I'll win! Either by Hook or Crook. NOTE pg 12

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi people. me again. so my name is saniya those who don't know me and i currently write 'My Mr. A...'  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1363272
and now i am starting another armaan riddhima short story.
INTRO:
What happens when a pretty, witty and sexy basketball coach has make her team win the tournament at any cost? but she has to compete against the hot, dashing and smart coach who has never learnt to loose.
Armaan Mallik has it's own way of winning and lets see how desperate to win Riddhima Gupta faces the arrogant coach of the opponent team. If armaan has it's way then riddhima shouldn't be underestimated as well. But they both are determined and promised themselves by saying: I'll win! Either by Hook or Crook!!!
 
So guys tell me how is intro and if i should continue it or not. comments/ critisism welcomed.
love
Saniya😃
intro- upar dekho
part 1- pg 9
 
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Posted: 14 years ago
intresting good startEdited by moonlight2630 - 14 years ago
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contine..i read MR..A too. only read part 2 ..yet when i will finished ...i 'll post the comment
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heya sweety...congrats girl..2nd FF....yes please continue...i wanna read more...

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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG amezing concept..cant wait to read more..update soon..cant wait to read....do pm me wenever u udpate..
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Wohooo Now thats unique My dearly Basket ball Coach Vaddiya dimag hai tera *muah* !!
Yeah COntinue Ji..AND Oh yesh...Dont even think of not continuing !!
I want this Unique concept yaar !!
U knw my crave for 'unique' concepts rite?
So get goin Sanz !!
ALL They Very Best !



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Posted: 14 years ago
sometimes i wonder why can't i keep 'normal' names for my ff. like u know those love/pyaar ones. my ff's title has to be odd/ wierd. lol
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HEYY DEAR
NICE CONCEPT
N PLZZ ADD ME TO UR PM LIST
THXX
LUV DHRUVIKA
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Posted: 14 years ago
good startt sani:)
continuee soon..and cant wait to read further;)
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Continue...soon,,, 😃