Originally posted by: swati2008
awesome part yaar.........loved naku n nupur scene.......awaiting for tasha meeting........neways does the side story related to dutta n baaji's past.............
Originally posted by: PremLeoManav
Nice yaar..........Loved it............UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gr8 part!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳
hii...i m new reader......really nice concept.....seems interesting........reaaly enjoying reading nakku and dutta in totally changed characters......plzz add me to ur pm list
Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray
😈 I got a chance to criticize somebody's FF, I will surely do a post mortem with it😆
I hope tumhe mere SS ka post mortem karne ka mauka na mile ..😆😆
Chalo let me start with my criticism😆
I was totally confused with the "Another Story" , who are these peolple?😕
U will get to knw later ,,,its not dat confusing yaar ...😉
Now the good things😳
1. Fast paced, short and to the point.......which I like the most😃
2. Loved Nakusha-Nupur part, the way Nupur was teasing Naku is very sweet😛
So Nupur and Mayank is here? 😃 I love them very cute couple😛
Me luv mayur too ,,,but they r only mostly Nupur as fillers ..
(P. S. : one of my suggestion: don't bring much characters, I feel very very confused when I see many characters in a FF, sometimes I skip reading the paras which don't have hero/ heroine/ villain😆. I usually love to read more about the main characters, but I know other characters are needed for the story)
I knw yaar ,,,,but this side story was important ,,so started it ...but it will all b clear in the next few parts ..& so will b the the characters ..!😉
3. Loved the Datta-Ayi part, very sweet relationship.
4. Specially loved the Baaji part, the mystery behind the pic is really haunting me, want to know more about it😃
Bas thoda intezaar ....matlab kuch parts ka ..😆😆
5. Finally Shabz, you are such a chhupa rustam, where are other Krazzians? we need to grill you for "chhupaying your talent"😆
Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ,,,,no grilling ...😛
I guess the Krazzziens r busy ,,,haven't seen them 4 a long time ....only u & Lekha is here ..
Nadz to pata nahi ,,,,where has she disappeared ..!😆
Originally posted by: skavitha08
i read two parts ages ago but was not able to comment as my net was goin crazy now its der so read the third part too
as i already told u that ur ff is too good as it is completely different from the original one loved it will wait for the next update 😍
Originally posted by: Additi...
Olalalala....Finally i am done reading it.......
You SS is still nameless 😲.....lazinness or run of names 🤔...😆
Both ....😆😆
Oye hoye....Deadly Triangle...🤓....Nakku+Datta+Baaji =????? 😆
This nakky is already feelling goshee goshee for baaji...😳..humare datta ka kiya hoga...😒
wahi hoga jo main chahungi .....!🤣
........Aweosome updates.........Continue soon and PM me
Will update soon & added ...!😉
luv
Pari
😎
Originally posted by: nabilamubeen
hii...i m new reader......really nice concept.....seems interesting........reaaly enjoying reading nakku and dutta in totally changed characters......plzz add me to ur pm list
Hi Nabeela ...😃
Thanx 4 reading ...I m glad dat u liked it ...😳
will defo PM u next time ..!
JIO JIO MERE YAAR😃
have read all parts..very good story🤗
Ab jaldi update karna ....mai yaha aati nahi iska matlab yeh nahi mein parhti nahi 🤣
good job keep going!😃
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