MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin.

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Posted: 15 years ago

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-sam-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#352

Finally......he confessed....
though because of alcohol...he confessed....
Now I really cant wait from reading further..
continue soooon .....

Initially I was like, both are so stubborn , both love each other,
both care for each other
both can understand the unsaid words...
but still...Ego problem or may be the Pain...

It was fantastic update..
What a relief, I mean after answering 4 papers continuously, i got a Mayurish treat..
Thank you....

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@-SMay31-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#353

OMG wat a wondeful post it jst may day...fianlly mayank says i l u :D i knw nupz gona practical nd all but plz plz show some thing romantic then she can go 2 her self lolzz...cont soooon :D

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naina

@naina0123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#354

Finally!!!

Thank god he confessed..alcohol to the rescue!

It was very hard to see mayank n nupur blaming themselves..especially mayank..not everyone can handle sadness n pain very well..n that exactly what happened with mayank...crashing the car??that not the mayank we knoe..but stil it is so perfectly justified..

so n so months n so n so days n so n so hours of loneliness n non-togetherness??inspite of staying together..beautifully expressed Aki..

*sigh* at least now he confessed!better ate than never..its would be interesting to see how things prooceed further...the aftermath..

OMG!dont tell me Mayank wont remember any of this???!!that wont happen,will it??

Will wait for the next update to find that out..

As usual..very well written Ak..u keep gettin better with evry update!

way to go gal!!

🤗

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The-chosen-one

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Posted: 15 years ago

#355

resss

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i m fool... u know this... don't you?... of course u do.... damn it!... i missed this!

freak,..... i was waiting for this moment to happen in this flick since long time and i missed it.... m sorry.... it was such a foolish TT of mine... u know i read this part at night on my mom's cell.... which i stole to read this update coz on computer i m only given 15 minutes on forum.... this is another way of my dad to keep me away from forum...😔

finally he confessed.... i wanna thank alcohol for doing at least one good thing... lol...

first thing first... u know what i loved the most... wait i'll quote it...

Err, he wondered if the highway authorities planted the trees only to save people like him. He loved her. He wondered when he had put the seat belt on. And why had he done that? He still loved her. He concentrated on the loud stereo. He loved her very much and she didn't. He tried to mouth the lyrics of the song. She thought his love was pretentious. He thought about his office work. She had told him to go away from her life. He tried to recollect when the next meeting with his client was scheduled. She didn't love him. He hoped his mother was better now. He still loved her. He reflected that his office needed some cleaning to be done. He still loved her. He did. And silence.

u know why? because it was so realistic... at a moment there are thousand things that pass our mind, even in the moment of nearing death... i experienced it...lol... u made it so visible by the fluctuating thoughts of mayank.... *salute*... seriously... this one is for the writers to learn something from u... thanku for the lesson sweetie... oops... no sweetie... devils 😈

love ya mwaah mwaah mwaah...
your's and only your's
*D*

p.s.- ps(S) returns 😉

p.s.s.- i miss u sooooooooo much... kabhi din hote the we used to talk whole day... man i miss those days... kash! itni padhaiyan na hoti..😭

p.s.s.- i love u..... love u soooooo much 🤗

p.s.s.s.-i love u again😊

p.s.s.s.s.- i love u more 😊 😊

p.s.s.s.s.s-arre... i love u even moreeeeeee 😊

p.s.s.s.s.s- love u till the end 😊 ❤️ mwaah!!!!

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aswathy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#356

it was a wonderful update...both loved each other madly but cant confess to each other....feeling very bad 4 them....hope they get out of this mess soon.....

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Sonam Mathur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#357

this one just made me cry ... the pain, they are suffering and the whole depth was just out of the world .... loved it completely ... i don't have the right words to explain my feelings ... beautiful ....

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iHeartMoi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#358

Wow Akansha!!
Lovely part hun. I've never read something like this on MN.. I want them to patch up soon :P Can't wait for the next update.
Update sooooon!

-Ayesha

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 15 years ago

#359

Amazin update Akanksha..

i am in regular touch with ur FF.. viz my cell..

and truely , u are amazin writer..i jus love ur style n the way u penn down the eventz..it just bring the entire emotionz crystal clear..

way to go gurl.. :) :)

okk..enough of my blabberinn'..cumin to the update

It was fab. n ur previous chapter was my personal fav. ..i loved the way mayank-nupur reacted , n not tryin to look from each-other's eyes ..but happy lukin the world with their own

n now mayank tryin to hurt himself...or better said , kill himself ...awesum display of turmoil...!! :D :D

n loved the care Nupur showerz on mayank...jab pyaar kiya toh darna kya... [ hope they get this line]

n mayank drunken.....wow...

but plzz dnt make them forget momentz spend , when they wake up the nxt day...puhhleeeejjj

Wayy to goo...amazin update. :) :) :)

Edited by ruchimayur - 15 years ago