nice shot
do write more
love
Riddss
Lol you dedicated it to urself since ur bday is coming up??? And ya it is quite short. haha yep. i've dedicated it to myself π
It's not exactly sad but it just makes you ponder. Hmm and well there are no lines and it's pretty much a narration hence it's a bit different.
Okay Armaan's a quiet painter who has been admiring her from afar and keeps obsessing over her? Seems very different from the DMG Armaan but nonetheless its a good characterization. Altho to me he seems a bit like a loser. π i won't put it so crudely, but yes he is a loser π
All in all though it was a very different yet good OS :)
And its not trashy.
Originally posted by: missypatel
hmm...something it was...none of it felt like it came from you :D but it was a decent read!
It was AR allrite, now lets see you write AS/KaSh ...(they are not the same for me anymore and many others i would think)
nij
Originally posted by: nidha1983
woah Neetz its really touching one sad to know whom he likes is someone else love so sadThanks Nidha
Originally posted by: Zaynoo2320
Wow Neetz. my heart beats are fast after reading these. Heartbreaking but so...wonderful. Loved it Neetz, amazing job.
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