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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Pocahontas



Oye! It's been so long since somebody has called me 'Nitz'. πŸ₯³........You liked my OS? GREAT! We just need a bout of jealousy with SR , not something bitter. My dil is bada than Cvs.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†....i'll write the next part soon. πŸ˜ƒ

NitZ,πŸ˜ƒ
Aaj kal Tumhara Dhyaan nahi hain coz in every post of yours i call you NitZ.😊
Agreed with your Views about Jealousy.Clap
Next part to Banta hain.πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: 211su

Poco it was simply beautiful and heart wrenching, an amazing and brilliant piece of work 😳. Your writing is pure magic. The sad smile and the lines that follow, it's so beautiful. Thank You ..!!



Thanks a lot Suppoo!πŸ€—.....I hope it was in in sync with SR as we see them. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
 
 
pocsy this was gripping and soo heartwrenching😭😭..and yet it was soo beautiful...............loved the way you brought out the true essence of the characters and thier emotions..............sid being sid ,riddhima still battling her feelings.........and the dialogues were brilliant ............
 
can we please please please see this word by word in DMG.......pocu  kucch bhi karke can we see it in the show,creatives read read
 
i can soo see a similar scene happening in DMG pretty soon and hope that it is as good as what you have given us
 
 you bring life with your writing ...........the characters are soo aliveπŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
pocu sis this is awesome!!πŸ‘πŸ‘ ..i loved it!..great one shot!..but then this is what expected from you!πŸ€—..cause you are a brilliant writer ..whenever you write something you narrate it so wonderfully..and it's so deep and meaningful!..and it touches our hearts!..please continue soon 😳..i will eagerly wait for it..😳

btw i love the light hearted humor you show in your other topics too!..so it would be great to read a one shot of yours with some comic sense!..😊

Edited by ka7eela - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: sun29

 
 
pocsy this was gripping and soo heartwrenching😭😭..and yet it was soo beautiful...............loved the way you brought out the true essence of the characters and thier emotions..............sid being sid ,riddhima still battling her feelings.........and the dialogues were brilliant ............
 
can we please please please see this word by word in DMG.......pocu  kucch bhi karke can we see it in the show,creatives read read
 
i can soo see a similar scene happening in DMG pretty soon and hope that it is as good as what you have given us
 
 you bring life with your writing ...........the characters are soo aliveπŸ‘πŸ‘




Thanks a lot, Sunny. πŸ€—.....At least in our fiction , we can keep SR as we have always seen them. Like you, even I hope that we get to see something on similar lines between SR and soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ka7eela

pocu sis this is awesome!!πŸ‘πŸ‘ ..i loved it!..great one shot!..but then this is what expected from you!πŸ€—..cause you are a brilliant writer ..whenever you write something you narrate it so wonderfully..and it's so deep and meaningful!..and it touches our hearts!..please continue soon 😳..i will eagerly wait for it..😳

btw i love the light hearted humor you show in your other topics too!..so it would be great to read a one shot of yours with some comic sense!..😊



Oyeeeeeeeeeeee! You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ€—.... it's been so long.😳😳😳😳😳

I take yours words as a compliment of honour since you yourself are so good at portraying SR's passion and intensity. I am going to continue it soon. πŸ˜ƒ......i'll write a comic OS with SR and ArShi by weekend . Promise.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
You wrote an Os!!! You wrote an OS. !! Yay!! πŸ₯³ *dances around happily*
okay, coming to the content it was fantabulous!!!
I loved it!! I can SO see Ridz reacting like this if SS hug! !!
Amazing I loved Sid's reply!! So true!!
Now coming to another request plzz continue it !! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
JUST PM me whenever u updated OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Pocahontas



<font size="3" color="#ff0066">Oyeeeeeeeeeeee! You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ€—.... it's been so long.😳

I take yours words as a compliment of honour since you yourself are so good at portraying SR's passion and intensity. I am going to continue it soon. πŸ˜ƒ......i'll write a comic OS with SR and ArShi by weekend . Promise.
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awww..thanks sis! 😳 ..you are such a sweet heart!! πŸ€—..and i will be waiting for both the update and the new OS! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
hi

thanks for updating the OS Pocu, its surely getting more and more interesting, looking fowrad to know what happens next and does Rids finally let go off her emotions fully and tell Sid why she is feeling so jealous

norzar