'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144 - Page 112

Part 23:

I'm not going to do my typical thing for this part since it was tiny. Honestly, I had to read the first paragraph like 20 times to understand that it was a cricket reference. I was like "WTC" when I read it. Haha… that goes to show that cricket and I don't mesh very well. I loved Maan soo much!! Omg! "Maan looked up in confusion...Had she said "I fell fast and hard for you" or "I fell fast and hard on you". His ears were still buzzing." That had me cracking up! Poor Maan! Oh well, he deserves it. Geet has the freedom to do whatever she wants, with whoever she wants. Aww… Maan is such a jealous baby! Seriously! Worrying about Horlicks! This part was cute and I loved "Horny Ronnie" as much as I'm disgusted by his nickname. Can't wait for more Ronnie!

Part 24:

Dialogues:

"…Are you planning to attack me again? That's your favorite sport I suppose"

"How about we buy you a roll of chewing gum to keep your mouth occupied and prevent unnecessary verbal showdowns?" Maan suggested.

To have a decent conversation with Geet without jabs, taunts and sarcasm was like expecting Micheal Jackson to unlearn Moonwalk, like expecting Bush and Osama to have picnic together.....

At least a 'you look fine' would have done but all he came up with was a 'something is odd'.

Comments:

This part was really touching. It started off funny and light and started taking an emotional turn towards the middle. The end was cute. I like how they're both jealous, but only one of them is willing to admit it. Geet knows that she's jealous because she didn't know about previous "girlfriends" while Maan doesn't like 'Horny Ronnie' near Geet but can't understand why. The best part for me was when Maan was talking about Sameer. That was really sweet. I got kinda emotional myself. I'm glad that Geet can see this side of him and hopefully Maan will tell her Sameer's story soon. I don't want Geet asking first though, since it's a sensitive topic. Awww… Shayari is so cute. I wanna be in Geet's place! Lucky gal! Once again, hope your PC can make it back alive. Waiting for the next update!

wow pallo di that was such an emotional update. how Maan was missing sameer. aww buddy i know how u feel. main bhi apni best friend ko bohot miss karti and lol know she didn't die she lives in my country.

omg dear wat a update just fallen in love wid dis part that horse Riding sequence was just too good. that adds charm to it

Aww pallo ,, that was awesomw ... you managed to get in a horse ride as well .. fantastic ... this is another facet of Maan .... loved it .. !!

poor geet....loves him so much and is accepting the fact that he doesn't love her and trying to move one...i feel bad for her...

Hi! I just started to read your ff and am working my way through the update, and i love them. Can you please pm me whenever you update?(Or create a second thread?) thanks

amazing update!! loved it...do cont.soon and hope your PC will get well soon lolz

swwetheart.....tum hari paass kya koi ideas ki box hain...ager ahin toh ...plz send it for meee..😉...tum bhejo geee na sirf merin khatir..🤓...okey drama baad main kerti hooo..😉...pehle tarif ki liye tashrif bulati hooo...😎....boht majeder...👍🏼..ek dum ice-cream ki tarha.....❤️

Hi,

I just started reading your FF among many others (I am new to the forums) so I don't have much to comment on, however it seems that this weekend of mine is going to be dedicated to all the FFs on this forums. Oh! what a wonderful world- Maneetland. Once I have read a few parts I will comment in detail. Please add me to your PM list.

awsum....dat was superb!!!!

loved iT!!

update sooN!!