..iss khadus khurana se...........aur meri dhanno ki bhi insult kardi.........iska badla toh main kal lungi aapse maan sir...........chodungi nahin aapko.......


Maan in his mind....


Maan: ufff..kaisi ladki he...scooty ko saheli samjhti he....musibat me yeh nahin paregi...mujhe toh lagta he dusro ko musibat me dalna seekh gayi he aajkal..sach me gharr jane ke liye itna sar natak..nautanki queen geet...aur achcha hua geet jo tumne mujhe uss shart ke bare me yaad diladiya..uss shart ko toh maine jeeta hai na...uss ka istemal main sahi waqt aane par karunga......


Maan suddenly stops geet....geet thinks he is gng to say bye.....


Maan: geet rukjao....


Geet: huh...mujhe bye kehne ke liye roka he....


Maan: geet tum kal subha ko...


Geet: huh...arey yeh toh bye nahin....mujhe kal hir se subha 7.30 baje bulane le liye rokrahe he......kaise insaan he...itne raat ko khatam karke bhi yeh subha bularahe he aur woh bhi itni jaldi....berehem insaan kahike.........inse ummed karna bekar he sach me.......


Maan: geet agar tum chaho toh tum kal subha 9 baje aasakti ho...itne der tak kaam kiya he toh thoda rest karlo aur waise bhi tumhari tabiat theek nahin lagrahi he...........toh tum 9 baje aajana...lekin uske baad late mat hona...........plz....


Geet(in his mind)..: arey yeh kabse sudhar gaye ...achanak raavan se ram kaise bangaye..arey wah...very good bhooton ka sardar....keep it up...meri sangat me rehkar aap sach me insaan banna shuru hogaye he.........wah...wow geet aaj tum sopaogi achche se...haye...chal geet jaldi chal isse pehle ki yeh kahe ki ek aur kaam rehgaya hai...kyunki inhe mujhse meri khushi dekhi nahin jaati...inka dimag sirf kabhi kabhi kaam karta he woh bhi jab main achche se dose deto hoon toh....


Maan: geet toh kal subha aajana......il see u 2mrw........


Geet was in a rush so in a rush she runs frm dere and shouts while leaving...


Geet: ok sir..main aajaungi sir..app tension ma lena...main late nahin aaungi...bye sir..bye....


geet leaves and seeing geet's innocent stupidity..........he smiles and says..........


Maan: bye geet..... good nyt.............!!!


Geet leaves and maan gets engrossed in geet's thoughts.........
Edited by swthrtdevisha - 13 years ago