TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 9

  You know  what???

 I like the way you put plots and sub plots in the same thing

Me LIKE IT

😆 Nupur bole toh...the one from MJHT right? 😉 at first i wasnt sure but then when she said "by god"...i knew it 😆😆😆...but 😲 what a side story...i cant wait to find out exactly how its related to the main story...all these new characters and stuff...wow!!! really good...cant wait for next part...

Originally posted by: -Fivr-

Aaj araam sey parh hi li maine! 🤣

Shukar hai ....u finally got time ..🤣

Baji and Dutta have some skeletons buried among them don't they? I can't wait to know what it is that made Baji so vindictive towards Dutta and I feel Dutta's a little "guilty" about it too - he doesn't seem very angry. But I could be wrong. Can't wait though!

Yup he is not angry but  Dutta guilty ....U  think so ,,,he can b..😉

And Nakku k dil-o-demag pe Baji aur Dutta na qabza kar liya hai! That was so much fun - and I loved how you described her remembering each guy by the mark left on her body due to their meetings.

So Nakku's going to a club "tonight" and since Baji is a "piyak-kar" I am guessing he'll be there?
Haaaahahaaa ....read to knw ....!😆
 Maybe Dutta too? Who knows - but I'm waiting to find out! 🤣
Who knws ..!😉

Thanx 4 reading ,,,will update soon ..!😉

Originally posted by: Irika95

it was great shabzz...waiting for the next part Tasha meeting 😍

Thanx Irika ...😳
Yup TaSha  meet next part..
will update soon ..!😉

Originally posted by: shonapinky

Too gud shabz...luvd  naku-nupur scene loadz...awaitng ur next update...!!😊

Thanx Shona ..😳

Will update soon ...!😉

Originally posted by: betty123

shabz awsum part .................... update soon⭐️

Thanx betty ...
yup will try to update soon ..!😉

Edited by Dew-drop - 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

  You know  what???

Yup ,,,tellmee ..😆

 I like the way you put plots and sub plots in the same thing

Thanx a lot Lekhu ...😳

Me LIKE IT

Originally posted by: jnawaz

😆 Nupur bole toh...the one from MJHT right? 😉 at first i wasnt sure but then when she said "by god"...i knew it 😆😆😆...
Yup its Nupur 4rm mJHT ,,,but only as a filler ..
& By God ,,,Nupur takia kalam ,,,couldn't help adding it ..!😆
but 😲 what a side story...i cant wait to find out exactly how its related to the main story...all these new characters and stuff...wow!!!
Yup they related ....may b u all will b able to  guess in the future parts ..😉
really good...cant wait for next part...

 

JAZ

Thanx Jaz ...😳
will try to update soon ....!

awesome part yaar.........loved naku n nupur scene.......awaiting for tasha meeting........neways does the side story related to dutta n baaji's past.............

😈 I got a chance to criticize somebody's FF, I will surely do a post mortem with it😆

Chalo let me start with my criticism😆

I was totally confused with the "Another Story" , who are these peolple?😕

Now the good things😳

1. Fast paced, short and to the point.......which I like the most😃

2. Loved Nakusha-Nupur part, the way Nupur was teasing Naku is very sweet😛
So Nupur and Mayank is here? 😃 I love them very cute couple😛

(P. S. : one of my suggestion: don't bring much characters, I feel very very confused when I see many characters in a FF, sometimes I skip reading the paras which don't have hero/ heroine/ villain😆. I usually love to read more about the main characters, but I know other characters are needed for the story)

3. Loved the Datta-Ayi part, very sweet relationship.

4. Specially loved the Baaji part, the mystery behind the pic is really haunting me, want to know more about it😃

5. Finally Shabz, you are such a chhupa rustam, where are other Krazzians? we need to grill you for "chhupaying your talent"😆

Nice yaar..........Loved it............UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gr8 part!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳